savvy's Characters

Name: Sorray
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Jade green
Hair: long and black always in a pony
Height: 5 foot 6 in.
Body Type: Stron and willowy
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Jessica Fegison
Country of Origin: England
Pets: a hawk called amber
Talents: Sword, archery, Knife throwing
Skills: likes to run and write
Weapon: Throwing knives
Flaws: uncommenly talkitive, bouncy, attention span of a monkey, lookes surprized all the time
Powers(must relate to god parent): she can play any instrament she wants to (without practicing) very smart
Life Before CHB*: Sorray was a very sporty person. She always goes running in the morning and hunting with her hawk. She also had been very popular. Besides being a queen bee she also had very good fashion sence. Can be bratty if you get on her bad side.
RP Example*: Sorray looked at Beth "No way.... I know Natalie is a bratt and all but I'd never Imagine she'd stoop this low!"
Beth flicked her long brown hair. "I know and besides." Beth frowned "My boy friend broke up with me because of her...."
"Come on thats crap...." Sorray trailed away into silence....
"Hey girls" Beth's mom called up the stairs time to eat." Beth and Sorray whent down for lunch.
Any notes about your characters: extrememly talkitive for ADHD
likes sparkly stuff

how does convincing people to do anything relate to apollo?

Ok I fixed it.

Add more flaws.

OK!!!

Approved.

Describe her power in more depth . .

And add more flaws

OK I FIXXETH

Hmmmm....... that power might be power-playing-ish

OK

How does that power work?

ok

Does it drain her energy?

ok...

Approved.

Name: Ian Woods
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Height: 5'11''
Body Type: Strong, fast, muscular
Skin Color: well tanned
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Sarah Woods
Country of Origin: England
Pets: none
Talents: Likes to talk and worm his way out of fights
Weapon**: Swords made of Celestial bronze
Flaws: Tends to be a little... well pig headed and can accedently permantly inger someone
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*: Sorray is his best friend but they never realy saw eye to eye. Life has been very tough Ian and his mom had had to fight tooth and nail to keep a roof over their house. Over-all Ian is an average kid- untill the monsters showed up anyway. Ian is a fast runner and always is wrapped up in sports. Never seemed to have time to date...
RP Example*:
Shighing I placed the picture in my duffle. I would be leaving in a few hours.
"Ian..."
"Hi, mom" My moms a small woman with black hair and brown eyes, I look nothing like my dad.
"So you ready?"
"Yah..." Shouldering my bag I looked around the room and walked out.
Any notes about your characters: None at the moment

Those aren't powers.

Fixed

((I don't know were your unicorns went sorry...))

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 sentences long.

kk-

I saw a unicorn

Are his swords Celestial bronze?

FIXXETHED

Approved.