Shane Clok

Name: Shane Clok

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Eyes: Real Dark Brown

Hair: Black

Height: 5'7

Body Type: muscular but looks small

Skin Color: Tan

God Parent: Persephone

Mortal Parent: Shawn Clok

Country of Origin: America

Pets: a hellhound he named Mr. Mittens. He is named Mr. Mittens because he is once but he looks like he wears mittens. He is the size of a Rottweiler even though through the mist he looks like a pug with white feet.

Talents: very good at sword fighting. skilled battle-ax fighter, and great at a staff like Hades

Weapon**: celestial bronze sword, battle-ax and staff (staff has two prongs like Hades, made by Hephaestus cabin) staff is named Shadow (its black with celestial bronze forks)

Personality: Normally good to get along with. He can be a trouble maker at times and will hurt you if necessary. He is generally nice and helpful. He is very compassionate and loving.  

Flaws: short temper, annoying (sometimes) and gets a big head at times

Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): none

Powers (must relate to god parent; optional):

Shadow Travel- only can go 1-3 miles away (for 1 post with cool down of 3 post)

control of plants (2 post with a cool down of 2 post) (plant must already be in the ground cannot just grown a plant out f the earth)

control of the dead (only 2 undead people) (for 3 post with a cool down of 7 post) (can die by anything)

like his mother created a hole in the earth, that brought down Nico, Percy, and Thalia into the Underworld, he can make "holes" in the earth (limited like creating sink holes that can be 3-6 inches deep) (for 4 post with a cool down of 9 post)


Years at camp: 6


Life Before Camp*:

Shane Clok had a as normal as possible for a Half-Blood. He spent his days studying every type of flowers out there and getting in trouble at school. His mother abandoned him when he was 9. He then lived with his aunt. Then strange people started showing up when he was about 12 and then a satyr came and rescued him one day at the park. Where he was brought to camp.

RP Example*: As he ran through the woods, at night, he fell, he turned and looked behind and realized there was plenty of shadows, he shadowed traveled into the cabin (1/2 a mile away) and collapsed. When he woke up he was in the medical area of camp and he had a slight fracture in his leg. He was out on doing camp activities for a month. Eventually it healed and he returned to activities as normal. He went outside camp and had to run back to camp immediately because there was a huge scream inside camp.

Any notes about your characters: Even though his mother is the Queen of the Underworld he loves the sunshine

Yes to controlling plants, no to turning things into plants. Control plants which already exist, please.

No to control of shadows and darkness.

Limit to control of the dead, no more than 2 undead who can be destroyed.

You do not have enough personality. Three sentences at least.

You do not have enough RP example. Five sentences at least.

Please explain how he was left on the streets and went to a homeless shelter and didn't end up in a foster care system..

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Okay, if you don't go to a foster home, or if you run away from a foster home, the police look for you, and they find you. Especially when you go to a homeless shelter. They look there first.

Also, I need more information on control of the ground before I can approve or disapprove of it. I'm inclined to say no, but give me a good reason to say yes.

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Yeah, the underworld part is not going to be accepted...

And you still didn't change the fact that you can't just avoid going to foster homes and no one wants you. They're a government entity with oversight, they have to provide a place with either a group home or a foster home.

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Okay, now, your RP example is kind of ridiculous. There's no need to shadow travel all the time like that, and he probably wouldn't have to shadow travel inside the camp because of a fight. Also remember the shadow travel only works when there are shadows he can step into, so it isn't a fantastic emergency tool.

Also, please specify that Mr. Mittens is the size of a Rottweiler or smaller.

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You can only shadow travel once in a post, so only once in an RP example.

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