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Flaws:
- If the missing ear lobe isn't the result of a birth defect, you'll still need to add in a cosmetic flaw he was born with.
LBC:
- So when Fane ran off, how would his family explain to police where he was?
- If he ever checked into some medical clinic, the workers there WOULD make a big deal that a child had checked in by himself -- even if it wasn't to his face they'd monitor him and probably call a social worker or police to make sure he wasn't the victim of some crime.
- As I asked before: did he manage to kill most of the monsters he met on his journey, or did he wound and flee or such? Training by himself is much different from training to kill monsters.
- Did he ever try to contact his family during his journey/when he got to camp?
Flaws:
- If the missing ear lobe isn't the result of a birth defect, you'll still need to add in a cosmetic flaw he was born with.
LBC:
- So when Fane ran off, how would his family explain to police where he was?
- If he ever checked into some medical clinic, the workers there WOULD make a big deal that a child had checked in by himself -- even if it wasn't to his face they'd monitor him and probably call a social worker or police to make sure he wasn't the victim of some crime.
- As I asked before: did he manage to kill most of the monsters he met on his journey, or did he wound and flee or such? Training by himself is much different from training to kill monsters.
- Did he ever try to contact his family during his journey/when he got to camp?