Pretty Little Devil

Name: Hwan Taehyung but a lot of people call him Tae. Much like Japanese names Hwan is actually the family name and Taehyung is his first name.
Age: 18
Gender: male
Eyes: very dark brown
Hair: PINK! (its dyed though)
Height: 5’10"
Body Type: dancer
Skin Color: kinda pale, kinda not
God Parent: Deimos
Mortal Parent: Hwan Yun Soo
Country of Origin: Seoul,South Korea
Pets: Singapur Cat male named Gōki
Talents: dancing, singing, fluent in Korean and English while learning Italian from his sister
Weapon**: CB Urumi(8ft in length), Shotel and eight Kakute rings
Personality: friendly, mischievous, eloquent, caring and rebelious
Flaws: venal, secretive, mischievous, pretentious, his ears stick out a little more than normal
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Knows the biggest fear for the person in front of him, if he’s with a group its all of them but nor more than four people closest to him within twenty feet. Can tell when a person is scared or nervous within 50 yards.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): All of his powers require him to stand completely still and look either at or in the direction of the person he is targeting. He can still speak and change facial expressions but that's it. Seeing these signs can clue people into when he's trying to invade the prain and allow them to focus more. The maximum size dimension for physical manifestations is (193″ L x 74″ W x 67″ H).
-Taehyung can induce the feeling and vision of terror to two people at most including bogeyman illusions. This lasts three posts and he has to wait eight before doing it again. The severity of the visions depends on how much the person latches onto the fear given. The visions are all mentally seen so nothing physical actually appears in the real world but to the people being effected the fear seems very real. An easy way to avoid or get out of the fear is to calm one's pulse and breathing to a relatively normal state and the vision will fade. Another way to get over it is to just have the will to not let him into your mind, seeing as it would feel like someone is pushing your mind to the fear portion of the brain. They can be seen in only the immediate area of the person with  a cap at twenty feet.
-For one person and for a total of three posts an actual physical manifestation of the persons fear will appear in real life that others can see as well. Tae has to wait twelve posts before doing this again but an upside to it is that if another person is in the area and just so  happens to have the same fear as the person being effected then they can freak out respectively. The manifestations are still illusions so they cannot be touched or damaged. The same ways of evading the mental illusions is the same as the physical ones. All illusions are no larger than a regular sized car and Tae has to be within twenty feet of the illusion in order for it to remain.
Life Before Camp*: Born in Seoul, South Korea to Hwan Yun Soo the eldest demigod of Deimos was sent to live with a cousin of the mother in order to allow the young woman work with Cirque du Soleil a year after his birth as well as the fact that his mother was expecting another demigod on the way and Deimos suggest she avoid a home full of demigods. From then on Taehynug was raised like any other Korean child, for the most part. His adopted mother and father moved to China a few years later for a job transfer so he attended the International School there for American students seeing as he  spoke decent english at the time, he also began training in Taekwondo before the move. He did decently in school for a stereotypical Asian upbringing but never really had a good time during school, claiming it was always too boring for his liking. You can imagine what that lead to. He began pranking other students and pretty much became a nusense to everyone there. At age thirteen he gets sent to camp for his first year seeing as he was claimed and those were the instructions his real mother gave his adopted mom, aka her sister. After arriving he was contacted by his mother and was mad at her for abandoning him to the family but kept an apparent sister he didn’t even know about until visiting the home in Vegas. Seeing as Dae Seon was in Oregon for some sort of boot camp at the time he was eased into the whole idea of being a demigod and that his knowing of other people’s fears was a perk to who his father was. Not wanting to cause anymore trouble for her sister, Hwan Yun Soo rummaged in her old memories box for things his father left for him and in turn gave those to him as well as the ticket required to go and travel to some camp meant for people like him. Deimos had shown his abilities to Yun Soo before Taehyung was born in order to prove his words to be true as well as what to expect from their offspring. Deimso had left  a letter saying he was sorry but to watch over his younger sister as well as a video recording of him as well(the video recording basically being an apology and explaining why he couldn't ever visit him.). That being said, the teen was soon on a flight to New York City and back to camp. He spends his off-season at camp and continues training in Taekwondo with a harsh trainer to this day, that's how he got to 2nd Dan Black Belt already.
RP Example*: n/a
Any notes about your characters: Kim Taehyung is the FC, while living in Korea he learned Taekwondo as sort of an after school activity(he is a 2nd Dan black belt. He continues to train to this day)

Add a lot more to his personality.

Abilities:
- All of their fears seems like a bit much. (Also, considering that Deimos is more of a general "terror" sort of person, rather than deeply personal like Phobos, it would be better to go for just major fears.)
- What's the range of this ability?

Powers:
- Cut how long he can use the first power by at least 1 post. 
- What do you mean by fear augmentation/aura?
- How far away at most could he be from his victim(s) to use the first power?
- How can people resist being affected by the first power? (List at least two ways.)
- What do you mean by a physical manifestation -- is it capable of being touched/damaged, or is it more of an illusion/ (If it's the former, I'm gonna say no.)
- Reduce duration for this second power (if it's an illusion; if it can be touched see my above note).

LBC:
- Were the issues his aunt couldn't handle of a supernatural kind, or was it just him being annoying?
- What things had Deimos left behind for his son?

Heyo!

Just a few things cause I'm a nitpicker:
- Education is a huge thing in South Korea. If he did only decently, then he can't really say he was bored -- taking one of my actual friends for example who is from Seoul, she had school, then spent the rest of the day going from tutor to tutor. She never went to bed before 11pm. You should maybe edit that part of the history a little, as higher education is an actual huge thing, means a lot to families, and it's just a fckton of pressure.
- No to him being 7th dan in Taekwondo. That is simply too high for his age. In my dojang there's a girl who's an actual badass at Taekwondo, she's 18, and she's at 3rd dan -- and she's in the DVD of First Grand Master Rhee Khi Ha. I'd approve him being either 1st dan or 2nd dan.

That's all I had to nitpick :P

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Side note, I've been attending an American International school in China and they do allow Asians in so long as they have the money and speak English. That and It's easy as far as academics go.

You haven't added anything to his personality.

Abilities:
- Maximum range for his fear-sensing?

Powers:
- Maximum range for his illusion ability?
- What's the largest he can make any physical manifestation?
- Are there ways to get rid of it?
- Does it have to stay within a certain range of Tae so he can still control it?

LBC:
- What was the recording of Deimos about?

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Abilities:
- Add a range for the biggest-fear-sensing ability too. (Forgot to ask for that too, sorry.)
- Reduce the range for the nervousness/general fear sensing.

Powers:
- How would they know he's trying to get into their head in order to resist the powers?
- Define a "regular" sized car.

-like a Hyundai Santa Fe (193″ L x 74″ W x 67″ H)

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Powers:
- You didn't answer my first question -- would the target feel him somehow in their mind, to know to resist at all?
- Add the size limits in.

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