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by Princess Amy 4/2/2011, 1:50 pmI keep writing. I notice one of the characters name was Victoria...I must have done that with out realizing it. I start to erase.
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Parker and Brian's Bunk.
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ooc: Imma time skip, Kay?
After an hour or two, Ellie got to the last page of the notebook. "That one ended abruptly."
After an hour or two, Ellie got to the last page of the notebook. "That one ended abruptly."
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"Hmm okay I'll make the ending longer sometime" I said. I had written a lot of pages of my story now. "Here read this and tell me what you think so far" I hand her my notebook.
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Ellie nodded. She handed back the notebook she had finished. "Sorry if I was mean... I tend to be really analytical about those kinds of things. I must say though, you got better as you went." She grabbed the notebook he had written in.
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"Thanks. Its okay I like good critizism" I said. I start reading through her notes.
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Ellie giggled quietly as she began reading.
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"What?" I ask.
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"It's kind of funny."
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"My story?" I ask. "Well I want really thinking all that much when I wrote it." I said and shrug.
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"Well, that's okay." She kept reading.
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I smile and keep reading through her notes. I fix mistakes here and there that she missed.
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"Aww!" Ellie said. "That's so cute!"
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I laugh softly. "Thanks...I guess"
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"It's an adorable story," Ellie said sincerely.
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"You think?" I ask.
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Ellie nodded. "Yes, I do."
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"Hmm okay I'll keep writing it then" I said. "Who would have thought"
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Ellie handed the notebook back to him. "Well, if you'd prefer writing other stuff, you'd do just fine."
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"Hmm okay you should read the poems now" I said.
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Ellie nodded. "Okay then."
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I hand her the book. "Here sorry if there like cheesey"
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Ellie laughed as she took the book. "Okay, I'll watch out for that."
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"Ya be carful" I laugh.
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Ellie laughed as she opened it up and began reading.
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I smile and keep adding stuff to my love story.
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