Two Seperate Worlds....

http://gallery.ewva.net/displayimage.php?album=66&pos=8 - Kayley
http://gallery.ewva.net/displayimage.php?album=287&pos=27 - Helen
http://content6.flixster.com/photo/10/18/09/10180936_gal.jpg - Darren
http://st-listas.20minutos.es/images/2008-12/66267/796888_640px.jpg?1232032882 - Lawrence
(These are the characters in my story... Its a modern The Princess and The Pauper thing, or The Prince and The Pauper thing, but still, ya know)


Prolouge:
"Let me have them. Please, Madam. They are in danger here."
"But, we'll never be able to see them again?" The mother still clung to her two daughters.
"Well, you will never see Kayley again, where she's going, but where Helen's going...." The man paused. "She may be famous."
"But why must I give my only two children up?" The mother looked distressed.
"Because, they must be seperated, from each other and from you or they shall never survive!" The man reminded her, not so gently.
The lady nodded, wanting to do only the best for her daughters. The man took the two daughters, and... Disappeared? The lady blinked. She swore he vanished! But, how could that be? That was impossible! There was no possible way!
How? When? What? Where? Huh? The lady's mind raced. She felt awful, confused, and scared. If that man did really have magic, was he really only going to harm her daughters? The lady wondered, but she was sure she'd never know.
The lady sat down, for she felt light-headed, but it didn't help at all. Her head continued to spin, and she blacked out...

I like it! I already want to read more. Just one thing though (not to be mean but to help :D ) You spelled confused wrong.

She felt awful, confusewd, and scared.

I can't spell at three in the morning!

I love itt:D

Thanks guys! And also, make me feel stupid, please? I'm typing at 3 AM and in the DARK!

Chapter One: Helen
Helen stared off into space, as the teacher passed out test. She knew she was going to fail already. No matter how hard she tried, math was the only subject she couldn't understand. Every other subect, she was a genius at. School was her thing. Except when it came to math. Always math!
The teacher handed her the test, and she stared at it. A C+! Mother would be happy!
Her best friend, Miranda, leaned over to look at her test.
"Wow, good job Owl!" Miranda grinned at her, obviously proud of her friend.
"Thank, Penguin!" Helen grinned at her best friend.
She glanced up at the clock, and her grin grew wider. While she'd been gazing off into space, class had passed as the teach blabbed on.
The bell rang.

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I know, I'm still writing that chapte, thus the stars, to show time in between

I don't like it. I love it!!! did you catch the joke? I LOVE it!!!!!

haha, well I love you too! lolz:) I caught it, thanks:) Imma write more, when I think of more for chapter one