The story of my demigod childhood [original]

I Was born April 29, 2001......my mother was more happy than ever. My dad came. He put his slightly big hand on my forehead. He left the
room. We got out of the hospital. My mom called for my dad, but he was no where in sight. She was upset. She put me in a new car seat....and drove me to home.Now if u haven't notice..... my mom loved my dad whoever he is....and so anxious to be with my dad she got right out of the hospital. So anyway when my mom got home she called my dad right away....but no answer. My mom was never happy after my dad left. My mom couldn't focus on her work or her cooking or me..... she really couldn't focus on anything. Finally my mom made this brave choice. November 27,2001.... She took me to this place called "The Lotus Casino". I was excited. She took me inside.






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I was shocked . She took me to a near by couch. She sat down and put me on her lap in warm cozy covers. I slept. When i woke up she was gone, and i was in a man's arm. I started to cry, but he took me inside a room. He took care of me. He gave me a DS video game, and i played it for what seemed like an hour. January 2,2004..... i was playing the video game without noticing i was now 3 years old. I kept on playing and playing. Suddenly a boy teenager came in. He was about 14 maybe 15 with short brown hair and tan skin. He had a orange t shirt [that at that time i couldn't read] with blue jeans.He took the video game away from me and carried me to the exit sign, and ran out.I Screamed, and a long snake creature easily 60 feet long came out in front of us.








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The snake creature try to bite the teenager and I. The teenager grabbed a ball,and threw it in the air towards the snake creature.It turned into a killer.....let me rephrase that ....KILLER SIZE FIREBALL! BOOM! The snake creature hissed loud enough China could probably hear it.It blew fire out of its mouth. The teenager ran leaving me behind. I caught on fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But i didn't feel it.The snake creature tale wrapped around me and squished me automatically [ i was only 3 ].I used the fire and caught the snake creature on fire, But still squished, i fell to the ground, and the snake creature took me away.













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I woke up in a dark cave with only the sound of machines. I felt like I just ran through a huge forest fire. I got up, walking in the rocky ground and found myself by a huge hole with lava at the bottom.I took a step back. I ran and bumped into a HUGE rock. Well i thought it was a rock, until i found that it was the....the.....THE SNAKE!!!!!!! It was sleeping! I quickly ran, until i saw the wall. The dates were wrote by the snake. I read it, the best i could,and finally got it......March 25,2005.
















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I stared at the writing. March 25,2005. Without thinking,I took a step back. I tripped over rocks and blanked out. When i woke up, i saw darkness and mist. I went into it, and realized it was an exit. I WAS FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ran in the dark, and slipped. I tried to get up, but standing right in front of me stood a tall man.........teenager........it was the teenager!!!!!!!!"Need help little buddy" he said. I saw i was trapped by ropes.The teenager got a knife [i don't know where it came from] and cut me free. Suddenly i heard a voice. "WE CAPTURED THE DRAKON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I quickly realized the voice trying to capture the snake creature they call "Drakon".But i realized MORE THAN ONE PERSON. It was a group of Hunters. "GET THE DRAKON AND TEAR IT TOO BITS!!!!!!!!!!!" I heard. "RUN" yelled the teenager. We ran quick as we could. The Hunters were right behind us.


















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The teenager and I ran and ran. I thought" we are dead.:" But suddenly,I didn't hear the Hunters anymore.But a HUGE shadow appeared above the teenager and I. It was the snake creature [or what the hunters call "Drakon"]!!!!!!!!!!!!! The snake creature looked at the teenager like he was a huge hamburger. Suddenly, the most weird thing ever happened.....the snake creature started to speak."KATOPI, MASON, GIVE UP OR YOUR ON THE MENU.....MY MENU!!!!!!!!!!!!!". The teenager's name must of been Katopi. Weird name, but judging we were almost on the snake creature's menu,I didn't think about it too much. "Listen, Drakon, eat me, but spare Mason Valley" Katopi yelled. I wonder how he knew my first and last name [ Well the Drakon, I don't know how he knew my first name either, hopefully Katopi got my first name from the Drakon, but still my last name?].The "Drakon" [ I guess I will call it that] struck at Katopi, and next thing i knew, I Fainted, and i killed the Drakon.











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I ran for my live. A woman was after me. She was big, dead serious she was like 6'8, and only about 14. She had short [ also dead serious. back of her hair was less than an inch long, and she had no bangs]brown hair with blood. She had what seemed like black eyes that could scare that Drakon. She was in full armor with a huge spear[ like 5 foot long] to her side. Her muscles were about 25 inches around, and she had a tattoo that said " IF YOU REALLY WANT TO PICK A FIGHT WITH ME, YOU SHOULD RISK LOOSING SOME BLOOD, PUNK". Anyway, I finally lost her. Then I looked behind me, and guess what i found. WHACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WOKE UP SWEATING. Was that really just a dream?














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I honestly have no words that explain that story right now :|

Suddenly, Katopi came."Hey man how you doing, I was so worried, i fed you nectar, and you still wouldn't wake up" he said.I tried to say "where am I? what happened? how i get here?" but it came out " dear wham guy? duh I app? wow tie wit ear?". Katopi laughed. "You are pretty banged up" Katopi said still laughing. I just realized I was in a ranch laying on a bed. " KATOPI MOM NEEDS YOU" a lady yelled. " I will be right back, Mason" Katopi said angry. I now realize this must be his house. Katopi left, leaving me in that room. I wish i knew the date. Katopi came back. " Hey sorry Mason" he said. I saw paper and a pencil. I grabbed it and wrote down "what is the date". "My birthday, May 18, 2006" he said.










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make your chapters a little longer

I Stared a little.May 18, 2006.I felt weaker as I started to think about that. He wasn't lieing.Not only that, I slept throughout my 5th birthday.
No way. "What HAPPENED!?"I said, but once again it came out "duh wapen?". Katopi laughed, but he understood me. " You killed that Drakon, with a little help from a son of the sun" Katopi said "My father is Apollo". I somewhat understood. He grabbed a Pepsi can... just a can. Its when i realized the Pepsi can was orbiting Katopi's hand. Suddenly, Katopi and the floating Pepsi can froze. "Your enemy awaits in your future" I heard a voice "go while you can hero, and survive".The voice stopped, and Katopi unfroze and dropped the Pepsi can. He rubbed his head. "Sorry man, major headache be right back" Katopi said and walked out of the room. That voice was fimiliar.... but i don't recall the voice.











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Go while you can hero. That is scary.Katopi came back. "Sorry about that" he said. Great, he is gonna be mad. First the lady in my dream, next a weird voice. What else could happen? I spoke too soon. An Iris message came. "I accept the message" Katopi said. The lady in my dream appeared. "HEY KATOPI" She said excited. "Hey, Ruby" Katopi said. Ruby? The big bad girl's name was Ruby? And Katopi knew her? "Happy 15th Birthday!" Ruby said. " Thanks, Ruby" Katopi said. Suddenly, Ruby saw me. "WHO IS THE SQUIRP" Ruby yelled. " Uh, my friend, Mason" Katopi said. Ruby did the eyes - on - you thing to me. Suddenly, the earth rumbled. Or the room........









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I think you should definitely make your chapters longer. By putting all of the current ones together you have one PJO-sized chapter, a little less maybe.

You need ALOT of revising! Some words aren't spelled right...

'Earthquake?' I wrote down on a piece of paper and gave it to him. "Gaea trying to mess with us" Katopi said, then he fell. The earthquake stopped.'Gaea?' I took the paper back and wrote down. "Never heard of her, eh " Katopi said getting up. I Thought. 'Mother Earth' I wrote. "Well kinda, shes not exactly motherly" Katopi said "but yes". I saw a line of stones outside. Katopi saw that I was looking at them. "Those are too keep the monsters away from our house and precious garden" he said. 'Precious garden?' I wrote. Katopi gave me crutches. "Come with me" he said.
I walked out into a beautiful place with lots of flowers and pretty creatures. I saw a pond. I kept on walking and saw a pond. "The Royal Garden of Metizedos" Katopi said. I looked at him. 'Your that famous family from TV?' I wrote."Its really my Aunt's and Uncle's, I'm more like the Garden Protector" Katopi said. I nodded. "Try this" he said giving me a piece of weed.I chewed on it, and I felt like I could do anything."Sweet" I said,not noticing I just talked. "Ah!" I said walking backwards. "You can talk and walk and move again" Katopi said. I just got healed by a weed.
I studied how I could walk and talk and move again. I walked into some weeds and got lost. "Hello!" I yelled scared."Don't you worry" I heard a voice. Suddenly a lady with snakes for hair came."You must be the Metizedos boy" she said."I'm not, I am a visitor" I said scared. "Yeah right" the lady said and one snake came straight at me.




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I dodged it, but I went right back in battle when another snake hair lady was behind me. "Katopi, help!" I yelled, then I ran for my life, dodging every strike. Suddenly, Katopi came. "Gorgons" he said. Suddenly, and Iris message came again. "I accept the message" Katopi said, in combat. Ruby appeared in the message. "SORRY I LEFT YOU LAST TIME KATOPI BUT..... ARE THOSE GORGONS?" she asked. I grabbed a spikey plant. I threw it at one of the Gorgons. The Gorgon screamed. Ruby was still talking to Katopi, but I didn't pay attention, because I was in combat with a Gorgon. I grabbed another spikey plant and hit the Gorgon. "Euryale, a little help over here!" the Gorgon that was attacking me yelled. "I got my own problems, Stheno!" the one called Euryale[ the one attacking Katopi] yelled. Stheno grabbed me by my shirt. "Prepare to die" she said, then one of her snakes bit me. I blacked out.
"IS HE ALIVE?' I heard a voice as I start to wake up. "Hes coming to his senses" I heard another voice said. I completely woke up, and saw Katopi and... the real scary Ruby. "Wha-a-t happe-n-ed" I ask scared. "WE KILLED THE GORGONS, DUH" Ruby said. Katopi looked at me. "You passed out after one of Stheno's snakes bit you, then Ruby came, helped me kill them, and we fed you nectar, and well, here you are" he explained. I nodded. "So what were the Gorgons doing in your garden?" I asked Katopi. "Trying to kill the plants, maybe take some" Katopi said. "Then why did they attack us?" I asked. "They attack anything if they get the chance" Katopi said "they keep on coming, they think the plants will, well, keep them alive" Katopi answered. I got up. "I'M HUNGRY" Ruby yelled. "Yes, lets discuss more at dinner" Katopi said. They walked inside the house, and I followed. I came past a mirror, and I saw a women in the mirror. "Hello, hero, remember me?" she asked. I screamed and grabbed a on-display sword. The women disappeared.



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