evon's characters

Name:Evon Hatake
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:brown
Hair:shaggy black
Height:5'5''
Body Type:med. build
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:hermes
Mortal Parent:taylor hatake
Country of Origin:United States
Pets: pet raven named shadow
Talents: good listener and peace maker faster then normal people, great at trickery
Weapon**:Chakrams
Flaws:he seems really uneasy in bright light, bad puzzle solver, bad gag-reflex
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:Evon was a regular kid, with a bland life untell the monsters came. He allways was a night owl. Evon was known as a major loser kid in his school, the jocks would make fun of him, untill he seen through the mist and found chakrams in his hand. luckly enought he threw them at the demons and bam he pasted out... later he woke up at Camp half blood
RP Example*:
I was running from the lake into the mountains, when i tripped and cut my leg. It was a minor wound but it still was giving the harpies time to catch up. Using the shadows of the trees to hide from them, I prayed for my father to help me. "Dad i know we arn't the tightest but please please help!" a tingling feeling overcame me. I had the want to get up and run. I stumble up, puting my weight on a tree. Finally i just started sprinting at the fastest speeds ive ever ran!
notes:he's very shy around new people, but unlike some others in his cabin he's more profesional and humble.


p.s. sorry about last one.

Erebus is a titan, and he's not an allowed god parent.

Those are not really powers; they're more like talents.
Add two more flaws.

approvable? if not im willing to fix more.

That power isn't allowed.

may i ask why?

would ability to leave undetected work?

The power isn't allowed because it wouldn't be a Hermes power.
The power you just suggested is a talent, not a power.
You don't have to have a power.

jw because hermes is god of literature and poetry too :p anyways here you are! ty

Approved.

Does the bow have celestial bronze arrows? Are the long knives also made of celestial bronze?
We don't allow life enhancing/draining powers.

edited ty

How does he feel life forces?
You should also edit your RP example so it doesn't mention your earlier power.

should be death force, as in if alot of people have once died in area, ex Battle grounds, slaughterys, or in this case creatures that have killed alot of demigods in one area.

I'm pretty sure that isn't allowed either.

aw :( anyways hopefully its good now? if not ill edit more

Add one more flaw.
Add two sentences to life before CHB.

edited

Wait. His dad meaning Thanatos?
Also, the mortal parent says "mike Hanson" which sounds like a man's name. His mortal parent should probably be a woman, if his dad is Thanatos.

Edit: Unless he was raised by someone else, which you should specify.

wow.... thats embarising i miss read god and goddess..... derp ill edit

Approved.

Name:Perus jacker
Age:15
Gender: male
Eyes:green
Hair:short jelled up spikes
Height:5'7"
Body Type:med.
Skin Color:dark tan
God Parent:Aeolus
Mortal Parent:kortny Jacker
Country of Origin:Canada
Pets:none
Talents:Very athletic, loves to use the wind to fly
Weapon*:Long haste of Celestial bronze
Flaws:Crazy about women, very clumsy on ground and in water
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):ability to fly/ride winds for up to 3 hours aday, can create small funnels of wind capable of picking up 200 pounds( one free), but every time used it takes and hour of fly time
Life Before CHB*: Perus was allways a kid of weather. His favorite thing to do was fly kites as a kid. it was as if the kite was listening to him and following his every thought, his mother was a weather specialist and thats how she meet his father.
RP Example*: "hey ma can i go out today?" i asked her... as if i was asking, i ran outside. Ah fresh air i love you so. by the time she finally got outside i was floting up the hill. I understood who i was. being a son of a god! how sweet. but i never get to see my dad. Poof! im hit by a strong wind, hiting a tree i wince in pain, i black out. only to wake up at Camp Half Blood.

5 hrs seems to push it a little.

3 and a free funnel?

Approved.