pilot's characters

Demigod Form:

Name:Rachel
Age:14
Gender:girl
Eyes:brown/gold in the sun
Hair:dirty blond
Height:5.1
Body Type:sorta skinny
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:mom
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a turtle and 2 fish
Talents:somewhat of acting and softball
Weapon**:bow and arrow
Flaws:im known for trying to hard
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):healing
Life Before CHB*:annoying i always get made fun of
RP Example*:i don't have one
Any notes about your characters:uh there is not much about me

Healing isn't an allowed power.

Add two more flaws.

Life Before CHB and RP Example both need to be five sentences long each. RP Example is like writing a story, from 1st person point of view. Like this:

I kicked the cat.

Demigod Form:

Name:Rachel
Age:14
Gender:girl
Eyes:brown/gold in the sun
Hair:dirty blond
Height:5.1
Body Type:sorta skinny
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Mary
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a turtle and 2 fish
Talents:somewhat acting and softball
Weapon**:bow and arrow,knife
Flaws:I try to hard,get mad easy,and im big on sarcassum
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):i dont know if i have any
Life Before CHB*:Before CHB i lived with my mom and sisters.I went to school.I usually got made fun of.That kinda where i started getting sarcastic.And i hung out with friends whenever i got the chance.
RP Example*:I'm not good at writing storys.So i hope i don't have to do it all the time.I really only read them.Cause it's more fun.And i'll only read certain things.
Any notes about your characters:Theres not much about me that I haven't already told you :D

Make your Bio have complete sentances and the rp example must be about your charrie

Demigod Form:

Name:Rachel Castel
Age:14
Gender:girl
Eyes:brown/gold in the sun
Hair:dirty blond
Height:5.1
Body Type:average
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Mary
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:my sisters have a turtle and 2 fish if that counts
Talents:somewhat good at acting,and softball
Weapon**:bow and arrow,and sometimes if needed a knife
Flaws:I try to hard,i get mad easy,and i can get very sarcastic
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):I can fight without tireing easliy if im in the sun
Life Before CHB*:I lived with my mom and sisters.I went to school and usaually got made fun of.Which is probably how I got my sarasum.Anyway i used to hang out with my friends every chance i got because me and my mom fought alot.Cause apparently everything I said and did was wrong and made her mad.
RP Example*:I grew up not knowing anything except my dad died and left because he didnt want me.Even though its preatty oveious that neither does my mom.Anyway my mom remarried some guy and then they had two more kids also known as the brats.My mom eventually sent me to numerous borading schools because my stepdad said that I was gonna indanger the other kids the only thing wrong with this was that I didn't know why he always said that.But now I do.
Any notes about your characters:I can't stand my mom,my stepdad,or the stepsisters so don't ask about them ok

I hope this is better :D

RP Example is like writing a story from first person point of view-- it's more of writing the girl's actions and stuff. Example:

I walked around camp, bored. I spotted a few campers, who were yelling at each other.

oh ok that was the prodlem i didnt no what rp standed for but now i get it

Alright. Just edit your RP Example.

How long can she fight in the sun?

Demigod Form:

Name:Rachel Castel
Age:14
Gender:girl
Eyes:I have brown eyes that turn gold if I'm facing the sun a certain way
Hair:dirty blond hair
Height:5.1
Body Type:average
Skin Color: tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Mary
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:My sisters have a turtle and two fish if that counts
Talents:I'm somewhat good at acting and I'm a really good softball catcher
Weapon**:bow and arrow, and depending on what im fighting I use a knife
Flaws:I try to hard,i get angrey,and im pretty sarcastic
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):I can fight without tireing quickly if I'm in the sun
Life Before CHB*:I lived with my mom stepdad and two stepsisters.i went to many bording schools because my stepdad thought i would indanger my stepsisters.But before that I went to a public school had some friends who I would try and hang with every chance i got because i was usually fighting with my mom and stepdad.oh and I played softball alot because it help me cool off after being mad at my mom and stepdad.Not to mention that it was pretty ovious that my mom hated me because of my dad and the fact that she tried to get my dad to take me with him when he left.

RP Example*:I addventually ran away because of something i over heard my mom say while on summer vacation.I was on my own for a while just wandering around the forests for a couple months.Supricingly not one monster attacked me untill i was half way to camp(without knowing it) thats how i started using a knife.A sayter found me and helped me.We made it to camp safely.

Any notes about your characters:I hate my mom,stepdad,and stepsisters so don't ask me anything about them and i like having friend usually 2 good friends,but i also like being alone just to think and sort things out so if i tell you to leave me alone or go away in a mean tone(usally when i say stuff meanly or rudely i don't mean) don't take it personally.

How long can she fight in the sun? (Just answer this without posting your entire form).

um till she gets really tired it takes her 50times faster then it would another halfblood but only if she is in the sun if its nighttime it would take her the average ammont it should

Don;t double-post.

So, she gets 50 times faster in the sun? That's.... really fast.

sort of by 50times faster i meant that it takes 50times longer for her to get tired but only if she is in the sun its like the sun gives her energy but only for a certain amount of time

Aah...

That's a bit too much.

oh

Maybe 10 times?

thats what i was thinkin but then i was gonna say 15 cause not everybody gets tired at the same time or can take the same amount of work

So, you agree with 10?

Yeah i do :)

Approved.

Demigod Form:

Name:Lena
Age:7
Gender:girl
Eyes:dark blue
Hair:short brown and curly
Height:the average height of a 7 yr old
Body Type:small and skinny but strong for her age
Skin Color:light tan
God Parent:Hermes
Mortal Parent:Corrie
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:doesn't have any but she wishes she had either a pony or a bunny
Talents:good runner
Weapon**:knife
Flaws:has dylexia,doesn't trust almost anybody,doesnt like change,and sometimes cries when she gets really mad
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):doesn't have any
Life Before CHB*:My mom sent me to an orphanage when i was six because she didn't have enough money to take care of me,but the real reason was because she didn't like me. The lady in charge of the orphanage was mean to me and used to hit me when I was late for dinner or forgot something. The other kids didn't like me either cause I knew who my mom was and they were jealous. I only had one friend her name was Ally but she was adopted. She didn't even say goodbye to me when she left.
RP Example*:One night I forgot to do my chores so Mrs.Noll the lady in charge of the orphanage called me into her office to talk to me about it. I was really scared because whenever that was said to me that meant I was gonna get hit hard.When I got into the office she told me to turn around so I was facing the door, she rasied the stick she used to hit us kids with and hit me once on the back. When suddenly the door opened and one of the older ophan boys walked in and grbbed me by the arm and pulled me out of the room and out the front door. We ran five miles before he let go of me and told me he was a syter sent to look out for halfbloods. When he found me he knew he had to get me out of there before one of us was adopted. I didn't understand so I asked what he was talking about and he told me everything will make sence soon. We started walking into the woods and a few days later we came to Camphalfblood.
Any notes about your characters:She likes having alot of friends but you have to prove that you can be trusted, and she loves ponies and stuffed animals.

Is her knife made of CB?

Yeah it is

Demigod Form:

Name:Leena
Age:7
Gender:girl
Eyes:blue
Hair:brown and curly
Height:4ft
Body Type:skinny and athletic
Skin Color:light
God Parent:Hermes
Mortal Parent:Corrie
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:she wishes she had a bunny or a pony
Talents:good runner
Weapon**:knife
Flaws:Cries when she gets really frusterated,has dylexia,has ADHD,and gets scared of certain monsters
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):doesn't have any yet
Life Before CHB*:I lived in a two bedroom apartment with my mom and stepdad in Boston. I went to a kindergarden for troubled kids. After school I would come home and watch tv till my stepdad comes home from work. My stepdad was actually a really cool guy. For a while I didn't even know he was my stepdad.
RP Example*:I was in the living room when my half cousin Kendal came over he looked scared and asked me where my mom was. I called her into the living room. He whispered something to her that made my mom get really scared. She told me to get into the car, so I went outside and got into the car. When she and Kendal came outside they got in the car and we drove away. For some reason I was to scared to ask any questions. When we got out of Boston my mom and cousin calmed down and my mom told me she was taking me to summer camp and that when I got there she said nothing will make sence at first but everything will eventually. She told me that she won't be seeing me for a while and not to think she doesn't love me. I told her ok I won't. When we arrived at Camphalfblood she said that this was as far as she could go. So Kendal took me into the camp. And here I am.
Any notes about your characters:She can make friends easily.


Is good enough i dont mind changing it or fixing it but PLEASE tell me if it needs to be improved