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Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:
Name:Dylan Clark
Age: 12
Gender: male
Eyes: gray
Hair: brawn
Height:5.4
Body Type: skinny
Skin Color: white
God Parent: athena
Mortal Parent:don Clark
Country of Origin: united states
Pets: a dog named buddy
Talents:fighting
Weapon**: sword and shield
Flaws: personal loyalty. he will but his friends before the world. His loved ones are more important than anything. And is scared of arachnids.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*: he got stuck in the lotus hotel. He was there for 4years with his dad. but it only seemed 5 minutes. they finnily made it out in 2010
RP Example*: I turned around. i couldn't believe she was here. my long lost rival faith kosey. she had brown hair blue eyes and she was wearing a button down shirt. Dylan she said making a evil smile. how are you........
Any notes about your characters:

You need to have 5 complete sentences in your life before CHB.
Add two flaws.
No weapon?

I'm going to question his Life Before CHB.... Did he get stuck in the Lotus Hotel or something? The only gladiators existing nowadays are in movies/people who do reenactments.

ok done

I don't think getting stuck in the Sea of Monsters is very advisable.

why not

He'd probably need to live on a boat or he'd drown because swimming in those waters is probably really difficult, and if he met Polyphemus he'd probably be dead.

OK DONE

Approved, but next time try to make your Life Before CHB longer.

greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name: Jack Daniel
Age:13
Gender:male
Eyes:blue
Hair:brown
Height:5.6
Body Type:skinney
Skin Color:white
God Parent:osiris
Mortal Parent: Stacy Daniel
Country of Origin: usa
Pets: cat
Talents:
Weapon**: celestal bronze sword
Flaws:personal flaw. he will put his friends before any thing else like saving the world,scared of giants. and scared of birds
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*:i was just a normal kid, in tell my mom abandoned me and i got chased by monster all the way to new york. you might think is that even possible. Were i live no its not. i lived at a shelter in California. when i got to the Mississippi river a satyr come and picked me up. he had a big boaut. when we got across he told me to go. he said hell hold them off. tell this day i still don't know his name.
RP Example*: I went into the maze. it was dark, damp, and had sharp rocks. i ran looking for corners. than i saw light. i ran even faster tords it. There was grass even yellow cows. there was a cabin with a strange looking creature by it. ", were am i." is said...........
Any notes about your characters:

Add three flaws.

Is his sword Celestial bronze?

ok im done with that

What do you mean by "personal flaw"? Your other two are basically the same.

there

Can you explain his first flaw to me....

ok

Approved.

Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name: Selena Bradfeild
Age: 13
Gender: female
Eyes:blue
Hair:blonde
Height: 5.4
Body Type: skinny
Skin Color: white
God Parent: freyer
Mortal Parent: faith bradfeild
Country of Origin: united states
Pets: pig
Talents: fighting
Weapon**: celestal bronze sword
Flaws: is afraid of snakes. scared of spiders. and is hubris. she is cocky and over convident
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*: Selena has always been a normal Norse demigod child . she's gotten chased by monsters, saved by a syters. But her hardest monster to beat was grindle. he was back. Selena really isn't strong. The way she beat grindle was with her speed and her brains. she didn't have a sword until after this battle. First she ran to the side and broke his arm. than she ran to the other side and broke the other. Than she called for her pet pig who ripped off one of grindle's arm with his horn.
RP Example*: I walked into the room. it was still there. was i walking in circles or are the rooms the same. i couldn't tell. i saw a light. there was sky buildings but wasn't earth. it had a body of water surrounding the city. i now were i was know. i was in Atlantis. .......
Any notes about your characters:

Is the sword celestial bronze?

OK

Approved.