Blackhawk's characters

Demigod Form:

Name:seaweedbrainrocks
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:gray
Hair:black
Height:5 foot
Body Type:athletic
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Zeus
Mortal Parent:elizabeth goodman
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a turtle
Talents:good with lightning,can fight really well,good protector
Weapon**:a bronze sword
Flaws:not well with bows,cant read greek very well,kind of self-centered
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):lightning
Life Before CHB*:He was raised by his mom,he ran away when he was 10 and he was found by 3 people who also ran away from their homes,he went around the country fighting all monsters who came in his way,they were all headed as far away from their homes as possible,they got 100 miles before the cops took them all to another foster where after 3 and a half months before they ran away again where after a while they met a centaur who had another kid with him and they headed for CHB via cabs and buses
RP Example*:I was just getting off the bus and i saw someone who looked like he was looking for a fight i keep on walking and he follows me so after a while i say "can i help you" he pulls out a huge sword and says"i dont know lets see" my friends are ahead of me they turn around to say something to me and they see that im in trouble the centaur throws me a pen and in the air it turns into a celestial bronze sword me and the guy go in circles for a while insulting each other until he strikes at me that begins our fight i kill him we then are extremely careful we take a cab to CHB we are climbing up the hill we made it.
Any notes about your characters:he is fun,adventurous,always looking for a quest

Zeus is not allowed.

Demigod Form:

Name:jackson
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:gray
Hair:black
Height:5 foot
Body Type:athletic
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:ares
Mortal Parent:elizabeth goodman
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a turtle
Talents:good with all weapons,can fight really well,good protector
Weapon**:a celestial bronze sword
Flaws:cant read greek very well,kind of self-centered,doesnt stick up for friends
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:He was raised by his mom,he ran away when he was 10 and he was found by 3 people who also ran away from their homes.He went around the country fighting all monsters who came in his way.They were all headed as far away from their homes as possible,they got 100 miles before the cops took them all to another foster home where after 3 and a half months they ran away.they got as far as the city limits of New York where they found a satyr they headed to CHB but about a mile before CHB they met a minotaur.They killed him and went on to CHB. They made it there safely
RP Example*:I was just getting off the bus and i saw someone who looked like he was looking for a fight i keep on walking and he follows me so after a while i say "can i help you".He pulls out a huge sword and says"i dont know lets see".My friends are ahead of me they turn around to say something to me and they see that im in trouble.The satyr throws me a pen and in the air it turns into a celestial bronze sword.Me and the guy go in circles for a while insulting each other until he strikes at me,that begins our fight i kill him we then are extremely careful.We take a cab to CHB,we are climbing up the hill we made it.
Any notes about your characters:doesnt refuse a fight,is adventurous,doesnt back down

Poseidon isn't allowed, either.

Also, use the nifty edit button in the top right corner of your post instead of re-posting your form.

is it good now

Change the power, it still says 'Lightning'; which isn't an Ares power. (Ares kids don't usually have powers).

ok done

When you say bronze sword, do you mean celestial bronze?

yea sorry

Please don't triple-post.

okayyyyyyyyyyyyy

You have to be patient. :/

How can a talent be "good with all weapons" but then a flaw is "not good with bows"?
Life before CHB & RP example needs to be 5 sentences.
And centars arent normally with demigods before they reach camp. Do you mean satyr?

yea sry i fixed it

Add another flaw.

kk i did

Approved.

Name:Max sisk
Age:17
Gender:male
Eyes:dark blue
Hair: blonde
Height: 6,5
Body Type: athletic
Skin Color:tan
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: amanda sisk
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: none
Talents: good with battle plans,really strategic,good at most sports
Weapon**: celestial bronze dagger
Flaws:annoyed easily,always looks for fights,can be really stupid sometimes
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:Max was born in Salem,Oregon but moved to Las vegas,Nevada in the 5th grade.In the 8th grade Max and his mom left Nevada and went to see relatives in New York.Instead of seeing his relatives his mom dropped him off a half a mile before CHB.All his mom told him was that there was a camp for the athleticly gifted up the road about half a mile.So Max walked and walked and finnaly reached the camp.He realised it wasnt at all a camp for the athleticly gifted but a lot more then that.He only stays at camp for the summer and lives with his mom and her boyfriend the rest of the year.
RP Example*:I walked out onto the field and everyone is cheering.I smile and head to go talk with my teammates and coach.I get in the huddle and the coach tells us our play.Me and my teammates head out and get into our play.The ball is hiked the game begins.I run around the side and try to tackle the quarterback but he throws the ball before i get to him.One of my teammates make an interception,i smile they run but get tackled a few yards down.
Any notes about your characters:he's fun,he never gives up,and he never backs down from anything

Approved.

Name: Wyatt Howard
Age: 12
Gender: male
Eyes: hazel
Hair: dark brown
Height: 6' 3"
Body Type: average
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Skyler Howard
Country of Origin: Louisiana
Pets: a dog named Devin
Talents: he can fight extremely well,He knows how to wrestle down a lot of dangerous animals like gators(i don't know how this relates),hes good at most things
Weapon**: a 6 foot long celestial bronze sword
Flaws: has anger management, does not cope with people very well,he doesn't listen to anyone
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*:He lived with his mom all of his life and he was told his dad got a job as a mailman across the U.S.He constantly asked his mom about his dad.His mom always said the same thing and he got tired of it so he quit asking.He went to camp when he was 10 after a hell hound came after him. His mom insisted he get on a plane and go to New York.He was guided by a satyr who met up with him while he was wandering around New York.They got to camp safely and he was in amazed when he saw camp.
RP Example*: I walked to the car "come on mom".I get into the car and pull out my book.My mom gets into the car and starts it.i read about a chapter of my book by the time we get to my uncles.I get out of the car and hug my uncle. we stay the night at his house and wake up early in the morning to do some errands.
Any notes about your characters:

Approved

Name:Elizabeth
Age: 18
Gender: female
Eyes: blue
Hair: black
Height: 6' 7"
Body Type: average
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Hephaestus
Mortal Parent:Molly
Country of Origin: Florida, USA
Pets: a snake named George
Talents: can surf really well, can draw extremely good, knows karate
Weapon**: 6 foot long celestial bronze sword
Flaws: hyper energetic, is extremely weird, afraid of heights
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*: She lived with her mom in Florida until she was 10.She moved to Virginia where she lived for 2 years.She came to New York when she was 16.She lived a normal life until the day before her birthday when a monster showed up at her school she got home and her mom told her to drive to Camp Half Blood.She made it to camp safely where shes stayed.
RP Example*: I drop my backpack on the couch "im home" i say to my mom "hey honey" she replies. i sit on the couch and turn on the TV.I watch TV for an hour then start on homework. i finish my homework and go to my room to draw. i draw the skyline that i see outside my window. i rip the paper out of my notebook and put it on my dresser.
Any notes about your character:

Approved.

Name: Devin Brown
Age: 15
Gender: male
Eyes: blue
Hair: blond
Height: 6' 8"
Body Type: Athletic
Skin Color: tan
Greek God Parent: Dionysus
Mortal Parent: Denise Brown
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: A Bald Eagle named Jacob
Talents: is extremely good with a bow, is really social, is responsible and mature
Weapon**: A 6' long celestial bronze sword
Flaws: is afraid of sharks, likes playing pranks, is really energetic
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can grow a grape fine out of the ground the vines can be up to 3 feet long and he can do that 20 times a day
Life Before CHB*:He lived with his mom until he was old enough to run away, which was about 9. He met up with two kids while he was on his way to Virginia. He never liked anyone but the kids made him laugh. He never went to school because they never stayed in one place for longer then a week.
RP Example*: I walked into the store and paid for drinks for all of us. I hide one soda under the counter because i didn't have enough money. I pay for the drinks and walk out of the store starting to run. "hey guys we need to go" i say handing them their drinks "what did you steal this time Devin" John says "Only a soda i didn't want to but i didn't have enough money" i reply "ok fine whatever lets go" he says. We walk out to a nearby abandoned building. "lets find some shelter guys" john says "sounds good" i say. We lay down and sleep for about 5 hours. We wake up and start walking again.
Any notes about your characters: is always happy, is always fun to hang around

I don't see how never being on a plane is a flaw.