lost shadow's characters

FIXED and thanks

Edited fixed

When you say he makes the fear appear, do you mean as an illusion or he actually summons what the person fears to confront them?

Illisusions

Then I suggest you put illusions.

FIXED

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Name:nerin scern
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:brown
Hair:black
Height:5.7
Body Type:skinny
Skin Color:pale
God Parent:nemises
Mortal Parent:jack scern
Country of Origin:america
Pets:none)
Talents:fighting of all kinds,lieing,sneaking,acrobatic,flexibal(not exacly a talent but whatever)
Weapon*a CB curved greek dagger that has a spiked gaurd like spiked brass knuckles blade detaches leaveing only the spiked knuckles the knuckles have two rows of spikes one celestial bronze one silver*:
Flaws:arrogent,dosent listen,blind in right eye
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):when some one has wronged him he has inscreased agility ,stength,endurance and intelligense to super human levels for 7 posts in rp time 30 mins when finished he is extremly tired and weak to the point of possibly passing out he can run 5 miles per hour can lift 350 pounds he can take 10 hits from a really strong personthe intelligense well nerin is rather smart besides his rough brutish nature okay say if hes in a fight he would know how to outwit his enemy (note if his wounds stay when it wares off) he can do this 3 times a day only when someone has wronged him

Life Before CHB* he was born in nevada,vegas to be exact his dad never paid attention to him so he practicly raised himself at school he always had a great love for revenge if anyone needed it they came to him and he did to for a price of his choosing of course he was eventually in juvi again he did his revenge jobs intell he practicly ran the place in solitary confinement he was claimed and then the next day later he escapped by picking his lovk and snuck past the guards caring the matress into the yard he threw it on the fence babwire and climbed it and got over he escaped and found his way to camp halfblood.

RP Example*:nerin played with his switchblade as it shot out and back in he ran outside and saw somebody stealing from the store "probobly a hermes kid"he thought to him self in. Anger he charged toward the ,kid grabbing him and slamming him against the wall repeatedly. Intell he pleaded to give the things he stole back nerin smiled letting him go return the things. He smiled to himself as he walked to the arena he was still trying to think of his life before here but came a blank he sighed it keeped messing with his head so after training he went back to his cabin and fell asleep.
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Luna, don't comment on character forms.

Not sure how I feel about the power...
But how enhanced is everything? How fast can he move? How much can he lift? How many hits could he take with this endurance? How can you measure an increase of intelligence? Is it just increased common sense?

Yes you still fill out the Life Before CHB.
He's lived for 14 years, what's happened before all that?

okay fixed it *crosses fingers*

800 pounds is too much. Drop it by at least half.

15 mph is too fast if the power lasts for 15 minutes.

Okay fixed those things

How many times a day can he do this power?

Approved.