Allen's Characters

That's not a sixth sense; it's just his remaining four senses working in overdrive.

Yeah that, i got confused. plus i cant stop staying up till 3 AM. so its hard to think

So, can you add it to his form?

BTW: You have 5 charries already.

i thought the max was 6?

It's five. I got an extra.

Ok i will make shen leave

Approved, then.

Name:Tengu, (for the chinese, tengu was believed to be a demon)
Age:16
Gender:Male
Eyes:Red
Hair: When mad, Its red. normal color is brown
Height:5'2''
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Cratus
Mortal Parent:Unknown
Country of Origin:Unknown
Pets:1 black bear
Talents:Reading,
Skills:Swimming, running, jumping, climbing, Moving heavy objects, Knows krav maga, tae kwon do, and every fighting form, can hot wire cars.
Weapon:50 Pound staff that turns into a sword
Flaws:Hateful, Cruel, Mean, Hates beauty, Hopes for wars all the time.
Powers:Can lift up to 200 pounds, but it can make him super tired.
Life Before CHB:He cant remember, all he can remember is Waking up on a table, with doctors messing with him. He killed them all within 5 seconds. he was in a facility, for testing strange people, trying to figure out why they are so gifted, (Has mostly demi gods in it) he was able to escape with a kill count of at least 24. He felt bad for it, but he had to do it. When he was wandering around, he had befriended 1 black bear. Soon a satyr found him and another demi god, he never say them again.
RP Example:I Was kicking dogs, they where whimpering so much, *Kick* There goes the yorkie, *kick* oops the Chihuahua......Maybe i should take an anger management class, i thought. i got in my car and drove to a class. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HATE DOGS?! I HAVE LIKE FORTY!!! YOUR A $%^#&*^!!!" "Well you do kick them," "I'LL KICK YOU!!!!!!" *kick* "THERE GOES POINDEXTER!!!!" i leave with him going to the hospital.
Any notes about your characters:

BEAR PETS?! Uh....... FOUR BEARS?! NOOOO....

And he seems just like an angrier, mini-Maap. And Cratos may be considered a titan...

Check daniels god and titan list, and fine 1 bear.

Hmmm.... I'm just not sure. Better wait for Kendall to see...

Cratus is god of strength, so he's fine.

So is it approved?

I've got a bad feeling about this..... Erm.... but...

APPROVED...ED

Name:Peter Jackson :O
Age:15
Gender:Male
Eyes:Pure Black
Hair:Pure Black
Height:5'1''
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Unclaimed
Mortal Parent:Unknown
Country of Origin: Unknown
Pets:None
Talents:Reading.
Skills:Running, Jumping, Climbing, Sword fighting.
Weapon:Twin Swords, that can speak in his mind.
Flaws:When doing certain stuff hates being interrupted, Can fall for a girl any time, (I Will add more, but i will wait to have him claimed.)
Powers:None yet
Life Before CHB:Lived in a random town with random friends. he hated being formal. he didn't know his parents, he lived on the streets. He stole things, you know in order to live. He was always mysterious, when he went to school, his face was always hidden. he new the gods were real, but he didn't care. he thought he was a mortal. he had one non-random friend, (Satyr) he didn't like him much, but he was the only one who wasn't creeped out by him, (Besides his random friends.) When he wasn't outside, or i school. he was busy making plans to burn the town down.But when it rained one day, his plans where ruined. cause he found out his non-random friend was a satyr. then the satyr brought him to camp.
RP Example: I Was walking around my house, then suddenly, i kicked a cat. "DONT LIVE STUPID CAT!!" (Poor kitty.) The guys from the insane asylum came by again, i grabed my shot gun, aimed, aaaaand..... POW!!!!! The guy dropped, the other guy splashed water on the guy i shot, and he woke up, "$#$^&#&*& TRANQUILIZER DARTS!!!" They charged at me, i threw my 50 cats at them, and then released the hounds. they walked in grabbed me, and took me away. "ILL KILL THOSE STUPID YORKIES FOR NOT GUARDING ME!! RAWR!!"
Any notes about your characters: Always hides his face under a hood, likes to be in shadows.



Finished

This, to me, seems to be ringing Gary Stu . .

Why?

Speaking every language and having so many other Skills/Talents.

Is it good now?

AAAAH... someone else in my charrie's cabin... O.o... what will she do now?!?

Name:Peter Jackson :O
Age:15
Gender:Male
Eyes:Pure Black
Hair:Pure Black
Height:5'1''
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Aeolus
Mortal Parent:Unknown
Country of Origin: Unknown
Pets:None
Talents:Reading.
Skills:Running, Jumping, Climbing, Sword fighting.
Weapon:Twin Swords, that can speak in his mind.
Flaws:When doing certain stuff hates being interrupted, Can fall for a girl any time, Hates to have the wind calm, making it very windy.
Powers:Can control wind, make twisters, able to make him self lifted up in the wind, (Yes it drains him. he can make about 3 twister's each day.)
Life Before CHB:Lived in a random town with random friends. he hated being formal. he didn't know his parents, he lived on the streets. He stole things, you know in order to live. He was always mysterious, when he went to school, his face was always hidden. he new the gods were real, but he didn't care. he thought he was a mortal. he had one non-random friend, (Satyr) he didn't like him much, but he was the only one who wasn't creeped out by him, (Besides his random friends.) When he wasn't outside, or i school. he was busy making plans to burn the town down.But when it rained one day, his plans where ruined. cause he found out his non-random friend was a satyr. then the satyr brought him to camp.
RP Example: I Was walking around my house, then suddenly, i kicked a cat. "DONT LIVE STUPID CAT!!" (Poor kitty.) The guys from the insane asylum came by again, i grabbed my shot gun, aimed, aaaaand..... POW!!!!! The guy dropped, the other guy splashed water on the guy i shot, and he woke up, "$#$^&#&*& TRANQUILIZER DARTS!!!" They charged at me, i threw my 50 cats at them, and then released the hounds. they walked in grabbed me, and took me away. "ILL KILL THOSE STUPID YORKIES FOR NOT GUARDING ME!! RAWR!!"
Any notes about your characters: Always hides his face under a hood, likes to be in shadows.



Gonna be claimed

How powerful are the twisters? Compare them to one of Stella's tornadoes.

Hmmm. they could destroy half of a house.

So about 1/5 as powerful as Stella... I guess that's reasonable.

But how much does each power tire him?

Controlling the winds? hmmmmm. maybe a small bit, like he could do it for like 4 hours, since his father is god of all the winds. but the flying on the winds, if he is high up, he has about 10 seconds to get down, he lives on air, without it, he will die in 10 seconds.