horselover96's Characters

Name: Hunter Ragsdale
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Steely pearl blue
Hair: dark Blonde
Height: 5'9"
Body Type: lean
Skin Color: lightly Tan
Roman God Parent:Discordia
Mortal Parent:Thomas Ragsdale
Country of Origin:United States of America in valdosta ,Ga
Talents: sword fighting and war devistation
Weapon**: a long emperial gold sword
Flaws:he is tough to the ones he loves,makes trouble everywhere he goes,horribly destructive, hardly ever eats, and he cant foucus when he is doing something constructive
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CJ*:He lived with his father and half sister in Savanah,GA till he was 8 and his father shipped him off to camp due to his destucive behavior . He often got into trouble for his destuctie behavior he loved his family , but espicially his grandmother who he never gets to see anymore. He nearly killed his whole famioy one day and nopw he gets to see his sister evryother summer.he was home schooled after he was expelled from a local school for deystroying the basketball courts
his birthday october,24 1996
RP Example*:I was standing in the back of the group and staring across the feild reading the leaders eyes to try to get his strategy . I read his stratgye quickly as I can and catch on quickly and he's is going to flank left then go fake right and go to the center . I smirked and told the leader to flank right fake left then go to the center sand we will win
Any notes about your characters:none

Name:Alysiter Kline
Age:15
Gender:Male
Eyes:Violet purple
Hair: black and shaggy hanging barley over his eyes
Height:6'2
Body Type:tall and slender
Skin Color:dark tan
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent:Mary-anne Kline
Country of Origin:United States Of America Little Rock, AR
Pets:a tabby cat called Ruby
Talents:sword fighting and stealth
Weapon**:a black handled celestial bronze sword
Flaws:hates the light because it hurts his eyes and effects his vision, scared of water doesnt help Him when near water, he is color blind,and He is quite cocky and get a little full of himself.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):he can speak to the dead they come to him as spirits or just as voices of who they once where and he speaks to them only when he is spoken to and he can only speak to 20 gohst a day and he can talk them into telling him what he needsd to know or wants to know about those he has qestions about
Life Before CHB*:He was raised by his mother and step father he went to a local school where he stayed close to his cousins.He loves his family but he is to endangering to his family so they sent him awaya nd he always stucl close to his family,but he never ventured to far away. Now he's thousands of miles away and he thinks of his little sister Allya everday. He and allya did everything together and he loved her. She was the only one besides his grandmother thatnunderstood him in his whoile family and he loves them both more than anything.
RP Example*:I was sitting in my cabin on my bed thinkling to myself while my pet cat ruby was sitting on my chest sleeping and i looked around and heard voices of the demigods that had died from this cabin and I listned . till I couldn't take it any more and grabbed my i-pod and started to listen to my music.
Any notes about your characters: none

can someone please tell me what i need to change

Don't double post. This one is an issue with the Roman god parent. I need to talk to Elle about it. (Mainly because we don't have a descriptive Roman form)

ok thank you

Seeing the Doors of Death? I'm not sure how that would be a power but I wouldn't allow it.

No to the Raven, he can only own a domesticated animal.

Why does he hate the light, how is that a flaw? He "was dipped in the river of sticks as an infant an nearly died" Do you mean "River Styx"? If that's the case that would not be allowed.

He needs one physical flaw.

Life Before CHB needs to be 10 complete sentences.

RP example needs to be 10 complete sentences.

At this point if everything were fixed, I wouldn't award you with the drachmas. This is a "Descriptive Form" for a reason. There is very little text on here, and not really even worthy of an award. You may fix it, and add more detail and we'll see from there, or you can fix it, and get it approved with out the drachmas, it's your choice.

i fixed this to the best of my ablity

As of now we are limiting the descriptive form to Greeks. You should switch to the Roman form which can be found here: http://www.camphalfblood.org/t3-character-form#Roman

I wouldn't allow him to see when a person dies.

I would not allow him to own a parrot.

His first flaw doesn't work. Everyone grieves for the dead. Change that. And you still need a physical flaw.

i switched it over

No you didn't this isn't the roman form, this is:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Eyes:
Hair:
Height:
Body Type:
Skin Color:
Roman God Parent:
Mortal Parent:
Country of Origin:
Talents:
Weapon**:
Flaws:
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CJ*:
RP Example*:
Any notes about your characters:

i fiannly got it right i hope

i fixed it i hope

Reading strategies of armies isn't a power.

i hope it's fixed now

As a new user, I would recommend you fill out our normal character form, found here: http://www.camphalfblood.org/t3-character-form

It's a lot simpler and the rules are less strict than the detailed form. The form you used is meant for people with more rp experience.

How is "can find a way to turn any good plan into a failure" a power? Remember that you don't have to have powers.

Also your grammar could use some help. For a start, remember to capitalize all Is.

i beleve it's fixed

He can't control people. That's powerplay, and isn't really a power of Discordia.

I hope that fixed it

I fixed it and hsave editied hoping this will be my last revisisan

"can cause devistaion to his enemies"

Please elaborate on this power, which doesn't really relate to Discordia.

Keep in mind that you don't have to have powers.

How exactly does he speak to the dead? Like do they come to him as ghosts or what?

thank you for all the help I will edit it immiditly

I hope it it is too your likeing