horselover96's Characters

You still didn't elaborate.

What happens when he causes "devastation"? What happens to the people, or surrounding area when he uses his power?

A slipped disk in his back isn't really a flaw. It's not like it's some sort of life crippling wound. It can heal on it's own, or can be fixed with surgery if really severe. Since it is just an injury, I imagine drinking some nectar would fix it right away. I'd remove that.

Is there a limit to how many ghosts he can talk to? Could he talk to the ghosts and convince them to do his bidding?

I beleive I have fixed it

I hope it is elaborated enough

Name:Alya Remoire
Age:12
Gender:female
Eyes:Emerald green
Hair:strawberry blonde
Height:5'1
Body Type: lean ,but well built
Skin Color: lightly sun kissed
God Parent: Eris
Mortal Parent: Edwad Remoire
Country of Origin:United states of America
Pets:A '1"6 long black corn snake named Dylan that her brother gave her before he left
Talents: archery,trickery,and sword fighting
Weapon**:a short celestial bronze sword and bow with a quiver of arrows
Flaws: easliy angerded, a bully, never backs down from a fight, intimidating ,and conceeded
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*: She was raised in Savanah ,GA by her dad and brother Damon who was 18 when he left for college . She wasn't much of a trouble makeruntill her brother left when she was four and when he left he gave her his pet snake dylan. He had gotten that snake fromtheir dad when he was five.She loved Hunter so much she cried for days when her dad sent him off to camp .Her dad saidto her alot you look just like your mother and then he would just smile and look away.She was sent to campwhen she was 10.
RP Example*: I sat alone at the archery range thinking about home and about Damon oh how i miss Damon. I slowly turned around to leave the archery range and saw standing in front of me a larger shadow."Who ... who are you ?" I asked scared and slowly reached
for my sword. I raised my sword and said " I'm not scared of who ever you are." and lunged foward. I loked up saw the face of my
adversary and saw it was the kid from the Apollo cabin who follows me around everywhere ."Do you just like follow me around or something?"
i asked calmly lowering my sword.
Any notes about your characters:hasn't been claimed yet

Her brother can't be Roman if she's Greek. Either they're both Roman, or both Greek.

How big is the corn snake?

That's not a power of Discordia. Seeing fears and Nightmares would be associated with Phobos or Deimos.

Name:Rain Wilson
Age:17
Gender:male
Eyes:smokey grey
Hair: black that hangs in his eyes
Height:6'2
Body Type: slender
Skin Color:deep tan and lightens toward his face
Roman God Parent:Bellona
Mortal Parent:Mitchell Wilson
Country of Origin:United States of America , Sanfransisco,CA
Talents:Sword fighting and judgment
Weapon**:Imperial gold sword with an all black handle
Flaws:doesn't think before he does something,doesnt take orders well, has a negatuive attitude ,and in a fight is in it
to win it.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CJ*: He was raised by his father and grandmother in down town sanfransisco. He loved his family
and never ventured to far from his grandmother untill she died. She died in his arms and he blamed himself and
she a healthy elderly woman and thats when his father took him to lupa and he was taken to camp Jupiter. He hasnt
heard from his father since. He thinks of his father often,and thinks of acting in vengenceon the person that killed his father.
RP Example*:I sat back and watched the people arounf me.I smiled when this cute daughter of venus walked by I didnt know her name ,
but she was perfect. she had flawless skinn and brown eyes and auburn hair."Hi I'm Rain and you are?" I asked her shyly smiling and looked at her from across the table.My grey eyes met her green eyes ans she smiled at me then walked away and I got up and followed her. He thought about who he weas and who she was sand stopped in his tracks.
Any notes about your characters:none

I changed it

I changed it

Creating illusions really isn't a power of Discordia.

4 feel long is too long in my opinion. I'd allow it to be 1'6"

I wouldn't allow Morta as a god parent. She was the Roman counterpart of one of the fates.

Would you mind trying to fix the typos in your form? There are quite a few of them, and it makes it difficult to read.

Does the power pass?

You didn't change anything. You removed the word "illusion" and that's about it.

Change the power.

I hope this is sattisfactory

I cahnged himto a son of Bellona

I will fix them momentairly

I cahnges it to 1'6"

You have 41 and 1/2 feet long... I'm guessing that's a typo, but it needs to be changed

...What you're asking for is basically charmspeak, which we don't allow. Either change the power or remove it.

I removed

Fixed I hope

















Hunter Ragsdale/Discordia 16(new picture)

Spoiler:

I fixed the typos