Daisy marie johnson

Name: Daisy Marie Johnson
Age:4
Gender :Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: blonde
Height: 0.98m
Body Type: Average
Skin Colour: light tan
God Parent: Unclaimed
Mortal Parent: Matty Johnson
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: Puppy Hell hound named "Shadow"
Talents : Colouring , Isometric Drawing,Reading
Weapon**: None yet
Flaws: Childish , Proud, Easily annoyed
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*:Daisy was raised by her father who enrolled her in tuition lessons at 2 years old because of her amazing IQ level..
She began to read at 18 months and surprised many people including many psychiatrists within two months she could read 50 page books.
She one day had a supply teacher named Mr. Mudigo who smelt of a farm with a hint of green grass and when she read the Greek books especially the story about Theseus and how he beat the Minotaur Mr. Mudigo became very angry with her and became to grow his shoulders hunching
.She quickly decided to hide in a bin the unbearable smell kept the Minotaur off her scent and 20 minutes later she heard her father and tried to describe the events she had just witnessed.
He grabbed a taser from his pocket and with the other hand he scooped Daisy up.
And then ran to the car checking his back.
He immediately drove her to camp and apologised to Chiron of the age she was at.
Her Father hurried away while daisy was assleep
RP Example*: I crawled over to the door with a water bomb in hand 'There's got to be a post person soon'I thought.
I placed the water bomb securely under the mat making sure it would only explode when trodden on and I made sure it wouldn't roll away.
I crawled away quickly seeing the Delivery van stop at the foot of our drive.
Suddenly there was a knock and Dad ran to the door which the mat was at the foot of Suddenly a loud splash came to my ears and I turned to my dad and he was soaked through
"Daisyyyy!"he moaned
I began to giggle in pleasure then seconds later I burst out laugh looking at my embarrassed dad.
Any notes about your characters:

Hellhound limitations

20 miles per day when fully trained

Please go through and edit your Life Before CHB, there are a lot of typos and errors, and it's difficult to understand/read.

Edited sorr about grammar phones playin up

No one can be 0.65 cm tall. Please change her height appropriately.

Also, try to fix your spelling and grammar mistakes. Things like this:
"Her father then left the asleep and soon to be teared up daisy."
is still difficult to understand.

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What did she try to describe?
The last line of Life Before CHB is really awkward, change it.

Edit your RP example. It's really vague

edited ut about the rp you can't expect her to kill monsters yet so I based this rp exaple on somthing my cousin would do

You left out Name and Age...

Again, your height is completely unreasonable. Remember that centimeters (cm) are a fairly small unit of measurement. (about the size of the first joint on your thumb.) Most adults are between 4 feet 10 inches and 6 feet 4 inches (147.32 - 193.04 cm). Children are obviously shorter, but that can give you a general idea.

Do you have a free character slot? One of your spoilers has 5 characters in it. Perhaps you should list your characters in your signature rather than just having character pictures.

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"Suddenly there was a knock and my dad walked to the mat which had a water bomb underneath "Daisyyyy!"he moaned.
I began to giggle in pleasure then seconds later I burst out laugh looking at my embarrassed dad."

That's the part I was talking about. Edit that, I'm not even sure what's happening.

.85 meters is still pretty short for a 4 year old girl. Usually they're around 3'3" you have her placed around 2'5" edit her height.

Can the hell hound shadow travel?

edited and the hell hound will when they're daisy is at a decent age like 9

How far will it be able to shadow travel?

100 miles is the limit when fully trained which will be when the hellhound is 9 the maximum amount is twice a day both amounts must equal 100 or she will be stranded however extra it is

100 miles is FAR too much. Drop it lower than 20

Ok

...Would you mind putting written documentation of the hell hound's shadow travel limits?

Under 20 miles.

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Edite sorry

No. The Hell Hound may shadow travel a TOTAL of 20 miles IN A SINGLE DAY. It may NOT add up to more.

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Please add something about the limit per day. I.E. "20 miles in one day"

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I'm not convinced of the height. You could change it to feet and inches and make that easier to understand. Just because you are British, does not mean you have to measure everything in centimeters and meters.

I can't work height in foot and inches out