Charlie johnson

Name:Charlie johnson
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:brown
Hair:black
Height:160 cm
Body Type:not fat
Skin Color:dark
God Parent:thantos
Mortal Parent:emily johnson
Country of Origin:canada
Pets:1 month old hellhound
Talents:greif counselling
Weapon**:stygian iron sword
Flaws:very afraid of rats, injured ears, which flare up sometimes when he gets angry
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): shadow travel(once a day), about 1000 miles,summon dead skelatons
Life Before CHB*:he was the unpopular one in school, and spent his free time in graveyards.One day, on his 12th birthday, his father gave him his daggerduring one of his graveyard walks. The monsters started to attack him, and a satyr came and picked him up ti camp half-blood
RP Example*:as i was walking, in the street, i was attacked by a cyclops. i summoned sevarel dead warriors, and i instantly felt drowsy. fortunetly, the cyclops was hurt pretty bad, and i ran off to my house
Any notes about your characters:he is very fast

Please add two more flaws.
How many of the dead can he summon at once?
Are they like skeletons or more like zombies?
How far can he shadow travel at once?
Add at least two more sentences to your life before CHB.
Add at least three more sentences to your RP example.
16 cm is tiny. Maybe try for a more realistic height?

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If his isn't fat, what is his body type like? Is he scrawny? Muscular? Lean? Be more specific.
Can his hell hound shadow travel?

Injured ears? Please elaborate. Add two more flaws.

1,000 miles is WAY too much our limit is somewhere under twenty miles
How many skeletons can he summon in a day? How long do they stay around?

He's not allowed to have contact with a god before camp, change that.
Add two more sentences to "Life Before CHB"

Add two more sentences to "RP Example"