Austin Lee Creed (Done)

Name: Austin Lee Creed
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: blue/black
Hair: black
Height: 5'9"
Body Type: Mesomorph
Skin Color: Tan"ish
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Kelly Creed
Country of Origin: U.S.A.
Pets: a black mouse called Squeaks
Talents: Light on his feet handy with an axe, and is witty whenever you get to know him, Extremely loyal.
Weapon**: Stygian iron war axe named Snow and Stygian iron tomahawk named Frost
Flaws: Shy, Afraid of large groups, has Asthma, and a little bit of Pride
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): can shadow travel once per day about 5 miles but needs to rest afterward and raise 1 undead a day which are destroyed by weapons or destroyed by all elements some quicker than others in this order fire, earth, wind, water. it lasts about 30min and can't hold guns but possibly swords or other melee weapon but mostly is unarmed
Life Before CHB*: Before CHB Austin led a pretty normal life. He lived with his mom and his awesome step-father John and older step sister who is the nicest person in the world. Then on his 12th b-day a monster attacked his house in which his mom took out a black tomahawk and threw it at the monster dissolving it. Then told Austin everything she knew about his father giving him the tomahawk. Finally Austin’s Mom called a satyr to take him to CHB and after a long and tiresome journey he arrived. And now is trying to fit in with his half brothers and sisters and train his new found powers and weapons.
RP Example*: One day I was sitting on the beach. When suddenly a flash of random lighting brought my attention to a stone on the beach I have never noticed before. In this stone was a hilt of a sword and most likely the rest was in the stone. The hilt looked to be made out of gold and three gems a blue green one a sky blue one and a black one and some Latin writing that I can read because I'm Greek. So I say what the heck and pull the hilt it slides about 4in before stopping as in saying not yet and the blade seemed to be made out of Stygian Iron, Celestial Bronze and some sort of gold I sigh and decide to walk away and come back another day to pull the sword from the stone.
Any notes about your characters: wears the CHB t-shirt, Black cloth duster, dark blue jeans and Red converses

Hi!

What's a 'seemingly invincible' mouse? Can you detail a bit?

The powers are too strong.
I don't believe healing wounds is a power to Thanatos.
Besides, would you mind adding punctuation? It's difficult to read the sentences you're typing up.

Edited

Take away that with the number of slashes to kill the undead.

And I'm not sure about the pet. I'll ask an admin.

Edited

Last thing: by 'invincible' you mean that the mouse cannot die, right?

He can die he is just harder to kill I that makes sense. He can be killed by monsters and Demigods