ywater411's Characters

Name: Chris Diamond
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Eyes: Dark green
Hair: black with blonde highlights
Height: 5"6
Body Type: average
Skin Color: slightly tan
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Rebbeca Diamond;mom
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: Wolf
Talents: Gifted swordsmen and great chariot racer
Weapon**: A spear thats 4 feet long, and can channel electricity.
Flaws: Can easily be manipulated, has a very short temper, and is pretty slow.
Life Before CHB*: Chris and his mom lived near a dump to block Chris's scent. He was always a loner. He never went to school, and learned by his mom. Soon enough monsters came and attacked them. One day a Satyr found him and took him to camp halfblood safely.
RP Example*: I was sitting in my room, reading a book, when I heard my mom scream. I bolted out the door, ran outside, and saw my mom being dragged along the road by a big figure, with one eye. She screamed. "Mom!" I yelled. I ran towards her, but then all of a sudden, a half-goat, half-man stopped me before, somehow, making me fall asleep. The last words I heard were,"You're safe now..."
Any notes about your characters: Has dyslexia and ADHD

YOu can't have a stygion iron sword with Ares.
Add two flaws.
Your Life before CHB needs to be at least 5 sentences long.

I edited. :)

Add one more flaw.

I edited.

Approved, because I assume you have no powers.

Name: Rebbeca Stygion
Age: 15
Gender: female
Eyes: Ocean blue
Hair: Brunnete
Height: 5"8
Body Type: average
Skin Color: slightly tan
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: James Stygion; dad
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: none
Powers: none
Talents: Singing, and attracting boys.
Weapon**: celestial bronze sword
Flaws: Can easily be manipulated, flirty, and is stuck to herself
Life Before CHB*: Rebbeca and Chris lived near a dump to block Rebbeca's scent. She always complained about the scent. She was extremely popular in school. But soon enough, monsters attacked her. Luckily, she ran all the way to CHB.
RP Example*: "Run Rebbeca, Run!" I heard my dad yell in the distance."Aaauuuggghhh" I screamed, while tripping. I had twisted my ankle. Tears were streaming down my face, while I looked around. It was dark, and all I saw were trees. I ran for as long as I could. I finally stopped at a camp. I limped in.
Any notes about your characters: Has dyslexia.

Children of Aphrodite aren't allowed to have Stygian iron swords.
Try a celestial bronze sword instead.

Ok. I edited. :)

Approved

Name :Zennetus "Zen" Goulding
Age: 12
Gender: male
Eyes:dark blue, like lightining strikes.
Hair: dark brown
Height:5"1"
Body Type :normal
Skin Color: slightly tan
God Parent:Bia
Mortal Parent: rodger goulding
Country of Origin: USA
Pets:none
Talents: is a very good swordsman
Weapon**: celestial bronze sword
Flaws: is very competitive, is easily manipulated, and is not very fast.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*: Zen lived with his father and 2 mortal sisters. one day they all got seperated. So Zen had to find his way to CHB. while on his way of exploring some woods a satayr found him and brought him safely to CHB.
RP Example*: I was running. Some kind of hound was chasing me. I ran as fast as i could and hid behind a rock. I knew that it would soon hear my breathing. It jumped right in front of me out of nowhere. "This is the end." i thought, when i heard a sound, like music, when a vine came out of nowhere and wrapped around the hound. that was the last thing i remembered that day.
Any notes about your characters: Has ADHD and dyslexia.

He may not have a Stygion iron sword, they are for underworld demigod's only.

Oh o.k. is celestial bronze o.k.?

Yes.

i editid! :D

Approved.

Name: Mason Garcia
Age: 15
Gender: male
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Height: 5'7
Body Type; skinny
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Deimos
Mortal Parent: Diana Garcia
Country of Origin: America
Pets: A huskey named Chaz
Talents: Fast, Swift, Strong.
Weapon**: 2.5 ft. long Celestial Bronze sword
Flaws: moody, Low self esteem, easily manipulated.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can sense someone's biggest fear and use it against them. (Example: If your scared of snakes, he can form the image of a snake in your head.)Can use it three times a day. The image lasts for 15 seconds.
Life Before CHB*: Mason had a good life, nice parents, and friends. But he was always different. He didn't like the way he looked, or felt. He tried suicide before, but he survived the gunshot to his chest, miraculously. He ran away from home, trying to find a place where he fit in.
RP example: How'd I do it? How'd I survive? I went over the facts. I found a remote location. I didn't tell anyone. I wrote a note and placed it on my head. Then, I shot. The next day, i woke up in the hospitol, then ran as fast as i could away. And here I am. I heard police sirens in the distance. I told myself "Gotta run." Then sprinted toward a hill.
Any notes about your characters: Has a big scar across his chest from the suicide attempt.

We don't allow Stygian Iron for children of Aeolus.

How many times a day can he control the wind, and for how long can he control it each time? What's the most powerful thing he can do with wind?

You left out your RP Example....

what can they have?

Celestial bronze.

finished! Sorry took so long.

Add another flaw.
Your power is too powerful. Normally we only allow regular demigods to be pushed back up to 10 feet. How much can he be slowed down? (Without the power he would be on the ground in _ seconds with the power he is on the ground in _ seconds)

Okay, edited! Hopefully for the last time.

You haven't told us for how long each time he can control wind. How large would the person have to be, in order to be blasted back a full ten feet?

Okay, fixed it all up.
Hope its right :D