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    Trouble

    Theseus12
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    Post by Theseus12 2/11/2012, 9:23 pm

    Trouble

    Who ordained it to be
    To let Trouble strike at me?
    I never mean it to be so
    But Forever I am causing Woe.
    With Each Tiny step I take
    I cause my World an Earthquake.
    I'm made to feel quite horrible
    as though I've done a thing Abom'nible.
    And Whilst I try To make Things Well
    I feel put through The Bowels of Hell.
    It could just be my Conscience,
    But my Soul's Pains are Raucous
    If it weren't Human Frailty,
    I'd see Trouble's an Evil Deity.
    Never hast it given me
    A respite from my life's Misery.
    Though I try ways to escape
    it seems I just Delay the Hate.
    and while my escapes release
    unto me a sense of Peace,
    I truly Wish that I did know
    A Peaceful Way to end my Woe.



    this poem was made long before camp, so don't think it's directed at you guys.

    CynicalSkin
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    Post by CynicalSkin 2/16/2012, 10:44 pm

    Nice job! I like the edgy-ness to the poem!
    Theseus12
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    Post by Theseus12 3/2/2012, 11:53 pm

    thanks. a masterpiece, i doubt it to be, but I like the feedback.

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