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Name:Tom Smith
Age:16
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Black
Height:5'5
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Adele Smith
Country of Origin:England
Pets:Hellound named shredder who is the size and weight of a rottweiler that can shadow travel for 5 km but only in one day
Talents:Magic tricks as in card tricks
Weapon**:Celestial bronze sword
Flaws:mutters rude things to other people,gets detention all the time,isnt very smart,bullies others,and hates old people.
Life Before CHB*: Student who had never been populalar in any shape or form .He was as dumb as a doornail before he came to camp half blood.his Mum looked after him most of the time because he didnt know his dad was Ares.he had no brothers or sisters until he found out he did. Now his life was as happy as ever
RP Example*:I hate school it is so boring life sucks.Whoooaaaaa where am i going BANG!!!! this is so cool im in some kinda camp.Smith your a Demigod the son of Ares THAT IS SO EPIC PULL yourself together.Ok i must have some pretty sick skills imma start swordfighting Whoa Smith you just took them all out. Just then a symbol popped upon my head then I was accepted
Any notes about your characters:Really cool

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None

how big is the hellhound? Please give the name of the mortal parent. Is the weapon Celestial Bronze? List three flaws. War is not a power. Life before CHB and RP Example has to be five sentences.

Name:tom smith
Age:16
Gender:boy
Eyes:blue
Hair:black
Height:5ft
Body Type:athletic
Skin Color:white
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:female
Country of Origin:England
Pets:Dog named Cassey
Talents:none
Weapon**:sword
Flaws:none
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:student
RP Example*:none
Any notes about your characters:none

Follow what the staff says and edit your frommusing the little edit button on the top right of your post. Then, tell us you edited.

Is the sword celestial bronze?

All demigods have flaws. Add three to the flaws part.

Life Before CHB has to be five COMPLETE sentences. RP example is writing a story in you character's point of view. That has to be 5 sentences too. That s how you role-play after you get your character approved, you follow what you did in the RP example.

Name:Tommy Smith
Age:16
Gender:Malr
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Height:
Body Type:Name:
Age:16
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Black
Height:5'3
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Adele Leuillette
Country of Origin:United Kingdom
Pets:Hellhound named Cassey
Talents:None
Weapon**:Axe called the Shredder
Flaws:Shy but very Fierce
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):None
Life Before CHB*:Student studying Rugby who wasnt the most popular kid but this day made him feel like the most popular kid ever. Bang where am I i think im some kind of camp. SMITH, yes sir , you are now a demigod at camp half blood. Why am I here becxause your dad is Ares and that makes you a Demigod but know it is time for swordfighting. Easy peasy I took on 5 people and beat them all this is AMAZING.
RP Example*:Springting through the forest i looked to my right and saw the Cyclops next to me.I lifted up shredder and swiped at the creature. RRRAAAAAGGGGHHHH it shouted and grabbed me in its hand. I felt the ground shake and a massive hellhound came charging towards the cyclops. My hellhound named Cassey jumped up and ripped the Cyclopses head off. For at last the Cyclops was defeated.
Any notes about your characters:Hilariously funny

Where is your character's name?

You have some repeated sections of the form, I suggest you edit those out. Also, don't repost your form -- use the edit buttons to make changes.

Life Before CHB needs to be five sentences long, and so does RP Example. RP Example is like writing a story from your character's point of view.

Name:Tom Smith
Age:16
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Black
Height:5'5
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Adele Smith
Country of Origin:England
Pets:Hellound named shredder who is the size and weight of a rottweiler that can shadow travel for 5 km but only in one day
Talents:Magic tricks as in card tricks
Weapon**:Celestial bronze sword
Flaws:mutters rude things to other people,gets detention all the time,isnt very smart,bullies others,and hates old people.
Life Before CHB*: Student who had never been populalar in any shape or form .He was as dumb as a doornail before he came to camp half blood.his Mum looked after him most of the time because he didnt know his dad was Ares.he had no brothers or sisters until he found out he did. Now his life was as happy as ever
RP Example*:I hate school it is so boring life sucks.Whoooaaaaa where am i going BANG!!!! this is so cool im in some kinda camp.Smith your a Demigod the son of Ares THAT IS SO EPIC PULL yourself together.Ok i must have some pretty sick skills imma start swordfighting Whoa Smith you just took them all out. Just then a symbol popped upon my head then I was accepted
Any notes about your characters:Really cool

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None

You do not need to make a new topic every time.

Life Before CHB has to be 5 COMPLETE Sentences.

Magic is not a talent. It's not a power for Ares kids either.

Most of your flaws aren't flaws at all.... They're mainly positive. Flaws are bad things about a person, like mumbling a lot incoherently or having a really bad limp.

How large is his hellhound?

When you say "magic" for his talent, do you mean like pulling card tricks on people or, like, telekinesis? Also, you never answered my question about how large his hellhound is.

Your hellhound is too large; at most, we'd allow him to be around the size and weight of a full grown Rottweiler (as in, 22-27 inches tall and 100-ish lbs).

Can he only use his hellhound to shadow-travel once a day? If yes, how far can they go at most?

Approved.