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    Frizzle's poems!

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    Post by Geniosity 9/30/2012, 6:39 pm

    Welcome to Frizzle's poem collection!

    Homework. This one is about, well... Homework, and how much I hate it.
    Avg. Rating: 10 {2 ratings}
    Homework
    Homework, homework, I think you stink,
    I wish I could flush you down the sink.
    If I had dynamite, i'd get three sticks,
    Then strap 'em together, and blow you to bits.
    If I could, I would, but I guess that I can't,
    So I guess maybe I should go on a rant.
    Do teachers really find that much pleasure,
    In torturing us, guess to them that's a treasure.
    We've already fried our brains at school,
    But now at home? Man, that's not cool.
    Every day at home I scream why?
    because it makes me wanna cry,
    I sometimes wonder why I should even try.
    And when i'm having fun, you always foil it,
    So I think i'll just flush you down the toilet...
    FLUSH!

    This next one is about the ongoing debate on wether or not we should retire the penny.
    Avg. Rating: 10 {2 ratings}
    Should we retire the penny?
    Nobody cares about the "worthless" penny,
    In value and size, it's definitely mini.
    Long ago two could buy you a lot,
    But now, the penny ain't doin' so hot.
    Now, it's just a nuisance found in sofas and desks,
    And look for them? Why, people don't even check.
    But it costs more than one to make just one,
    That's why it's so close to being gone.
    Many other countries have retired similar coins,
    Is it time for us to join?
    Many think it's time for the penny to retire,
    But then the lowest value of coins will get higher and higher.
    Should we do it or not, it's an ongoing debate,
    But we'd better decide before it's too late.


    I'd like it if you gave me ratings, descriptions, anything that could help me improve! You can ALSO tell me ideas you have and I might make them into something epic!


    Last edited by Frizzlepuss on 10/1/2012, 2:36 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Geniosity 9/30/2012, 7:14 pm

    Should we retire the penny?
    Nobody cares about the "worthless" penny,
    In value and size, it's definitely mini.
    Long ago two could buy you a lot,
    But now, the penny ain't doin' so hot.
    Now, it's just a nuisance found in sofas and desks,
    And look for them? Why, people don't even check.
    But it costs more than one to make just one,
    That's why it's so close to being gone.
    Many other countries have retired similar coins,
    Is it time for us to join?
    Many think it's time for the penny to retire,
    But then the lowest value of coins will get higher and higher.
    Should we do it or not, it's an ongoing debate,
    But we'd better decide before it's too late.


    Last edited by Frizzlepuss on 9/30/2012, 7:42 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    Post by Crazy 9/30/2012, 7:24 pm

    Well I rate the first one with a 9.5 because even though you metion not doing it you forgot to metion it migh effect your grades but thats way it's only half a point gone because it's an oppinion.

    The second one is a 10 no problemo.
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    Post by Geniosity 9/30/2012, 7:41 pm

    Okay thanks for your ratings!
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    Post by Crazy 9/30/2012, 10:16 pm

    Welcome!
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    Post by tyler oakley 9/30/2012, 10:31 pm

    10 for 10 for both! Btw I totally agree with you on the h/w one. Sixth grade had lots of that junk :P
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    Post by Crazy 9/30/2012, 10:42 pm

    Wait 'till you get to 8th grade.
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    Post by Geniosity 10/1/2012, 2:37 pm

    Homework is the reason i'm having a hard time making my story. [Gee, can't WAIT 'till 8th grade...]

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