Chelle's characters

Name: Mak Garcia

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Eyes: Dark, chocolate brown

Hair: Black

Height: 6'1

Body Type: Lean, athletic built

Skin Color: Light tan; he is of Hispanic descent

God Parent: Cratus

Mortal Parent: Sandra Garcia

Country of Origin: USA; San Antonio, Texas.

Pets: --

Talents: Mak is great at soccer. He has been playing it ever since he was a kid.

Weapon**: 3 ft. Celestial bronze sword. It is disguised as a watch on his wrist, but when he pushes a button on the side, it turns into the sword. Mak can lift anything that weighs between 500-700 lbs. He gets very tired the heavier that he lifts.

Flaws: Mak could be a stubborn kid, along with being moody whenever nothing gets his way, and having a bit of a temper when he people start to become annoying towards him.

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None

Life Before CHB*: Mak and his mom lived in San Antonio since Mak was born. Mak was "that guy" at school, basically. Everyone knew him only of sports, since he was one of the fastest runners at school. It was until one accident where Mak got into some "underage drinking" problems and was suspended from school and of his beloved sport, soccer. He was depressed and his mother just didn't know what to do with him. Sandra thought the only solution to help her son, was to tell him the truth of his father and send him to where he belongs, Camp Half-Blood.

RP Example*: Mak sat on the edge of the couch, his head throbbing with pain. His mother was sitting across from him in the recliner, her eyes swollen and red from crying. The taste of the alcohol still lingered on Mak's tongue, and it tortured him. His education was done. His sport career was done. The trust and respect from his mother...gone. These thoughts made the throbbing even more painful, and he winced. He leaned forward, holding his head, looking down at the ground. He didn't want to look into his mothers eyes. Why should he? This is her worst nightmare.

Any notes about your characters:

Can Mak lift things 500-700 powers just because he's that strong, or does he need something like a power boost? Also, we don't allow speed powers for kids of Cratus, and especially not that fast.

Is his sword Celestial bronze, not just regular bronze?

He can just lift things 500-700. He gets very tired though the higher weight that he goes.
Aww I guess no speed for him then.

It is celestial bronze.

I would suggest, then, that you edit the speed out of his form, put his ability to lift very heavy things into his talents/skills, and put that his weapons are Celestial bronze.

Ok! Edited.

If his weight-lifting isn't because of a sort of power boost, I would suggest you move the weight-lifting to talents or notes.

Okay! I edited it again.

Approved.

Name: Bethany (Beth) Subhara

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Eyes: Dark brown

Hair: Long, wavy black

Height: 5'7

Body Type: Slim

Skin Color: Dark tan

God Parent: Aglaia

Mortal Parent: Rashan Subhara

Country of Origin: Born in India, raised in New York City

Pets: None

Talents: Dancing ever since she was 5

Skills: She is a great cook and is always cooking for Thanksgiving

Weapon: A celestial bronze dagger.

Flaws: Prideful, Impatient, Boastful

Powers: None

Life Before CHB: Beth was addicted to dancing back in NYC. Her father had decided to put her into dance class when he would always find her dancing in her room all alone. Beth was born in Kanpur, India but had moved to NYC when she was about 2. It was the greatest transition in her life, even though she was too young to remember. New York City was where she could debut herself as a Broadway dancer, her dream ever since she saw In the Heights. It was until after having an interview with the head director of dance at Julliard, her father called her and rushed her to Camp Half-Blood.

RP Example: Beth sat in the car, slumped back against the seat. She still had her tights and tank top on from dance, her hair in a tight bun on her head. Her eyes were swollen red from crying. Her whole life had been ruined. Her dream was ruined. "Father, why are you doing this!?" She asked him once again, her voice shaking from anger. Rashan had his eyes stuck on the road. "To keep you safe, Beth. To keep you safe."

Any notes about your characters ---

I actually do not know, but powers are optional.

We only allow celestial bronze for weapons.

Dyslexia is a standard disorder for demigods. Please add another flaw to replace it.

Ok! I edited it.

There are three Charites, so I suggest you choose one: Kharis/Aglaia, Pasithea, and I can't find the name of the third one.

Ohh I see. I guess I'll choose Aglaia! Edited.

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Name: Cruz Harper

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Eyes: Bright Green

Hair: Brown

Height: 6'0

Body Type: Lean, well-defined muscles

Skin Color: Caucasian

God Parent: Thanatos

Mortal Parent: Ceilia Harper

Country of Origin: USA

Pets: None

Talents: Plays lacrosse and can also play the piano

Weapon**: A celestial bronze dagger that is disguised as a cross on his necklace.

Flaws: He's a player when it comes to relationships (he can never be committed unless it was really..really true to him.), Likes to start fights, Conceited

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Cruz can make people feel as if they are coming close to death (pretty much a depressed and suicidal feeling.) He can do this to about 5 people a day. The experience lasts for 1-3 minutes. In order for him to do this, he must touch them and think about doing it.

Life Before CHB*: Cruz had a rough life at school, and at home. His Mom was never home, so he got away with anything that he did. His friends were not the nicest people, so he had bad role models as he grew up. He also lived on the streets of the Bronx, New York, where he had nothing much to live with in his dingy apartment. It was until he got in trouble at school for discovering his powers and was immediately sent away to Camp by his Mother.

RP Example*: Cruz sat on the couch, surfing through the cheap cable channels on TV. He was home alone, which wasn't a surprise. When was he ever with his Mom? His lacrosse gear sat in the corner, and he thought about going outside and finding some people to play with, but it was too late at night. 2:00 A.M. in the morning. On a school night. Most parents would get pissed at their kids for staying up late watching TV, but no one was here to give that kind of order to him.

Any notes about your characters: He smokes.._(if thats allowed.)

Hmm.... Thanatos is known more as a god of "gentle" death, not painful death. Also, 30 minutes is much too long for them to feel this; at most, we'd allow perhaps one to three minutes.

Ohh I see. Alright! When you mean gentle, could he have the power of making someone feel as if their body is slowly shutting down
example: long headaches, dizziness, exhaustion, chest pains...etc etc.

Or is that not as gentle as it reads? Lol.

That's definitely not gentle -- gentle would be like dying in your sleep or something.

Ah, okay. I think I'll get rid of the painful death power and use the feeling as if their time is about to end.
Is that power okay?

If you mean what you put for his second power, yes, that's fine. Does he need to be in physical contact with a person in order to make this happen?

Yes, he would have to touch them for them to feel as if they are going to die.
Example: A simple hand on the shoulder could make them have this feeling.
Everyone he touches doesn't have this feeling, he must think about doing it while touching the person in order for it to happen.

I would suggest you edit out the first power, add in that he has to physically touch a person to use his second power on them, and reduce how long the second power lasts.

Alright! All edited.

Approved.