Greek Demigod Form:

Name:Anna Collins
Age:16
Gender: Female
Eyes:Grey
Hair:Blonde kinda curly
Height:5'3 1/2"
Body Type: Small Skinny
Skin Color:White
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent:Kenny Collins
Country of Origin:United States of America
Pets: a small Hell-hound named Kiri
Talents: Swordfighting, planning, and designing
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Sword
Flaws:gets distracted easily,
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*: She never knew who her mother was. She thought she was a normal kid but when she was 8 an unknown person came and killed her father so she was sent to an orphanage. After spending a few years there she ran away because the people there didn't like her and monsters kept attacking her while she was there. While she was on her own, she met a satyr guide who brought her to Camp Half-Blood. There at Camp Half-Blood she grew and trained everyday.
RP Example*: I was running from a big monster who was chasing me. For a weapon I only a bronze sword that my father gave me when he died. I decided to turn around and fight the monster. When I faced him, I swung the sword. In only a few seconds the monster had dissolved into dust.
Any notes about your characters: Dislikes spiders.

I think it would be better to have sword fighting, planning, and designing instead of putting and between them.

How big is the hellhound?

Dyslexia is a standard flaw for demigods. Take it out and add two more flaws.

The powers don't relate to Athena. Athena kids don't usually have powers.

Use COMPLETE sentences for life before CHB. Please make it 5 sentences and put periods in places needed.

Can you fix the second sentence of the RP example? It doesn't make sense. I think you mean, "For a weapon, I used a bronze sword that my father gave me when he died", and add one more sentence to RP example.

Can you define how big a "small" hellhound is? The largest hellhound we'd allow is one the size of a Rottweiler. Can it shadow-travel?

Add two more flaws.