Mace's Characters

Elleon wrote:EVERYONE, whether they realize it or not, has some sort of accent or dialect. Even people who have a "standard American dialect" are considered to have a central US dialect. People from New York do talk a little different than people from California, who speak different than people from Georgia, etc. "None" would not be an acceptable response here, since obviously everyone has some sort of accent or dialect.

You'll need to give her some sort of dialect/accent.

Actually, everybody has that, so it doesn't count as a physical flaw, for the one eye is bigger than the other. So, another one.

Edited both.

Her physical is her ears stick out more than others.

Sounds good.

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Kaden Soft

Name: Kaden Soft
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Skin Tone: Tan
Eye Color: Green. He swears one of his eyes are a lighter green than the other (this is his physical flaw).
Hair Color: A light brown
Hair Length: Not very long. Just covers his head and some of his neck.
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 119 pounds
Body Type: Skinny, very skinny. He doesn't have a lot of muscle, but he has some.
Mortal Parent: Mary Soft; she is a mattress seller
Godly Parent: Hypnos, the god of sleep
Place of Birth: Miami, Florida, America
Date of Birth: December 12th, 1998 (he just turned 14)
Weapon: He has a long CB sword he calls Diegen.
Armor: A regular set of armor (it's CB) he got from camp.
Powers: He has none. He doesn't know if they're gonna develop into him or what.
Pets: None.
Skills/Talents: Running, wrestling, and baseball
Flaws: Is overprotective of friends; can become too brave sometimes; can get mad easily; is easily scared off; hates dark, dark places; can become sarcastic easily; and his physical flaw is he has a robotic wrist, and that scares many people off, making him upset; and lastly, he can't even be near roses without choking himself off.
Strengths: Milk, strangely, gets his energy up.
Weaknesses: He doesn't like bulling. If he even sees bullying he's start feeling queasy, and sympathetic.
Fears: He fears the rage of a god. That'll make him pee his pants.
Personality: Kaden is a nice person. He will do favors for you as long as you just ask nicely. He can be a bit too soft sometimes, though. He tries to act like a man, but always wimps out. Kaden tries his best to be funny, but sometimes his jokes just end up stupid. He is scared easily, you literally could tap a wall and he would jump.
Accent/Dialect: Mid-Central American
Likes: Kaden has always liked girls, and always wanted a girlfriend, if he could find the perfect girl.
Dislikes: Kaden isn't a big fan of reptiles.
Social Status (e.g. loner, popular): He is a bit of both, in a way. He is a loner sometimes when he tries to do things without anyone's help, or he is mad. Kaden has a special touch, though, that he can get friends fast and make himself popular for around two days, then back to just a couple friends or loner.
Appearance: He is very tall and skinny. He only has some muscle, though. Kaden has green eyes that look like the ocean in the morning. He usually wears a stretched-out blue t-shirt and casual jeans or athletic pants. He has short brown hair that's very light. Kaden thinks he's ugly, though. Poor, poor him.
Summer or Year Rounder: He's a Year-Rounder.
Years at Camp: This is his 2nd.
Life Before CHB: Kaden grew up in Miami, Florida, in a nice, wooden beach house.
When Kaden hit three, he had to go to preschool. Although he set fire to many things, he was a good student. He learned his alphabet and some counting. If you saw him at this age you would've guessed he was an Athena kid. Soon, he graduated preschool and went to real school.
He got influenced by some kids that he needed more hobbies. He tried many, but stunk at most. For instance, when Kaden tried to kick a soccer ball, he fell over. Around the time he was eleven, he cut down to only a couple hobbies. Some of these he still stunk at, but not as badly. Miami gave him a lot of things to do, however. He had options like football, tennis, jumping-roping, biking, running, swimming, etc.
One of his hobbies were he went surfing each day. His teacher tried to improve him every day. One day, while surfing, his teacher said he needed him. Kaden followed him into a hut, where he revealed he was a satyr and should got to camp.
He asked his mother, and said his teacher was right. Soon, a monster attacked his mother, killing her. Kaden swore revenge, and his teacher suggested he might be a Nemesis kid. That night, after getting to the dark camp lit by campfires, he was claimed by Hypnos. Kaden felt confused that night as the wind blew in his light brown hair and his feelings felt weird, like a tingling piece of old garbage.
He spent that night as confused as a person that was in the dark place called the Underworld. He quietly paced around his cabin, making the old, black floors squeak loudly in the dark night. He turned on some soothing music that sounded like a bustle of green leaves flowing from side to side, in a pattern of red and yellow. This calmed him. He got back into his bunk, which at that moment felt as hard as brick you would smash into, if bricks were delicate.
He woke up the next morning with sorrow and sadness, not knowing why. He put on his fluffy, white-as-snow slippers and danced into Chiron's office, asking about a bit of everything. Chiron stood up, his brown centaur-horse hair bushy, and told Kaden it was because he was lonely without his mother and his godly-father. He needed some friends.
That day, Kaden dashed around camp, trying to find friends.
After he found some, he knew it was his mother bringing him down. But after a while, Kaden got over it.
And he became the demigod he is now.
Role-playing Example: Kaden kicked aside, rolling down the hill. This was fun. He had never done muddy things before. Quietly, he got up. Kaden ran to his cabin, going in to get his camera. He had seen another on of the creatures he was interested in.
Kaden focused on the Hydro, taking a picture. Hopefully someone else would kill it, so he wouldn't have to. Suddunly, it saw the bright flash and growled. Kaden quickly hid beneath the window. When he showed his face again, it was gone: it was killed.
Notes:

Spoiler:

Explain how he can be "too brave sometimes?"

I only see 9 sentences in his Life Before CHB. Add one more.

I'm going to ask you to add a bit more detail into this. It doesn't really matter where, but it just needs a bit more.

1) Like, he would start getting mad and stuff to a person if they just did something jokingly.
2) OKay, will edit.
3) I'll add detail to History.

Approved.

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