A place for Percy Jackson and the Olympian fans to roleplay.


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    Knight Rider
    Knight Rider


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    Number of posts : 5
    Age : 25
    Registration date : 2012-12-20

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    Post by Knight Rider 12/20/2012, 10:03 am

    Name: Alex Greenhood
    Age: 16
    Gender: male
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: brown
    Height: 1,95 m.
    Body Type: a bit muscular
    Skin Color: pale beige
    God Parent: Aphrodite
    Mortal Parent: Michael Greenhood
    Country of Origin: Australia
    Pets: a baby rabbit named Betty
    Talents: playing basket, playing electric guitar
    Weapon**: a celestial bronze sword
    Flaws: womanizer, bossy, lazy
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
    Life Before CHB*:He grew up in a peaceful village with a lot of friends. He was home schooled and a participant in many theatrical clubs. He went for auditions in many movies but he was never accepted. He was loved by his dad and his friends and that's another reason why he didn't want to go to Camp, but his dad sent him so he would be safe. His biggest dream was to meet his mom one day. He arrived to camp two years ago but his dream never came real.
    RP Example*: Me and my friend, Christine, daughter of Athena, had gone for a walk at the forest. She had just come back to Camp and I still wasn't used to the fact that her hair was now red and not black. She was again telling me about how her life was terrible and about how she was left alone. I hated it when she was so pessimistic."Christine «I said» can you do me a favor?"."Yeah, of course, what is it?"She asked."Shut up!"I shouted.
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    Last edited by Knight Rider on 2/19/2013, 2:36 am; edited 5 times in total
    Jordan
    Jordan
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    Post by Jordan 12/20/2012, 4:13 pm

    Is the sword celestial bronze?

    He needs one more flaw.
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    There are some issues with your Life Before CHB and your RP Example, they both need to be 5 COMPLETE sentences.

    You need complete sentences, these are really choppy, and your grammar needs work.

    Please put quotes " " around the words when a character is speaking, it's confusing otherwise.
    Knight Rider
    Knight Rider


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    Age : 25
    Registration date : 2012-12-20

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    Post by Knight Rider 2/12/2013, 2:46 am

    Edited
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    GwrachSeren
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    Post by GwrachSeren 2/13/2013, 10:18 pm

    Hey! Just a suggestion: why don't you put a form into word or something to check out your spelling and grammar? It needs some work. Please focus on these. They are important or others won't understand what you're trying to say when roleplaying.
    Knight Rider
    Knight Rider


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    Post by Knight Rider 2/18/2013, 2:41 am

    Edited
    nix
    nix
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    Registration date : 2011-11-13

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    Post by nix 2/18/2013, 2:49 am

    How is basket a talent?
    Knight Rider
    Knight Rider


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    Post by Knight Rider 2/19/2013, 2:37 am

    I meant "playing basket",sorry.Edited
    GwrachSeren
    GwrachSeren
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    Post by GwrachSeren 2/19/2013, 7:42 pm

    Basket as in basketball?

    Just a question but you do realise that in roleplay, you cannot control others, right?
    Knight Rider
    Knight Rider


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    Post by Knight Rider 2/21/2013, 2:45 am

    Yes,basketball.And yes,I understand.A friend explained to me everything before I made an account here.
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    Post by Blaze 3/2/2013, 8:38 pm

    What kind of rabbit does he own?

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