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    robert121


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    Post by robert121 2/26/2013, 12:08 pm

    Name: robert thomas white
    Age: 17
    Gender: male
    Eyes: blazing red
    Hair: brown with blond highlights
    Height: 6' 2"
    Body Type: bigger , muscler
    Skin Color: whit pail
    God Parent: Pyriphlegethon- god of internal river of fire
    Mortal Parent: Thomas White
    Pets: a golden retriever that he grew up with and is his closest freind , dogs name is scamp
    Weapon: two katanas on my right hip and a bow , bow is 60 pound compound (pulling back)(5 pounds carrying) and 10 regular arrows, 10 arrows that when it hits the target a flaming explosion happens on it, bow is made of celestial bronze the two katanas are made of celestial bronze,
    Flaws: his limit is i have 20 arrows, can only manipulate flames in a 15 foot radious, bad at close range attacks
    Powers: can manipulate flames, my blood i can make catch fire if mixed in the air (only i can control)
    personality: relaxed but easily pissed off in battle, loving , charming
    personality flaws: single-minded, stubborn,
    Life Before CHB: robert had a hard life growing as a poor child in vancouver bc with an old friend, not knowing who his mother was and his father left her at an early age , robert barely attended but only if it was really important , his passion was a flames, archery and karate called, he loved to hunting to get food, when he needed to leave the town and hunt i always went with him intp the wilderness to survive , i never really had friends but my pet, we practicly lived in the wilderness, but one day we had stumbled upon the camp , the energy from the camp made me feel overwhelmed, but i proceeded to go towards it and here i am.
    Any notes about your characters:
    - cross him or cross his friends be worried
    - he is scared to lose anyone close to him
    - baggy jeans
    - ripped shirt
    - gets angry when you insult his family
    - has a high energy level
    - bigboned but has strengh
    - nicknames "fl"
    - will take time to gain his trust
    - a ragged old sweater
    RP exaple:
    robert woke early in the morning grabbing his bow and quiver as i walk out the door i put my katanas on my left hip and proceed out the door. Robert and his dog run to the forest. Scamp sniffs out a deer and so we stalk it thew the forrest till he felt a weird presence, his curiousness grew with that presence so he followed it the closer he got to it the more overwhelmed he became. buy the time he got close to the gate he fainted waking up the next morning in the hospital beds of the camp.



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    Post by GwrachSeren 2/26/2013, 3:44 pm

    Wouldn't black be a low-light in hair?

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    Where is the roleplay example?
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    Post by robert121 2/27/2013, 11:57 am

    fixed
    GwrachSeren
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    Post by GwrachSeren 2/27/2013, 3:39 pm

    Please edit your Life before Camp. You switch between first and third person. Also, I can't understand where sentences start and end. Can you correct your spelling, punctuation and grammar?

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