Gavin Jones

Name: Gavin Jones
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Eyes: One green, one brown
Hair: Brown
Height: 5'10"
Body Type: Slightly muscular
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Rose Jones
Country of Origin: London England
Pets: None
Talents: Trickery and Swiftness
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Scythes
Flaws: Easily-angered,overexerts himself in battle, gullible
Life Before CHB*: Gavin was a well-known thief throughout London. He took what he could to survive(valuables, food, etc.). As he was growing up, he has been pursued more and more, not knowing who and what the pursuers were. After he had taken all that he could, he traveled to America. He planned going to some camp a fellow thief was going, a place called Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*: I ran with my loot, escaping the police. I jumped over boxes and crates, ignoring any possible obstacles that could kill me. I hid behind a dumpster, hoping they lost me. I sighed in relief. I looked up and saw a man hiding as well. He was tall, and hideous. I looked closer and saw what he was. He had one eye... I ran fast, I didn't care about the police at this moment. I dropped my stuff to get away from it. What was that?
Any notes about your characters: No

Add another flaw.

Life Before CHB must be five sentences long.

That power is more of a talent.

Are his scythes Celestial bronze?

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For his talent, what do you mean by "competition"? Also, how does he use too much energy in a battle -- does he unintentionally overexert himself to make sure the enemy is defeated or such?

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