logan remake

Name:Jacob keyoh
 
Age:13
 
Gender:male
 
Eyes:extremely dark brown
 
Hair:golden blonde
 
Height:5'6
 
Body Type:a little muscular but not ripped like the hulk
 
Skin Color:medium tan
 
God Parent:cratus
 
Mortal Parent:jannet keyoh
 
Country of Origin:america
 
Pets:none
 
Talents:incredibly strong,agile,good at mimicing people,and really good at lying witch comes natural to him
 
Weapon**:jacobs wepon is a 5 foot cb sythe
 
Personality:jacob is the kind of person that you wanna have fun with and party.Jacob is always wanting to party so he goes wild on friday nights.He is usualy nice to everyone but he dose hold grudges he once held a grudge for 4 years.jacob is great at making friends and rarely losses them
 
Flaws:jacob is very stubburn and can be extremely aggressive at times.jacob is a chronic liar.also he is horrible at using a bow and arrow he would rather take the arrow and use it to stab his enemies
 
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):jacob being s son of strengh god cratus has the power to increase his strengh x3.normaly he can pick up around 150 but with the boost he can lift 450 pounds.he can use the power 2 times a day and it lasts for 5 minutes each and he has to wait 2 hrs between each use
 
Life Before CHB*: Before camp half-blood jacob lived with his mother in kentucky and had a decent life.Jacob usualy made c's and b'c on his report card but that was good for a demigod thats not a child of athena.Jacobs best friend Justin (a satyr in descise that only knew that jacob was a demigod when he saw a hell hound and said "dude is that a hell hound"),was walking down tarpon street in kentucky with jacob when a hellhound about the size of a Great Dane dog(about 4foot by 5 foot) tackled justin,thats when jacobs instincs kicked in and he broke the hellhounds neck with his bare hands.After the attack justin explained about being a demigod nd him being a satyr and took him to chb on a train. few times on the way there they were attacked by 2 small hellhounds but they managed to make it to chb alive.
 
RP Example*:I was walking down half blood hill going to my old house when i heard a familiar howl.i turned around and found a pack of five or six hellhounds behind me.I pulled out my sythe and yelled for help.After yelling i started to slice the monsters down one by one but the 4th one tackled me and i fell to the ground.i picked up a rusted dagger on the ground next to me and stabbed the monster that knocked me over.I dropped the dagger and picked up my sythe and slashed one more monster to the ground. Now there was 2 of them and one of me.i was getting tired so i used my power and threw down my sythe.Feeling a new found strengh i tackled the remainig beasts and broke their necks.Feeling exasted so i stoped my power then quikly relized my power drains me. i callapsed onto the ground and passed out.
Any notes about your characters:none

If you get hit by a shuttlebus, you're not just going to get up and walk away. That's too overpowered. Also, add another sentence to LBCHB; the third one you have is just one long and confusing run-on sentence, so you'll need to fix that too.

You'll need to tone down his power limits, too.

You also forgot to fill in gender.

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I wouldn't allow him to get hit by a falling tree. A branch, why not.

I think you could reduce the amount of time he can use his power per day.

How many monsters attacked them on their way to CHB?

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You say 'two small monsters like hellhounds' but what monsters were they?
Besides, considering hellhounds can reach the size of a rhinoceros or a tank (cf Miss O'Leary), I'm rather dubious about the 'small monster' part.

i meant like young hellhounds

Then you should put that in.

And the satyr knowing that your character is a demigod just because a tree branch fell on him isn't very decisive or accurate.

how bout a golf cart

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Hun, getting hit by anything and surviving is not a decisive demigod trait.

but for a cild of strengh wouldn;t like being hit my a van or something and not breakiong a bone a trait???

Uh, not really. That'd be OP anyway.

oh yeah well what should i put


i am not bieng sarcastic

Well, his demigod scent could be one indicator for the satyr, if your character is just getting to camp. Another could be successfully identifying monsters like he could see through the Mist.

(And thank you for the indication.)

but cant some mortals see through the mist

Yeah. But it would narrow the group down a lot, wouldn't it?

ok ill put that in

I suppose he studied a bit of Greek mythology in order to be able to identify the thing in the first place?

yes

Approved.