Slam Poetry

Please note, this is a Slam or Spoken Word Poem.

Yes, that means that I am posting a video of myself. I mean, I suppose I could post the words of the poem, however, that would (in my opinion) completely RUIN the poem seeing as it's a spoken word poem.

This is one of my very first slam poems, so please tell me what you like/dislike so I can improve upon my spoken word poetry.

So, here it is:

This is really good and oh, so very true. I almost teared up quite a few times actually. The message is clear and the delivery is spot-on. You should consider actually going to a Poetry Slam and doing this. ^-^

You guys seemed to enjoy my last slam poem, so here's my most recent poem.

I like it!
(You have a super beautiful voice :3)

I've paused this video at 45 seconds in to tell you that I love it. I can go back and watch the rest of it now.
Well done. Keep writing.

Oh my Gods, this is wonderful....
Now I get to watch the second one