Greek character

Name: Andrea Gabizon
Age:16
Gender:Femele
Eyes:honey brown
Hair:brunnete
Height:48 kg
Body Type:skinny but fit
Skin Color:white
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent: Jonathan Gabizon
Country of Origin: Venezuela
Pets:dog named Bongo
Talents: Drawing
Weapon**: Celestial bronze dagger
Personality: shy, sure of herself, sarcastic in special times.
Flaws: really pesimitic thoughts, breathe problems when running (not asthma)
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None.
Life Before CHB*: Andrea had a absolutely normal life. Studying all the time whe se had to and getting very good grades. Her father was really proud of her. His father had to leave the country for work stuff, she stayed alone, and people where always knocking at her door, she did not had an idea of who those people where, one that days they entered in her house and by surprise a satyr came and rescued her.
RP Example*: There where this huge guys with big arms and I didn't know what to do, so I just ran away from my shattered house done by this guys. They just started to break everything. When I saw them I just thought "Andrea, you're dead, girl" there was no possibility I could get out alive.
Any notes about your characters: Very smart girl but anxious.

Add more to the personality, please.
You need one more flaw.

Height:48 kg

Do you mean feet or centimeters? KG or kilogram is a unit of weight, not height.
I suggest you fix up your RP example and Life Before CHB a bit, there are some errors and run-on sentences.