John- Son of Thanatos

Name: John Samarintos
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Very deep brown, can be mistaken for a light black.
Hair: Long black hair.
Height: 5,9
Body Type: Skinny *not much of a muscular build.* But is very beautiful in the face as he gets it from his father
Thanatos (Hazel said Thanatos was the most beautiful man ever seen, more beautiful then Cupid/Eros.)
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Jane Samarintos
Country of Origin: America
Pets: Small Hellhound (Size of a German Shepard) Has the power of shadow traveling 4 miles and a cooldown of 1 hour. He can Shadow Travel 1 time in one day. Named in Greek σκιά (Means Shade.)(It has a 20 hour cool-down due to his size and the fact that Percy's hellhound who is as big as a tank, gets exhausted after doing it once.)
Talents: Sword-fighting, and some sort of magic degree(Shadow-Traveling/Controlling Dead Magic)
Weapon: Double-edged Stygian Iron Blade with a Black Crystal in it's hilt.
Personality: Very gloomy because his sister died when fighting monsters with him. He doesn't like being around anyone but can be nice if you get into a conversation with him.
Flaws: Doesn't really talk to anyone. Not sure of himself/No confidence. No determination, and Depressed.
Powers: He has some sort of control over the dead, this means raising the dead to fight for him. (5 guys.) Which are killed by stabbing them through the heart. And this can be done 2 times a-day)Cooldown of 3hr 30 min(They crumble to dust in 10 minutes along with their weapons if nothing kills them.They have Stygian Iron swords and they are Skeleton warriors. Shadow Travel- 1-2 Miles Only able to Shadow travel 1 time a day due to it exhausting even children of Hades. (Needs Ambrosia or Nectar after all of them)
Life Before CHB: John and his sister ran away when they were kids. The monsters started attacking when they were 9, but started severely at 13, it was like something was attracting them. Like a magnet attracts metal.They have fought many monsters and in which one of those encounters his sister died to one. Ever since then John likes keeping to himself and is always a-bit gloomy. When getting chased by some monsters and he was about to die, something with well... goat legs saved him.(Satyr) Ever since then the Satyr had accompanied him and told him about Camp Half-Blood. The next day the Satyr led John to the camp. But they were being chased by a monster and the Satyr sacrificed himself for John.(They were able to fight monsters by the Satyr helping and John's pet hell-hound in which the Satyr was about to kill. But John said no due to the fact that the hell-hound wasn't even that big and was being friendly to him.
Any notes about your characters: None

RP Example: John ran through the forest, it wasn't far behind him. The soles on his shoes were wearing out and slowing him down. He saw the archway up ahead with the Greek lettering in which he couldn't understand. What is this... John thought to himself.
And in doing so almost forgot about his pursuer. He stepped through the archway and watched as the monster couldn't get in. Not knowing how, he ran into the middle of the camp, not knowing what was happening.

(Thanatos has the power to make someone die by touching them. - "Since Thanatos is the god of death, he has control over death, control of the dead, and the ability to kill someone with a touch." )

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How many times a day can the dog shadow travel?

Don't be lazy about your flaws. Your other character's flaws were also "pride and arrogance". Most (if not all) people who are "gloomy" and depressed (especially people who have lost someone close to them) are neither prideful nor arrogant. I'd say that they are the opposite. Flaws are the most important part if a character. They determine personality and drive motivation. Don't be lazy with them.

Six to seven undead guys that reform once each is super over powered. Please tone it down. Thanatos is a minor god and Hades is one of the big three. That's why the extent of their powers differs so greatly. Also, how many times a day can this be done? How does one kill an undead warrior?

Hepheastus kids use fire to burn someone. How does your character hurt them by touching them?

Again, this character's life before CHB almost exactly mirror's your other character. Don't be lazy.

How exactly did he find CHB? Just stumbling upon it by sheer happenstance is almost impossible. Perhaps a satyr saved him from a monster attack and brought him to CHB?

Edited how many times a day the dog can shadow travel. Edited flaws to match Before CHB Life. Redid the controlling dead. Added in how I hurt someone by touching them. Changed CHB on both characters slightly to make difference. Changed how I found CHB.

Five people is too many for twice a day. At the most for a Thanatos kid (keep in mind, Thanatos is a minor god) 1 or 2 undead warriors.

No to the pain thing. I don't see how it connects with Thanatos at all.

(Thanatos has the power to make someone die by touching them. - "Since Thanatos is the god of death, he has control over death, control of the dead, and the ability to kill someone with a touch." )


And the pain thing is taken from Thanatos being able to kill someone with a touch.

And edited the warrior amount.

Except that sorry, Stitch, but 5 is a very okay amount for Thanatos kids to summon. Even 10 has been approved for Thanatos kids to be able to summon. John sorry but the touching thing isn't going to be allowed. It's too much of a god-mod to have a power where you basically force the other character to feel pain with no real way of resisting it.

Also Stitch, you can't exactly force people to not be lazy with their flaws, it's their character.

Erm.. who do I listen to?

Your 5 amount was fine a minute ago. Especially given how easy to kill they are and how quickly they crumble away. The cooldown is going to have to be increased though to about 3 and a Half hours or 4 hours.

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How did they fight the monsters before their knowledge of the gods being real and without proper fighting equipment (cb swords)?

What weapons do the dead people spawn with? Are they fully solid rotting people, or are they skeletons, etc?

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