The Fallen's first character

Name:Thomas Thames
Age:15.
Gender.male.

: Eyes: deep green
Hair : shaggy black
Height: 6'1
Body Type: slim buff
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: thantos
Mortal Parent: not known
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: a raven named Calivon
Talents: climbing parkour swimming
skills: chess and is a master at sword play

Weapon**:rapier stygian iron
Personality:dark, quite, and serious. he doesn't trust people at first. he loves the wild. He loves sword fighting and strategy games. He is always listening. He loves the rain. He spends most of his tme playing chess or training.

Flaws:cannot use a bow and arrow. Doesn't get along with others. Treats people like their stupid until they prove him wrong
Powers): can decay things slightly five foot area and only four times a day
Life Before Camp*: He has been traveling all over the world. Hiding and running from various things. Heband wwas trained by the man who found him who he only knows as C. He spent a lot of time in Greece. He is just wants to have a home. he came to camp by hearing about a safe place for demigods through C. so he's been trying to find it but with no luck until a sytr found him.
RP Example*: He clashed his blade against his. Thinking of how he could beat the son of Phobus. If he could only land a hit...
Notes: he speaks French, German, Greek of course, and Spanish. He always wears a long leather trench coat and a gold skull ring with silver wings making the band.

Hey there!

→ Why are his eyes blood red? Is it the natural color or is he wearing contact lenses?
→ What metal is his rapier made of? Celestial bronze or stygian iron?
→ You need two lines for the personality.
→ What is the maximum he can do with his power? How many times a day can he use it?
→ You need five sentences for the Life before Camp.

The rest looks good :)

Ok how about now?

Hey there!

→ Seeing it's not a natural eye color, I'll have to ask you to edit it out. He can wear red lenses of course, but red eyes aren't normally approved.
→ How did he find Camp?

After that, I think it's approvable :)

Now?

Approved!