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    James lee -Mars

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    kidddragon99


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    Number of posts : 12
    Age : 25
    Registration date : 2014-11-20

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    Post by kidddragon99 11/20/2014, 8:40 pm

    Name:James lee
    Age:14
    Gender:Male
    Eyes:He has intense brown eyes.
    Hair:Short black hair.
    Height: 6'0
    Body Type:He is big and stocky.He has wide shoulders and and big meaty hands.He looks like he can be a line backer and was made for close combat.
    Skin Color:He has light skin and his hands are pale from the scars of past fights.
    God Parent:Mars
    Mortal Parent:Lendy Lee
    Country of Origin: America
    Pets:He has a grey hound named dave.
    Talents:
    Physical Talents:He is amaing at sports and was always a lineman when he played football in his home town.He is also quick on his feet and and good with almsot any type of heavy weapion.
    Leadership:He is a good leader and he thinks it is a gift from his father.He has a commanding presence.
    Weapon**:He carries a imperial gold gladius
    Personality:He is  confident on the outside but on the inside He is always doubting what he does.He gets into alot of fights because people make fun of him.He tires to make friends but he finds it hard becuase he does not know what to say so he just keeps quiet.
    Flaws:He always seond guess himslef and it gets worsse the bigger the decision.
    He is quick to anger and does not make good decions most of the time because he needs time to think which he usally does not get.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):As of now none.
    Life Before Camp*:He was born in a small town in small town in kansas.He was always good at sports and was expected to become a big football star.He was the captain of the football team and lead a good life.But he got into a lot of fights because people kept messing with him.. He went to calforina as a trip with his mom and found the wolf house by accident.He ran away from his mom because he did not want her to get hurt when three dracaena struck.It had never happend to him before.He Began to train with lupa and passed the training with flying colors.He found his way to camp juipiter.
    RP Example*:James looked left and right.he had been travleing for days and he was being chased by a trio of dracaena.Th snake women were green with dilated eyes.He saw them up close as he was fighting one with a meat cleaver he stole from a butcher shop.He was almost to the tunnel and people were swearving out of the way trying not to hit him.He Heard a twang and rolled.A arrow sailed past him and landed in the ground.A ruslting sound was behind him drawing nearer.He turned and drew his cleaver.There was one on the right and one on the left.They raised there spears and jabbed at him.James doged one and slashed down hit the second away.He hit the one on the left with his shoulder and she fell back.He saw out of the conner of his eye a glint of light and he brought up he his hand as a reflex and a arrow burried it self into his hand.He ignored the pain but it felt worse than the time he broke his wrist in a game.He ripped the arrow in half and ripped out the tip.He screeched in pain and the pain help him focus.The right snake lady raised her spear and he grabbed it with his injuryed hand blood splaterring everywhere and he raised the cleaver and hacked her from shoulder to hip.She yelled and turned into gold dust.The one that fell was struggling to her trunks and before she could get up he lopped her head off.He turned and wobbled a little the loss of blood was starting to make his head swim.He turned and began runing at full speed.He just made it to the door when he heard the thud of a bow and the whistle of a arrow.Time seemed to slow down and he turned but it was to late and and he would die.But all of a sudden a shield camoe out of no where and blocked it.The roman soldier with the shiled yelled go and he ran out to fight the finake snake lady.
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    Mr. Moseby
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    Age : 2022
    Registration date : 2008-09-13

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    Post by Kendall 11/22/2014, 5:12 pm

    Add two more flaws.

    Life Before Camp:
    - You say he ran away from home, but then he went on a trip to California with his mom? Did he come back?
    - Please note that approvers will assign your cohort to you; you do not assign yourself. (Meaning please take out that he's in the Third Cohort in the Life Before Camp section.)
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    kidddragon99


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    Number of posts : 12
    Age : 25
    Registration date : 2014-11-20

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    Post by kidddragon99 11/22/2014, 5:25 pm

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    Kendall
    Kendall
    Mr. Moseby
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    Female
    Number of posts : 43512
    Age : 2022
    Registration date : 2008-09-13

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    Post by Kendall 11/22/2014, 5:34 pm

    You forgot to add two more flaws.

    Life Before Camp:
    - What kinds of monsters attacked him and his mother when they went to California?
    - Did he just randomly stumble upon the Wolf House while travelling?
    - Why did he run away from his mother -- did he already know something was wrong when he was attacked/had he been attacked this way before back home?
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    kidddragon99


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    Number of posts : 12
    Age : 25
    Registration date : 2014-11-20

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    Post by kidddragon99 11/22/2014, 5:46 pm

    bump
    Kendall
    Kendall
    Mr. Moseby
    Majestic Unicorn Queen



    Female
    Number of posts : 43512
    Age : 2022
    Registration date : 2008-09-13

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    Post by Kendall 11/22/2014, 6:03 pm

    Why doesn't he make good decisions -- does he not think things through?

    Otherwise I think the form looks fine.
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    Post by kidddragon99 11/22/2014, 7:18 pm

    Bump
    Kendall
    Kendall
    Mr. Moseby
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    Female
    Number of posts : 43512
    Age : 2022
    Registration date : 2008-09-13

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    Post by Kendall 11/22/2014, 7:24 pm

    Approved. Your character has been assigned to the Fifth Cohort.

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