TRUEDragon's Characters

Name:James Dean
Age:11
Gender:Male
Eyes:Dark Blue
Hair:Medium length light brown
Height:5'5''
Body Type:Muscular and tall
Skin Color:Tanned golden brown
God Parent:Cratus
Mortal Parent:Ami Dean-Deceased
Country of Origin:Northeastern America
Pets:Dog raised from puppy
Talents:Proficient in Muy Thai and Boxing, Swordplay
Skills:Fighter and great defensive and offensive
Weapon:fingerless spiked celestial bronze grappling gloves
Flaws:Prone to fits of rage, solitary, hot-headed
Powers:2 1/2 minute long "rage" ( extreme anger that builds and he blacks out and starts to fight for his life. )
Life Before CHB:Orphaned at the age of 7. He roamed the streets of New York for most of his life. Quickly picked up fighting and had to fight to keep alive when he developed his strength. The master of the gym took pity on James and taught him how to fight. James ran from monsters until he was found running from the minotaur.
RP Example:There was a flash of lightning as James ran toward the creature. James swung at the creature's head. He missed and realized that the godas were not on his side in this battle. No one was around when a fist connected to the side of the creature's head and it collapsed on the ground. James ran and saw the camp just ahead. He had finally made it.

What is "rage"?

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 sentences long.

Ohkay I changed the errors and made it clearer.

Cratus is the god of strength, for Pete's sake. Where's the rage in that?

His rage is what I would call his major flaw because he grows stronger but he also forgets what he did. It doesn't happen very often so he ususally just relies on normal strength. Its only when someone angers him and he doesn't express it. This comes from his being an orphan

That really depends on how long he uses it. If it is just something small than no but usually he goes until he calms down and then faints or goes to sleep.

... So he can go into rage, and then only feel a bit tired? That's sort of messed up; I have a character with the same thing(only Ares style, since he's awesome), and each time she faints.

Ohkay I see where you are going with this. My character does get tired and there aren't many times where he doesn't faint. (Maybe once has that happened) He is someone that learned selfcontrol so he doesn't use rage very often. It is only if he is really angry

Alright.

Cratus kids go to Minor War Gods cabin.

Approved.

Name:Austin Greene
Age:11
Gender:Male
Eyes:Light blue
Hair:Long dark blonde
Height:5' 9''
Body Type:Athletic, wiry muscles
Skin Color:tanned brown
God Parent:Enyo
Mortal Parent:Alan Greene
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:Barn Owl
Talents:fistfighting, whitling wood
Skills:swordplay, archery, and stretegic attacking
Weapon:2 handed great sword made of celetial bronze
Flaws:Very trusting of everyone, angers when girls are injured, chivalrous to the extreme
Powers(must relate to god parent):Bestial Rage (great power and strength that is used and then knocks the person out)
Life Before CHB*:Raised by father until he was taken by the state of iowa. He was taken to a foster home at the age of 8. When there he was visited by his mother. Hey then ran away to go to CHB. On the way he killed the minotaur.
RP Example*:I ran until I heard the satyr cry for help. I ripped my sword out of the sheath and ran back. The beast was tall enough to dwarf a basketball player. It carried a giant axe. The axe swung my way and I cut the handle in half. I swung my sword hilt over blade chopped the beast's head off.

How strong is he in the rage form?

I would say he is about two or three times as strong as most demigods. He can go up to being as strong as a child of cratus but that knocks him out for a few days after a few minutes.

You can't have a half-half sword.

Ohkay I'll change that

It has to be Celestial bronze.

Ohkay done

Add more flaws.

Its done

Approved.

Name: Scethe Tandrey
Age:13
Gender:Male
Eyes:Light Saphire Blue
Hair:Longish Dark Blonde
Height:5' 8''
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tanned but white underneath
God Parent:Aphrodite
Mortal Parent:Timothy Tandrey
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:none
Talents:Very athletic, strong but not super strong, loves to write poetry
Skills:Swordplay, Archery, Fistfighting
Weapon:Bow and arrow, short sword
Flaws:Attatchment problems, angers easily, bored easily, OCD's about everything, a little obsessive.
Powers(must relate to god parent):causes lust in other people (he exudes an aura that makes him very attractive. tires him out after a while of usingthe power)
Life Before CHB*:Lived a normal life up until he was 6. At the age of six he developed a love for athletics and his powers came behind that. When he joined a sport he excelled but attracted alot of attention from the females. He was attacked at the end of a game and he had to fight. A satyr came and took him to CHB.
RP Example*:I ran under the trees. If it wasn't for the monster right behind me this would be a great exercise. I could feel the adrenaline pumping and the air flowing past my cheek. I ran up the hill and turned around. My bow was trained on the forest when the dragon swooped down and attacked the monster.
Any notes about your characters:Extremely attractive. He is like a little romeo.

Add more flaws.

How does he cause lust?

It's changed.

If there's anything else that needs changed just tell me. This is a rough design

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