Character Form

Name: Brielle Walker
Age: 12
Gender: female
Eyes: sky blue
Hair: brown
Height: 4"10
Body Type: slim
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: unclaimed
Mortal Parent: Daisy Walker
Country of Origin: America
Pets: dog named Shadow
Talents: archery, writing, singing
Weapon**: bow and arrow
Personality: I have a lot of energy and cannot sit still for more than twenty minutes. I usually see the happy side of things but if you get on my nerves or insult my family you will want to run away.
Flaws: trust issues (easily trusts anybody), has loyalty issues (she will die before someone hurts her family), and can easily jump to conclusions
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before Camp*: I lived with my mom and little brother, Jake, in New Jersey. I attended a private school and could easily make friends. I love all animals especially dogs and horses. I was told that my father left us when Jake was three. I am a fan of mythology so I wasn't surprised when I learned I was a demigod.
RP Example*: Jake and I were running. We'd been chased by this large dog thing that looked like a hellhound. It growled at us. I glared at the dog. "Jake, run! I hold him off!" I yelled. Jake nodded and ran. I turned to face the dog. The mutt lunged at me and I was forced to jump to one side. My eyes flashed in anger. I grabbed hold of a long stick and threw it at the dog. It yelped. The dog stopped, sniffing the air. I froze as it hurried off in my brother's direction. I ran after it as I heard a terrible scream. My eyes widened. The stupid dog had killed my brother. I clenched my fists and ran at it. I glanced to see the dog suddenly turn around and leave. Before I knew it I had passed out from the shock.
Any notes about your characters: Brielle believes her father left her for someone else. She is seen as innocent kid that doesn't know what she's getting into. Brielle hates being called Bree and prefers being called by her real name. Brielle is still in shock over her brother's death but easily trusts anyone she meets.

can you fill out the height, body type, god parent, weapon, and power sections? if she's unclaimed please put "unclaimed" for god parent, and if she doesn't have any powers please specify that.

could you please elaborate a bit more on her personality?

please include at least three flaws

you need one more line to add to her life before camp

oh okay. thanks, i'll do that.

Hey there c:

→ You still need the Weapons part.
→ How did she get to Camp Half-Blood?

The rest looks good, nice job!

um, thanks. the part where she got to camp half-blood is in the RP section, it's really bad.
dragonwolf.

Are her arrows Celestial bronze? What is her bow made of?

Add more to the personality.

Life Before Camp:
- Is her younger brother Jake a demigod? How much older is Brielle?
- Her father leaving when Jake was three would not be allowed; we only let god parents stay up to a week after the child is born.
- Add in how her brother died to this section, and how she got to camp. You don't describe her journey to camp in the RP Example very clearly -- you just said she passed out after the hellhound killed her brother. (I'm not sure why it would leave, either; she was open to attack?)