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    Tristan Maria Edwards

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    Thor19Edwards


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    Number of posts : 21
    Age : 29
    Registration date : 2015-06-17

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    Post by Thor19Edwards 6/23/2015, 7:14 am

    Name: Tristan Maria Edwards
    Age: 12
    Gender: female
    Eyes: blue-grey
    Hair: long black hair
    Height: 4 feet 8 inches
    Body Type: lean but athletic
    Skin Color: tan
    God Parent: Ares
    Mortal Parent: Mary Edwards
    Country of Origin: Canada
    Pets: black lab named midnight
    Talents: singing dancing fighting
    Weapon**: Celestial bronze sword
    Personality: She is a cheerful, forceful fighter until she gets mad. When she’s mad she tends to get aggressive. She is malicious and odd when she is sad. She does odd things like: talking in Vulcan, dresses up like batman, showers in the dark.
    Flaws: she is crazy, paralyzed, and wears glasses.
    Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): none
    Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): none
    Life before Camp*: She was born in Quebec Canada 12 years ago. When she was 2 her mom got a job transfer to New York City and been there since. When she was 5 her mom died from cancer and she moved in with her grandparents. When she was 11 her grandparents were killed by a hydra in front of her. She ran away to her best friend’s house and told her everything that happened that day. She was immediately taken to camp half blood to live to be safe.
    RP Example*: Tristan entered the arena determined to win. She had her sword in her hand and was smirking. She was mad thanks to one of her siblings so she came here to fight and let off some steam. She attacked one of the training dummies and destroyed it. She started singing let it go as she fought.
    Any notes about your characters: Tristan is crazy





    Last edited by Thor19Edwards on 12/19/2016, 10:07 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : spelling mistakes)
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    Post by Kwacken 6/24/2015, 8:39 pm

    Run this through spellcheck and change fighting abilities to a talent, unless it's something supernatural about the fighting abilities, in which case clarify it please.

    Also, why was she willing to believe that she was a demigod from the satyr? Why pack up and leave everything without any notice?
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    Post by Thor19Edwards 12/19/2016, 10:09 am

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    Post by Kendall 12/21/2016, 11:23 pm

    Add more to her personality.

    Flaws:
    - Define "crazy."
    - In what way is she paralyzed?
    - How is wearing glasses a flaw, unless she's so clumsy she always loses them/hates wearing them and so never does?

    LBC:
    - How did she manage to escape a hydra? It would have killed her fairly easily.
    - Who was her best friend, exactly? A satyr?

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