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    Rhyolo-Remake

    Rhyolo
    Rhyolo
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    Post by Rhyolo 6/17/2016, 1:07 am

    Name: his name is Rhyolo Andros Moseley
    Gender: He is a male
    Mortal Parent: Jackie Moseley, a mortal woman who can see through the mist.
    God Parent: Pyriphlegethon, god of the underworld river of fire, The Phlegethon.
    Date of Birth: October first, 2000.
    Place of Birth: Lexington, Kentucky.
    Hometown/Last Residence: Lexington, Kentucky.
    Race/ethnicity: He is ¾ African American, 1/8 Cherokee, and 1/8 Asian.
    Accent: He has a regular American accent.
    Skin Tone: His skin tone is about the same as the chocolate of a Twix bar.
    Eye Color: His eyes are as brown as Hershey’s chocolate.
    Hair Color: His hair, is jet black.
    Hair Length: His hair is in corn-rows down the back of his head until the end of his neck. Otherwise he keeps curly hair in a well-trimmed afro.
    Height: five feet eleven inches tall.
    Weight: He weighs 192 pounds.
    Body Type: he has a slightly built body. He overall skinny though. His arms do have a little tone to them and he does have a little four pack going on.
    Appearance: He is a stands tall and is kind of built. He usually wear a pair of jeans with a chain, some red or gold high top shoes, a red design shirt or his orange camp shirt during cold weather. During warm weather he usually wears black or red cargo shorts, his a red or black shirt, and some red or black foot wear. He always wears his camp necklace, his two ruby rings, and his golden watch.
    Weapon: 1. He has two ruby encrusted ring which can turn into Celestial bronze Sai with the prongs being 6 inches long.
                  2. He has a watch that can turn into a stygian iron katana of which the blade is 2 feet long.
    Armor: He usually doesn’t wear armor but he has some celestial bronze Greek armor he use rarely that can turn into a coin with his face on it.
    Pet(s): he has no pets yet.
    Skills/Talents: He is talented at cooking, metal working, basketball, sword fighting, hand to hand combat, and math.
    Flaws: He can be hot headed, He has gaps in between his teeth and has an overbite , he can be lazy, and he can be to prideful to see when he’s wrong, and he can be too loyal.
    Strengths: Cooking, Combat, math, and forge work.
    Weaknesses: His pride, Flat feet, ADHD, too loyal, and laziness.
    Likes: he likes Food, Basketball, combat, victory, music, and friends.
    Dislikes:  he does not like Mushrooms, monsters, and cheesy remakes of cartoons he liked.
    Fears: He fears nothing but losing people he cares about.
    Personality: Rhyolo is a really cool guy. He just the type of guy who’ll sit around and try to make friends. He is really just overall nice. That is of course until you mess with his family or his friends, then you’re gonna have a bad time (wink). He will give you hell. He literally try to burn you in a blazing inferno. He will make the underworld seem like a daycare if you get on his bad side. he also is kind of lazy. he  will only do stuff if he has to or wants to. you will rarely catch him volunteering his hours.
    Abilities: 1. Death sense:  He can sense spirits lingering in a place.
                2.  Dead communication: he has a limited communication with the dead but he can vaguely understand them.
                3. Fire resistance: He is immune to fire up to 400 degrees Fahrenheit.
    Powers: 1. Pyrokinesis: He can create fire and control fire. He can manipulate flame up to about a volume of 7 feet cubed. His flame can vary from 200 degrees Fahrenheit to 300 degrees Fahrenheit. He can do this for three post with a cooldown of five posts.
                  2.  Healing fire: Since the Phlegethon can heal, Rhyolo has the power to conjure fire he can consume to heal himself for injuries as severe as a sprained ankle. he can also do cuts and bruises up to 2 inches cubed  He can do this with a 10 post cool-down period in between each use. he can only maintain the fire for two posts.
                   3. Shadow travel: Rhyolo can shadow travel distances up to about 30 miles. He can do this twice per role play with a 10 post cool down period.
    Social Status: He is kind an outsider but still has a few friends.
    Summer or Year Rounder: He stays at camp year round.
    Years at Camp: He has been at camp for 4 years.
    Life before Camp: Rhyolo was born on at midnight on October 4th, 2000. He was born healthy to Jackie Moseley in Lexington, Kentucky. Rhyolo grew up in the small town of Lexington and had a normal life. Well almost a normal life. In Lexington nothing much happened. It is a small city in a not very populated state. in 2nd grade he developed a liking for basketball. he then started playing it for different kid's leagues ad became a good player. also in 3rd grade he came to like martial arts like, kung-fu, karate, taekwondo, and jiu jistu. so his mother singed up for martial arts classes and became a red belt by 5th grade.( ranking system: http://nsama.com/wp-content/themes/genesis-sample/images/nsa.thebeltsystempic.jpg ). bust since was a demigod monsters lurked. In 5th grade he was bullied. lucky for him he was able to beat him with his martial arts.  When he turned eleven his mother decided it was time for him to know the truth about his whole life. She told him he was the son of an ancient Greek god and that he was lucky to have lived through what he did. Then she told him there was a place for kids like him in New York and he was going to stay there for a while. Rhyolo was shocked and in denial. He didn’t believe any of word his mom just told him. He just laughed and expected for his mom to tell him it was just a cruel joke. But it never was. Rhyolo looked into his mother’s eyes and saw the mixture of emotions within her. He saw grief, relief anxiety, hope and sadness in his mom. He then realized he was a demigod.  The following week after he turned eleven he and his mom headed for camp half-blood. They went by car so it took then 4 days to get there. on the way there he asked how she knew about all this.  she then told him his father explained it all to her. he had told her about the camp, mist, and monsters during her 3rd trimester. They encountered  a pair of dracnae on the way but they all were turned into road kill with Firestone™ tire tracks on them. When they arrived at the entrance to the camp they said their goodbyes. Tears were shed knowing that they would rarely see each other from that point forward. They held each other in a hug and then Rhyolo went into camp.
    Role-playing Example:  Rhyolo walked to the entrance of the camp. The air was crisp and the autumn leaves of gold, red and brown littered the ground. He was wearing his blue jeans and his red hoodie with son black low tops. He looked at the scenery. The leaves multi colored and scattered. The tree top canopy with natural spotlights appearing randomly. The moist dirt under his feet squishing. This day reminded him of the day he first came here. To this demigod sanctuary. He reminisced on all his highs and lows at camp. He laughed to himself and said. “What a time.” He then took out his cell phone and dialed a number. The phone rand 3 times before someone picked up. Rhyolo said, “Hi mom.”
    Notes: none


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    Post by Morgan Landry 6/17/2016, 2:37 am

    Heyo!
    - Reduce his height please
    - When you say sai blades don't you mean sai prongs? Sais don't have blades, the only sharp things they have are their points.
    - Flat feet are a weakness, not a flaw, please replace them with something else.
    - I'm unsure about the abilities. Just because he's a child of the Underworld doesn't mean he has automatic death senses like Nico di Angelo. I'm saying yes to feeling the spirits of the departed lingering in places, but that's all.
    - Are you sure you don't wanna boost up his second power? I mean, 20 posts for healing a sprained ankle....
    - Bump down his cool down for shadow traveling to ten posts.
    - I'm very iffy about his LBC. Chiron said in book 4 that empousai have such power that resisting them is impossible, or near impossible, for men. Even Percy, who was luckily saved by Rachel. First of all, it seems improbable that an empousa would try to seduce a kindergarten toddler, so please take that out. Second, he's the son of Phlegethon, who is a minor deity, so theoretically he shouldn't attract so many powerful monsters so early on. And third, it's even less probable that Rhyolo would have survived with no remote combat training -- and even if he had, beating monsters like that would've been extremely difficult. Tl;dr: Okay for the storm spirit, but take the empousa and the gorgon out.
    - Reduce the amount of monsters they meet on the way to Camp Half-Blood.

    Rest looks good to me :)
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    Post by Rhyolo 6/18/2016, 12:40 am

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    Post by Morgan Landry 6/18/2016, 2:49 am

    Yoooo

    - Make his height under 6 ft please
    - Being anormal is not a flaw. Having a physical disadvantage like asthma, above average number of fingers, etc, are not flaws. What are flaws are this: bushy eyebrows, large nose, things that make others perceive them as not perfectly beautiful. You don't need to make your character handicapped. Just average.
    - Second power: take away the twice per topic and reduce the cool down to 5 posts. That is, as long as his fire conjuring lasts only one or two posts. (Please add that.)
    - "You see he was always chased by monsters" >> take that out.

    Rest is good.
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    Post by Rhyolo 6/18/2016, 2:00 pm

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    Post by Kendall 6/18/2016, 7:48 pm

    How bad is his ADHD that this constitutes a flaw? All demigods have it to some degree.

    Add more to his personality -- you've basically restated two traits of his with three sentences each.

    Powers:
    - How much fatigue can he heal? Wouldn't using his fire to heal make him more tired?
    - For cuts/bruises, how large can they be at most for him to completely heal?

    LBC:
    - Add more about his general life before his mom told him about his being a demigod.
    - Did his dad tell his mom who he was before he left, including information about camp and its location?
    - What happened to the storm spirit? Did it try to kill him too?
    - Why did his mom decide to tell her son about his father when he was 11? (This part is sort of weird, because you said she told him when he turned eleven -- but then there's a sentence right after you describe the moment that says he turned eleven? Is this dramatic effect?)
    - What kinds of monsters did they encounter on his way to camp, and how many?
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    Post by Rhyolo 6/25/2016, 2:03 am

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    Post by Kendall 7/8/2016, 9:46 pm

    Add more to his personality.

    Powers:
    - Hmm. I'm gonna say no to him recuperating from his fatigue via his own fire, since that wouldn't make much sense as he's using energy to even use the power at all. 

    LBC:
    - I doubt he'd be strong enough to beat a storm spirit with martial arts at that age -- even if it wasn't a smart one. (And it definitely would have tried to kill him, as that would be a great opportunity to do so.)
    - I also doubt they would have been able to escape so many monsters on his way to camp, so tone it down to maybe just one or two along the way.
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    Post by Rhyolo 7/25/2016, 9:41 am

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