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Coma State
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Re: Coma State
I smiled extra sad, debating whether or not I should just leave now.
OOC Can I write one more memory?
OOC Can I write one more memory?
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- Post n°627
Re: Coma State
OOC: Be my guest :)
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!6 year old Calden wearily looked up and spat blood at the man who threw the punch.
"Tell me what you know," The Vietnamese man spat.
"What? Sorry I don't speak STUPID," Calden spat at his tormentor.
The man cracked his knuckled and threw another punch at Calden's face, blood pouring down his face. He'd spend three months here being tortured but would never give up the information.
"Tell me what you know," The Vietnamese man spat.
"What? Sorry I don't speak STUPID," Calden spat at his tormentor.
The man cracked his knuckled and threw another punch at Calden's face, blood pouring down his face. He'd spend three months here being tortured but would never give up the information.
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- Post n°629
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Jess gave a little shriek with each punch. She ran and stood right in front of calden, but the man's fist went right through her. She turned she couldn't watch, not at all. It was too painful. Calden was trying to be a hero, she could never do that. She felt weak compared to him.
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- Post n°630
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The memory switched again, to a happier on. The few moments that took place at the observatory.
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- Post n°631
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Jess smiled at this memory, she stood right next to herself. And watched the memory, she wasn't sure who this belonged to. Something told her it was calden, because she talked a lot during this memory.
Then she was back at the infirmary. "Well that was fun." she said sarcastically. she looked at her self. Maybe if she slapped her self she'll wake her self up. Jess tried, and it didn't work.
Then she was back at the infirmary. "Well that was fun." she said sarcastically. she looked at her self. Maybe if she slapped her self she'll wake her self up. Jess tried, and it didn't work.
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- Post n°632
Re: Coma State
"Please wake up... please!'
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- Post n°633
Re: Coma State
OOC: She should appear to him
Jess watched with a sad expression, she didn't like being in a coma. He hated the memories, they made no sense and to top it all off she was ruining Calden's life.
Jess watched with a sad expression, she didn't like being in a coma. He hated the memories, they made no sense and to top it all off she was ruining Calden's life.
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- Post n°634
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I looked up. "Jess... huh? What are you doing here?" I mean... You're... you're..."
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- Post n°635
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Jess looked up, "Wait, you can see me?" she asked, she gave him a giant smile, and started to cry from happiness.
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- Post n°636
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"Hey, don't cry..." I cooed, but I nearly cried becuae I thought maybe she was dead.
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- Post n°637
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"I'm crying because i'm happy, for days no one could see me. " she said, she went out to touch him, but her hand went right through "I'm not sure how long this will last, or if i'll ever get out of this form.It may be only for a while that you can see me"
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- Post n°638
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"You're not dead... are you?" I whimpered.
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Jess looked at her body "No. I don't think so." she said "Although i look the part" she said looking down at her dress.
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I reached out to hug her, but when I couldn't I broke down. I went into hysterics and sobbed.
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- Post n°641
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"Oh, please don't cry!" she said "If you cry you're going to make me cry!"
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I choked out sob after sob after sob. I couldn't help it. And I couldn't stop it.
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- Post n°643
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She was about to say something before she felt it. The same feeling she gets before a memory. "I'll be back" she said. then she went into a memory.
She was on Calypso's Island again "Are you kidding me?" she muttered. She saw Calypso eating food with Percy, and then they got up. They exchanged words then Percy walked onto the beach, and sat on a rickety old raft, and sailed away.
"I see your here again." Calypso said to her after Percy was out of sight.
"Yes. I have no control over anything." Jess responded "I'm in a coma."
"Ah, that happens. Sadly theirs no way to get over it faster."
"So, i'm stuck like this forever?"
"No, not necessarily."
"Okay."
"But there are more memories waiting, so i'll let you go."
The scene shifted. She was at Amphitheatre, Percy was standing next to her. Chiron was standing it front of the fire he was saying "Assume he is dead, after so long a silence, it is unlikely our prayers will be answered. I have asked his best surviving friends to do the final honors."
Annabeth stood there with a giant sheet like thing with a trident embroidered on it.
Her eyes were red and puffy from crying "He probably was the best friend I've ever had. He..." Then she noticed Percy. There was uproar as Annabeth ran up to percy and hugged him. She yelled at him, her fist occasionally going through Jess' head. Then Chiron took them to the big house. Jess knew then that this memory was over.
She was on Calypso's Island again "Are you kidding me?" she muttered. She saw Calypso eating food with Percy, and then they got up. They exchanged words then Percy walked onto the beach, and sat on a rickety old raft, and sailed away.
"I see your here again." Calypso said to her after Percy was out of sight.
"Yes. I have no control over anything." Jess responded "I'm in a coma."
"Ah, that happens. Sadly theirs no way to get over it faster."
"So, i'm stuck like this forever?"
"No, not necessarily."
"Okay."
"But there are more memories waiting, so i'll let you go."
The scene shifted. She was at Amphitheatre, Percy was standing next to her. Chiron was standing it front of the fire he was saying "Assume he is dead, after so long a silence, it is unlikely our prayers will be answered. I have asked his best surviving friends to do the final honors."
Annabeth stood there with a giant sheet like thing with a trident embroidered on it.
Her eyes were red and puffy from crying "He probably was the best friend I've ever had. He..." Then she noticed Percy. There was uproar as Annabeth ran up to percy and hugged him. She yelled at him, her fist occasionally going through Jess' head. Then Chiron took them to the big house. Jess knew then that this memory was over.
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- Post n°644
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Suddenly the image of jess I saw was gone and I went even more hysterical.
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- Post n°645
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Jess was now trapped somewhere else, it was like a blank canvas everywhere "Hello?" she said her voiced echoed throughout the chasm. Terrified she fell to her knees and started to weep. She wept and wept, she didn't know what else to do.
OOC: Something needs to happen...
OOC: Something needs to happen...
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- Post n°646
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OOC I have no idea what to do
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- Post n°647
Re: Coma State
OOC: Luna should confirm she's in a coma. I can also get Lillian in here.
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- Post n°648
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OOC: Sienna invited me to crash your party.
BIC: Lillian walked in. She looked around and saw Calden, but she ignored him and started to walk around. She made sure her footsteps made a lot of noise against the cold floor of the infirmary.
BIC: Lillian walked in. She looked around and saw Calden, but she ignored him and started to walk around. She made sure her footsteps made a lot of noise against the cold floor of the infirmary.
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- Post n°649
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Jess didn't know how to get out of that stupid room. Turns out there were walls, that remained solid. She did have quite fun running into one, almost breaking her nose. Her long white dress matched the walls. "I just want to be awake!" she yelled, nothing happened. She was getting restless. Her bright red hair kept getting in her face, she kept tripping over her dress. She wished she never fell into that stupid water.
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- Post n°650
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Luna walks over and runs a test. "I'm sorry but she's in a coma. I'm going to intubate her. I dont know if she;lll be able to breath on her own.