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by Puppetmaster 10/3/2011, 8:49 pmI can work with it Amy. Pi yours is a little vague. Can I have a description of her clothes or a pic?
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ToH: Tournment of Heroes
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ok tried to make it a little less vague (I'm not good at being not vague but I can try!)
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Sounds datable for Riku....hmmm
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He was (is shh don't tell ROXY!!!) my fav KH charrie!!!
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Lol I'm telling Rox! And also am ready to pick teams and solo fighters. The teams are only of Two
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NOOO!!!!! SHE'S GONNA KILL DEMYX!!!!!
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And I might snipe Roxas. I love Demyx....and Zexy, also Axel and Xion.
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Zexy he's my favorite I like him more than Riku.
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Gasp.
Riku: *goes to the emo corner*
Zexy: Not surprising. *turns back to lexicon*
Riku: *goes to the emo corner*
Zexy: Not surprising. *turns back to lexicon*
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lolz
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Heeeeere chapter 3: The newbies!
Camo made it a point to find the other two challengers before the others even started. A girl named Kuroyuki was not an easy find or an easy catch. She had put up quite the fight for the stagiest but he had tricked her into lowering her blade by play acting his own defeat. He had disarmed and restrained her, but he wasn’t as rough with it as he was with the boy he captured…meh the girl was beautiful and he was a bit of a gentlemen to all women. But his mission was far from complete; he had locked her in a green capsule so she didn’t escape. The boy, Tent was with his friends and lover on Destiny Islands when Camo had appeared holding out his crossbows. (Yes plural. He uses two they reload by themselves)
Flashback
“Wh-“Trent started but he was cut off when Camo shot Brick and Drake in the neck. The arrows weren’t fatally wounding, but they had effectively put the boys to sleep, “What the hell?!” Sylvia said starting to draw a weapon, but like the other two Spirit Walker, Camo was faster. He flashed forward and tapped a pressure point in her neck. Sylvia passed out in Camo’s arms; he laid her down on the dock gently as Trent was steaming in pure rage. That Rage was his downfall. The boy charged to punch Camo’s teeth down his throat, the blonde haired assassin side stepped the punch in seconds but put down the crossbows. Trent growled swinging wildly at Camo, the smaller boy dodged each one but as they danced Trent didn’t see Camo’s palms started to shimmer and spark with light. The warrior had swung again but instead of sidestepping or blocking, Camo gripped the larger boys fist and flicked his wrist slightly. An explosion of light and blue energy had come down on Trent like a ton of cinderblocks…fused with 40 tons of steel and 1000 pound weights. Trent was hit directly but didn’t die but he was blown away and knocking him out. Camo strolled over lazily and tied him up and dragged him into the Dark Corridor forming in front of them
Flashback over
“So the teams are?” A chilly male voice asked from above, Camo looked up to a boy, the leader to be exact. A Black jacket with a Skull and cross bones design on the back, Black jeans, an ear ring (just one), Black sneakers, and a Solid black shirt, He has Sea green eyes, and dark spiky hair. It was the Spiritual remnant of Leo or as he calls himself Xeno. “We have yet to decide sir. But not all the slots are full so we must wait.” Another voice said from the shadows. The newcomer had short black hair, olive skin, a black jacket, black jeans, a gray shirt, and a chain for a belt. His name was Leander. “Understood Leander, Release the girl and the boy into the forest separately, they will be paired with two of the contestants, Rexson and Terra.” Xeno said waving his palm.
In the forest
Rexson was just awakening from his rather short nap to find he was separated from Lance and had a girl lying on his chest. He didn’t move a muscle because he didn’t want to wake her and because…well she was kind of hot in a savoir of the worlds way. He just closed his eyes again and tried to return to his dreams.
In another part of the forest
Terra had woken up in a tree, not only that but he had noticed directly next to his head was a hornets nest. Then before he could’ve reacted a boy had appeared unconious and heavy all ready and broke the hive. “Fu-“but Terra never got to finish his swear. Sadly (for him I’m laughing right now) the nest had rose up, the whole entire PO’d hive came down on them. Terra grabbed the new boy and leapt out the tree and ran like hell avoiding the 400 little hornets that could sting him to death.
Back at the SWHQ
“All done sir” Camo said as Xeno watched Terra run for their lives. “You do that on purpose?” the leader said as Leander disappeared to get more fighters. “Maybe…” Camo replied with a hidden smirk.
End of chapter 3
Camo made it a point to find the other two challengers before the others even started. A girl named Kuroyuki was not an easy find or an easy catch. She had put up quite the fight for the stagiest but he had tricked her into lowering her blade by play acting his own defeat. He had disarmed and restrained her, but he wasn’t as rough with it as he was with the boy he captured…meh the girl was beautiful and he was a bit of a gentlemen to all women. But his mission was far from complete; he had locked her in a green capsule so she didn’t escape. The boy, Tent was with his friends and lover on Destiny Islands when Camo had appeared holding out his crossbows. (Yes plural. He uses two they reload by themselves)
Flashback
“Wh-“Trent started but he was cut off when Camo shot Brick and Drake in the neck. The arrows weren’t fatally wounding, but they had effectively put the boys to sleep, “What the hell?!” Sylvia said starting to draw a weapon, but like the other two Spirit Walker, Camo was faster. He flashed forward and tapped a pressure point in her neck. Sylvia passed out in Camo’s arms; he laid her down on the dock gently as Trent was steaming in pure rage. That Rage was his downfall. The boy charged to punch Camo’s teeth down his throat, the blonde haired assassin side stepped the punch in seconds but put down the crossbows. Trent growled swinging wildly at Camo, the smaller boy dodged each one but as they danced Trent didn’t see Camo’s palms started to shimmer and spark with light. The warrior had swung again but instead of sidestepping or blocking, Camo gripped the larger boys fist and flicked his wrist slightly. An explosion of light and blue energy had come down on Trent like a ton of cinderblocks…fused with 40 tons of steel and 1000 pound weights. Trent was hit directly but didn’t die but he was blown away and knocking him out. Camo strolled over lazily and tied him up and dragged him into the Dark Corridor forming in front of them
Flashback over
“So the teams are?” A chilly male voice asked from above, Camo looked up to a boy, the leader to be exact. A Black jacket with a Skull and cross bones design on the back, Black jeans, an ear ring (just one), Black sneakers, and a Solid black shirt, He has Sea green eyes, and dark spiky hair. It was the Spiritual remnant of Leo or as he calls himself Xeno. “We have yet to decide sir. But not all the slots are full so we must wait.” Another voice said from the shadows. The newcomer had short black hair, olive skin, a black jacket, black jeans, a gray shirt, and a chain for a belt. His name was Leander. “Understood Leander, Release the girl and the boy into the forest separately, they will be paired with two of the contestants, Rexson and Terra.” Xeno said waving his palm.
In the forest
Rexson was just awakening from his rather short nap to find he was separated from Lance and had a girl lying on his chest. He didn’t move a muscle because he didn’t want to wake her and because…well she was kind of hot in a savoir of the worlds way. He just closed his eyes again and tried to return to his dreams.
In another part of the forest
Terra had woken up in a tree, not only that but he had noticed directly next to his head was a hornets nest. Then before he could’ve reacted a boy had appeared unconious and heavy all ready and broke the hive. “Fu-“but Terra never got to finish his swear. Sadly (for him I’m laughing right now) the nest had rose up, the whole entire PO’d hive came down on them. Terra grabbed the new boy and leapt out the tree and ran like hell avoiding the 400 little hornets that could sting him to death.
Back at the SWHQ
“All done sir” Camo said as Xeno watched Terra run for their lives. “You do that on purpose?” the leader said as Leander disappeared to get more fighters. “Maybe…” Camo replied with a hidden smirk.
End of chapter 3
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hehehehe the last part was funny!!! I'm liking the story!!!
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Soni Kagemiya wrote:Name: Caitlin
Age: 14
Weapon: A sword. Or a frying pan. xD;
Personality: Caitlin has different personalities that depend on the situation. Like. If she was being hunted down or something like that, she'd be alert and careful. Or if she was hanging out with someone, she'd be crackin' jokes left and right.
Abilities: You pick. :V
APPEARANCE, BECAUSE SOMEBODY FORGOT IT: Caitlin's a shortie tortie Asian, with long black hair with side bangs. She's a tannish color, and has a great smile. She never goes anywhere without her Sonic hat, that she wears backwards.
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-.- thats rather vague. just sayin and im sorry i lost my flash drive that had the whole 4th chapter and profiles
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Fixed it, but if you need something better just look at my siggy picture of Rachel.
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SonofChaos wrote:Name:Jason neck
Age: 16
Weapon: A spear
Personality: He can be nice, ONLY if you get on his good side, if your not he is cold ,mean and overall evil.
Abilities: Being an child of Thanatos, He can summon zombies
Appeareance, Cause I forgot: Wheres baggy shorts and a black t- shirt. Is about 5'11 With brownish hair.
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Mhm. Specific eye color or hair style Choas?
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Hair style would be a buzzcut, and Eye color would be Brown
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Leander had found two worthy contestants on the world called Manhattan. It took a while but only because he was trying to be exact and make the right choice. In the first hour he had found Helena, a short girl (5’2 to his 6’0) with caramel colored hair, paper pale skin, and large blue eyes. She wore black biker boots with her black jeans, along with her also black tank top that went well with her leather jacket. In his opinion, he would’ve fallen in love with her the instant she drew her katana. But sadly her feisty attitude and her skills made it known she had to go in the games; Leander decided to hold back on her just because she was his type of girl and had knocked her out in moments.
After that he started to search for another fighter and had come across a bridge. Oddly enough he sensed someone advancing behind him. A boy with brown eyes and was two heads shorter than him. “And you are?” Leander said looking the boy over slightly. “Depends if you’re a monster in disguise” The boy said coldly. “Listen up buzz boy, I’m no monster of your stupid puny Greek mythology” Leander replied stepping up to him. The boy smirked as about 5 skeletons rose up before him. “Sucks to be you still” The boy said as the skeletons ran at Leander. The gunman’s eye flashed across each skeleton then he drew a ‘Broken Butterfly’ (RE4 handgun for those who don’t know) pistol and shot each one in one horizontal swing taking them all down. “Hm summoning the dead…your hired” Leander said as he noted the boy drawing a spear silently.
“My names Jason, and I’m afraid I’m not hired for anything” Jason twirled the spear one and surged forward in a single trust. Leander read his eyes as he flipped over Jason’s attack. ‘Three strikes and a skeleton wave, huh? A simple yet smart strategy’ Leander thought as he rolled to his feet and holstered his gun. “Bring it on, Jason” He taunted as the Son of Thanatos did his first combo. Leander dodged each one and swung in a round house kick, knocking off the skeletons off the bridge, the gunman drew another gun; this was an old school pirate’s pistol, with only a single shot. “I have the Dead Eye, Jason. I never missed a target, Just yield so I can take you back to my boss” He said. Jason threw the spear at Leander who obviously just side stepped and then shot Jason in the knee, crippling him. Jason howled in pain as he sunk to the ground, Leander kicked him in the jaw and with His own spear treatenly hovered over him. “I-I yield” Jason said as they disappeared into a seemingly endless shadow.
They reappeared in the darker part of the forest, in a cave. “Stay here okay? Or ill end you” Leander said then disappeared again holding Helena, Bridal style. On another part of the forest, Leander laid her on a soft valley of black thorn less roses and kissed her on the forehead on impulse before leaving to see his leader, Xeno.
End of chapter 4
After that he started to search for another fighter and had come across a bridge. Oddly enough he sensed someone advancing behind him. A boy with brown eyes and was two heads shorter than him. “And you are?” Leander said looking the boy over slightly. “Depends if you’re a monster in disguise” The boy said coldly. “Listen up buzz boy, I’m no monster of your stupid puny Greek mythology” Leander replied stepping up to him. The boy smirked as about 5 skeletons rose up before him. “Sucks to be you still” The boy said as the skeletons ran at Leander. The gunman’s eye flashed across each skeleton then he drew a ‘Broken Butterfly’ (RE4 handgun for those who don’t know) pistol and shot each one in one horizontal swing taking them all down. “Hm summoning the dead…your hired” Leander said as he noted the boy drawing a spear silently.
“My names Jason, and I’m afraid I’m not hired for anything” Jason twirled the spear one and surged forward in a single trust. Leander read his eyes as he flipped over Jason’s attack. ‘Three strikes and a skeleton wave, huh? A simple yet smart strategy’ Leander thought as he rolled to his feet and holstered his gun. “Bring it on, Jason” He taunted as the Son of Thanatos did his first combo. Leander dodged each one and swung in a round house kick, knocking off the skeletons off the bridge, the gunman drew another gun; this was an old school pirate’s pistol, with only a single shot. “I have the Dead Eye, Jason. I never missed a target, Just yield so I can take you back to my boss” He said. Jason threw the spear at Leander who obviously just side stepped and then shot Jason in the knee, crippling him. Jason howled in pain as he sunk to the ground, Leander kicked him in the jaw and with His own spear treatenly hovered over him. “I-I yield” Jason said as they disappeared into a seemingly endless shadow.
They reappeared in the darker part of the forest, in a cave. “Stay here okay? Or ill end you” Leander said then disappeared again holding Helena, Bridal style. On another part of the forest, Leander laid her on a soft valley of black thorn less roses and kissed her on the forehead on impulse before leaving to see his leader, Xeno.
End of chapter 4
Last edited by Puppetmaster on 11/28/2011, 10:05 pm; edited 2 times in total
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hehehe I like the firey temper part on Helena it fits and the rest is still a-ma-zing!!!
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Hey, this is kind of cool. Do you have room for one more?
- Spoiler:
- Name: Shiro Foxx
Age: 13
Weapon: Two thin Celestial-Bronze swords that slide out from pouches on each arm. They carry monster souls until taken to a permanent object (see ability).
Personality: Shiro and his father, Jack, have always been able to see through the Mist, though for Shiro, it's always perfectly clear who's a monster and who's not. The downside is that Shiro can't read one bit of English. He’s proud of his skills with the piano, so he can be a bit snobbish. He can be cold and doesn’t pay attention to other people’s emotions, so it’s hard to be friends with him. Jack taught him a lot about fighting monsters, and that’s why Shiro knows about his ability. Shiro believes his mother ran away and forgot about them after dropping him at his father’s doorstep, kind of a one-night-stand thing. Jack never learned she was Hecate.
Ability: Can put monster souls into objects, such as weapons and jewels. He usually does this once a day, but is able to do five average monsters in two days. Objects become enhanced, but inexplicable things occur when they’re around. At CHB, he enhanced campers’ weapons. Precious materials, such as gems and Celestial-Bronze, hold souls best. A soul placed in a beach ball, for example, will escape quickly. At his current level, a monster such as Polyphemus would be too big for him.
Appearance:
Eyes: gray with a hint of purple
Hair: black, short and choppy
Height: five feet
Body Type: average
Skin Color: slightly dark
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mmm i think i could fit him in if i put in one more Cannon Charrie. and id love that
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Coolio, thanks!
Okay, here's a few pointers to get you started. (I may find other things to help you on as you continue with the story.)
1. Capitalization. Like in the case of "Three Teens" in the first paragraph, you capitalize words that need not be capitalize. This is somewhat of a common problem, so don't feel too bad about it. Just look over your draft before posting an extra time or two.
2. Paragraphing. When someone new starts speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. Also, you may feel that a paragraph is changing subjects a bit, which means it may be time to start a new paragraph. If your paragraph is around ten sentences, look for a place that would be easy to separate into two or even three paragraphs. Knowing when to make a new paragraph takes practice.
3. Punctuation. Especially within dialogue, you tend to forget punctuation every now and then. Here's an example: "Camo are you done yet we must hurry before Xeno decides to end us." The kid said. That should be something more along the lines of: "Camo, are you done yet? We must hurry before Xeno decides to end us," the kid said.
Just a few things to watch out for. As you continue writing, things should get easier and you'll be more awesome in no time. =} If you need any clarification, don't hesitate to ask!
Okay, here's a few pointers to get you started. (I may find other things to help you on as you continue with the story.)
1. Capitalization. Like in the case of "Three Teens" in the first paragraph, you capitalize words that need not be capitalize. This is somewhat of a common problem, so don't feel too bad about it. Just look over your draft before posting an extra time or two.
2. Paragraphing. When someone new starts speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. Also, you may feel that a paragraph is changing subjects a bit, which means it may be time to start a new paragraph. If your paragraph is around ten sentences, look for a place that would be easy to separate into two or even three paragraphs. Knowing when to make a new paragraph takes practice.
3. Punctuation. Especially within dialogue, you tend to forget punctuation every now and then. Here's an example: "Camo are you done yet we must hurry before Xeno decides to end us." The kid said. That should be something more along the lines of: "Camo, are you done yet? We must hurry before Xeno decides to end us," the kid said.
Just a few things to watch out for. As you continue writing, things should get easier and you'll be more awesome in no time. =} If you need any clarification, don't hesitate to ask!
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