5, and done
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Can she choose who gets affected by her voice power, or do the closest 5 people within 15 feet of her get affected?
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she can choose.
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What is the range of her fireballs, and how long do they last if she doesn't throw them? Are they the same temperature as her black fire?
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10 feet, 30 seconds, and yes, they are.
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Edit that info in, and then you'll be approved.
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edited
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Approved.
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Kayne Dharak (Done)
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Name: Kayne Dharak
Age: 14
Gender: male
Eyes: red wood brown
Hair: curly and brown
Height: 5'9
Body Type: skinn and slightly muscular
Skin Color: slight tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Jeniffer Dharak
Country of Origin: Louisiana
Pets: a cocker spaniel named princess (in memory of her)
Talents: he is a master rapper, can write very fast, and he is a very good shot with his Javelin.
Weapon**: a pencil that can turn into a cb javelin and a microphone that boosts his voice. it can never break and is always sharpened, it also returns inside his note pad if lost. The pencil transforms into a javelin when he presses the eraser with his thumb.
Flaws: over confident, very prideful, is very persistent
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): he can heal minor wounds, cuts as deep as 3 inches, a small bone fracture, and bruises; each seperate thing he can do 6 times a day. when Kayne heals people he does it in the manner of making a soft blue orb of light, it's like a warm sensation washing over the body.
Light- he can manipulate this with his words as in small light rays, a small harmless ball of light in his hand, or making himself glow. he can make himself glow for up to 10 minutes a day and the light is harmless, you can look at it without your eyes hurting.
Life Before CHB*:Kayne grew up with his mom, step-father, and half little brother in Louisiana. Kayne was always a crowd pleaser sort of guy who loved poetry and rapping. kayne was very well known around his neighbor hood because of his astounding pride and ability to free style rap as well as write down the lyrics. kayne did always have a hint of sadness in him though, do to his father not being there with him, mainly because he wanted to impress his father. kayne had been in the park writing a few lyrics in his note pad when a Gorgon had attacked him, which at first had looked like an old lady. kayne had freaked out for s bit until he had accidentally activated the pencil and it transformed into a celestial bronze javelin. Kayne managed to fight off the gorgon in the end and when he explained the story to his mom, she told him who he really was and took him to camp half blood.
RP Example*: Kayne walked down the asphalt pavement of the side walk as he continued his walk home from school. he was a bit tired from his p.e coach working him and the others so hard with 70 modified push ups. Kayne looked down the street as he approached his block to see some of his neighbor hood buddies he had made friends with. they where all by the table of the corner playing cards as usual. kayne approached them" hey guys, gonna cut me in?" kayne asked them as they looked to him. Cory was the first one to speak" hey Kay, whats up with the rapping." Cory asked Kayne, Kayne smirked" it's all good, getting better and better" Kayne spoke.
Any notes about your characters:
Name: Kayne Dharak
Age: 14
Gender: male
Eyes: red wood brown
Hair: curly and brown
Height: 5'9
Body Type: skinn and slightly muscular
Skin Color: slight tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Jeniffer Dharak
Country of Origin: Louisiana
Pets: a cocker spaniel named princess (in memory of her)
Talents: he is a master rapper, can write very fast, and he is a very good shot with his Javelin.
Weapon**: a pencil that can turn into a cb javelin and a microphone that boosts his voice. it can never break and is always sharpened, it also returns inside his note pad if lost. The pencil transforms into a javelin when he presses the eraser with his thumb.
Flaws: over confident, very prideful, is very persistent
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): he can heal minor wounds, cuts as deep as 3 inches, a small bone fracture, and bruises; each seperate thing he can do 6 times a day. when Kayne heals people he does it in the manner of making a soft blue orb of light, it's like a warm sensation washing over the body.
Light- he can manipulate this with his words as in small light rays, a small harmless ball of light in his hand, or making himself glow. he can make himself glow for up to 10 minutes a day and the light is harmless, you can look at it without your eyes hurting.
Life Before CHB*:Kayne grew up with his mom, step-father, and half little brother in Louisiana. Kayne was always a crowd pleaser sort of guy who loved poetry and rapping. kayne was very well known around his neighbor hood because of his astounding pride and ability to free style rap as well as write down the lyrics. kayne did always have a hint of sadness in him though, do to his father not being there with him, mainly because he wanted to impress his father. kayne had been in the park writing a few lyrics in his note pad when a Gorgon had attacked him, which at first had looked like an old lady. kayne had freaked out for s bit until he had accidentally activated the pencil and it transformed into a celestial bronze javelin. Kayne managed to fight off the gorgon in the end and when he explained the story to his mom, she told him who he really was and took him to camp half blood.
RP Example*: Kayne walked down the asphalt pavement of the side walk as he continued his walk home from school. he was a bit tired from his p.e coach working him and the others so hard with 70 modified push ups. Kayne looked down the street as he approached his block to see some of his neighbor hood buddies he had made friends with. they where all by the table of the corner playing cards as usual. kayne approached them" hey guys, gonna cut me in?" kayne asked them as they looked to him. Cory was the first one to speak" hey Kay, whats up with the rapping." Cory asked Kayne, Kayne smirked" it's all good, getting better and better" Kayne spoke.
Any notes about your characters:
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I have to say no to enchanted voice. How bright and long can he glow? I'll also have to say no to the manipulation of sound, and "rally" ability as I do not see how that pertains to Apollo.
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Edited.
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Could you put the brightness in a universal format such as lumens. iPod screen brightness varies with each model.
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Hm, I sm not too familiar with lumination levels really, what is a level that cannot do harm but still be visible?
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Do you mean he could heal six cuts and six bone fractures and six bruises a day, or six total wounds?
10 feet seems quite far for healing someone.
Define "manipulate small things in life." It's quite vague.
10 feet seems quite far for healing someone.
Define "manipulate small things in life." It's quite vague.
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Just the light, so I will edit that in.
And not each, they are all together. So if he heal 3 cuts, 2 fractures, and a bruise then he has reached his limit.
And 5 feet then.
And not each, they are all together. So if he heal 3 cuts, 2 fractures, and a bruise then he has reached his limit.
And 5 feet then.
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Hm. I'd prefer the healing be touching, or close to it, actually.
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Can it still be like an orb of the healing power he just hovers above the wound as it heals it?
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How far away does he have to be to heal someone. I would prefer only a few inches.
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No more than six.
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Looks good to me. Approved.
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