A.Kay.Cee's characters

Name: Templar Kazuya

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Eyes: Obsidian Black

Hair: Auburn

Height: 6'1

Body Type: Mesomorph, Nice athletic, macho built.

Skin Color: Sort of Banana Mania

Roman God Parent: Bellona (Eris)

Mortal Parent: C. Jagdish

Country of Origin: Morocco

Talents: Exceptionally well Horse and chariot rider, Sportsman - Jousting.

Weapon**: Imperial Gold Lance and Long Sword. Heavy armour for him(Chest shield, breast plate, helmet, metal pads etc. covering him from head to toe) and his horse(provided him by Camp Jupiter on request)

Flaws: Poor strategy follower, fit only for battles, makes mess when on a hideout or secret mission, because of Loud voice and bit of kiddish nature (not dumb, like Tyson, the Cyclops- he was all like yaaaay brother and that stuff xD)

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Produces a war cry which causes strife, confusion and tension in enemy(He can use this power once in a day. lasts for 4-5 minutes, whoever is evil, can inflict more damage, or doesn't believe in himself fall trap to this easier, and quicker.) Also, intentionally, can agitate an unruly/orderly demigod/animal, lasts for 10-12 minutes. can do it 2-3 times a day.

Life Before CJ*: Had a good life, nice family, friends until he turned 12. Lately he felt that it was all joke, no one actually cared for him, and not even aknowledged his presence. He still don't have the answers. Is it this important to always pamper your dear ones, why can't they just believe that he is always for them, why does he need to give some proof, some sacrifice, he always pondered.

RP Example*: Not getting any calls from his friend is not that bad for Templar, not even when he had...."Summers, where are you". He came from school and went directly to his next-door friend. "Hello, Are you up there with your boy friend, should I leave, huh? No, He and I have wrestling match today." He went to the floor up, taking stairs, preoccupied with thoughts of the game, when..."Gods of Olympus, what have you done, why is everything in a mess, Is this a burglary?" He takes two steps rightwars to take a look for the side room, he saw, "What the hell is a Giant spider doing in your room Summer" As he put a hand on his shoulder and turned her towards his face, he realized the Spider, Arachnae coiling her into her web. "His boy friend, called him, and he went to help him, meanwhile he was untangling him from the web, The Arachnae took away Summers and took a run for the woods.
"Max, quick, let's hurry."
"No, You go, I just came back from the Death's claw, you want me to do this again!?!"
"You..you bad person, Immma,aaaaaaa...Summer is your girl friend, you just can't..."
"I know, don't tell me this, I like her so much, but, the spider was feeding on her...I just can't, I'm out of my..."
"You just sit here and do crying and [CENSORED], Imma just....go after her"
Takes a leap from the 1st floor, and runs for the woods, tries to catch up, but after 2 hours of running, dead tired, lost in the woods, He just can't!
"My only friend...and she's gone, I can't even, argghh, Damn this strong body, which can't even protect friends from a mere Spider...."
"A mere spider, that was an Arachnae, Spider Queen, Oh boy, good for you that you are courageous, but don't try to be foolish, come with me, I'll take you somehwere safe and we'll start sorting this mess out."
"But, who are you, where am I going"
"First things first, what's your name, and can you walk, I mean stand up, so I can.."
"Kazuya, The name's Templar Kazuya"
"Hello, Kazuya, I'm a..."
"Goat-man? How?"
"I think we should move. You need the camp, and the camp needs you more, everyone of you Demigods are important right now.
"What?"
"What? Just brush off that dirt from your face, don't you wanna Find your..."
"Oh sure, Imma beat that spider"
"Spider? I thought you want the girl" *chuckles* "Let's move, quick, before they set a trail for us, My job's becoming Difficult these days!!"


Any notes about your characters: Perfect for Hand-to-hand combat, prefers being a Cavalry unit. Has been provided with a horse by Camp Jupiter for the same(Kendall has already accepted it)
Upper Human Level Strength (capable of lifting from 300 to 450 lbs), enhanced vitality. Awesome stamina, resistance from conventional diseases (like cough, cold, flu etc.)
Wolves and other ferocious animals usually never hurt him.

If his strength isn't because of some sort of power boost he can use from time to time, I'd suggest you put it in talents or such. The same would go for stamina, and I've no clue why you decided to put resistance to conventional diseases on his form, since anybody can resist those types of diseases but still get one of them from time to time. Can you define what "enhanced vitality" is?

Also, we only allow Imperial Gold for Roman characters.

10 attackers still seems to be pushing it to me -- you have to give a single person a chance to destroy the shield without using powers.

Enhanced vitality is that he is very energetic, *duh*he is not one of those who get 'dead-tired of a whole day long battle' etc.
Okaay, I'll edit both the things.

Enhanced vitality wouldn't be a power, then. So I assume he's using power boosts for his strength, then?

Go ahead, wicked creature, destroy my Demigod character!!
Whatever you say, well, perhaps 5? *chuckles*

No, I tried to explaine things again! Well, it's not any sort of power or so, I added it to the notes to the character :)

Kendall wrote:you have to give a single person a chance to destroy the shield without using powers.

Unfortunately, I'm only doing this so it's fair to other people too.

Okaaay!! But, the actual point of having the shield was to sustain melee attacks.

Yes, I'm aware of that -- but all of the magical shields we've allowed people to use on this site would be overwhelmed by just five people using weapons. You can give that single person a bit of a hard time to break it, like making them hit it with a large hammer or such multiple times, though.

If they're not powers, you should probably stick them in notes or talents.

Okaaay, like 100 pound Large Hammer, used with blunt force, 5 times, by a strong guy? Ohh, I get it!

I did that already! :)

You didn't do so for enhanced vitality.... And if you were saying the strength isn't a power before, then you should move that too.

You'd need to define how strong a "strong guy" is. I suggest you lower the weight of the hammer.

Strength and Vitality are power, related to Goddess Bellona, I know that, so they are up here. And about that conventional disease, that's already in notes, though that's her power too.
From my side, I feel the character is shaped good already.

Strong guy- a guy who can lift upto 350lbs, even more, beats the shield with force 5 times...breaks the shield, okaay?

But if he's just naturally strong, that's not a power -- if he required the use of a power boost every so often to be able to lift 300-450 lbs, then that would be a power, but not if he can just lift 300-450 lbs whenever he was rested and just wanted to. Vitality, also, wouldn't be a power -- it's more like a personality or physical trait, meaning that your character is just used to those kinds of exertions.

Ohh, Ohh You!
Both are physical traits, plus, inherited power.

In my view as an approver, they're not powers, so you should put them somewhere other than Powers.

But, But, that is what Bellona's power are. She is the Goddess of war, sister of Mars.
I've this comic, it clearly says all the powers I had mentioned before.

And may I ask for the name of said comic?

How about 66 lbs? huh?
I can pretty much lift upto 25-30 lbs. So 66 won't be that much.

http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix/bellona.htm
There's the link of the site. Read the powers section, I had everything from here.