Remade Luna Loris -> Maybeth Brown

I wouldn't allow Triton himself to come and talk to Maybeth's mother, so yeah, you should change it.

I Won't write it in the strory but unofficially... So okay, umm I suppose then that a satyr visited her as a messanger from Triton to tell her Maybeth is in danger and she she go straight to the Camp! :D How about it?

I think just having a regular, non-messenger satyr come to talk to her mom would be better.

ooohh... Okay! So, a satyr visit's her mother to warn her they are in big danger and that he should help May go to Camp. Her mother denys and she throws him out yelling. He leaves before Maybeth see's him. [Actually, they meet outside the appartements door, but she doesn't regognise who he might be.]

Yep, that sounds fine.

I suggest you reduce the distance she can let her friends breathe underwater by half and reduce the total number of hours per day she can use her powers by one or two. When she's letting her friends breathe underwater, does that count as part of her 5 hour limit for breathing underwater?

Reducing that hurt...And yep fixed that one!
okay now?

I suggest you make the time she has to rest in between using her powers longer (like, 40 minutes or more) and then I'll approve this unless somebody else finds something else to object to.

Okay, okay! 40 minutes done!

Approved. You have been awarded 1200 drachmas.