2nd character application

Name: Jax Kason
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Black
Height: 5 foot 6
Body Type: Lean
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Lily Kason
Country of Origin: U.S.
Pets: A german shepherd named Garret
Talents: Archery
Weapon**: His bow, given to his mother when he was a baby, for when he was old enough, nicknamed Aigideos
Personality: He has lots of friends at Camp Half-Blood. Although he is very popular in Camp Half Blood, he likes to be alone sometimes. Jax is a prankster, always loving a good laugh. He is always with his bow, and likes to train for the quest he always hopes for.
Flaws: Jax sometimes values a laugh over a life, he is not good at hand to hand combat, and he takes people for granted sometimes.
Powers(must relate to god parent; He can heal anyone.  Jax can use this power 5 times a day,  and must wait 2 hours between the healings. The worst wound he can heal is a large cut on someone's knee,  4 inches by 4 inches, and a sixth of an inch deep.
Life Before CHB*: Jax lived with his mother in Miami, Florida, until he was 9 years old. One day, he came home, and his mother was gone. Jax didn't know what to think, but he was overcome with grief for hos mom.Wanting to find his mom, he had been traveling through all of the U.S. This had happened on his birthday, when he stole a car, and started driving north up to Michigan, where he thought he would find his mother. He was approached by a man with a leather jacket, who told him about a weapons museum (The man was not very suspicions,  until he said "Good Jax", before Jax told the man his name)This man turned out to be a demigod who had turned away from Camp HalfBlood and now tries to find undiscovered half bloods. Eventually, he was discovered by a satyr in Michigan. Now he lives in Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*: Jax dashed through the snow. The hellhounds were drawing closer. He ran as fast as he could, while he drew out his bow. Turning fastly, he shot an arrow straight at the hounds,, but it only slowed them down. No, he can't stop. His mom is waiting. Jax drew his sword, and with all his might, sliced one hound down the middle. He had defeated hellhounds before, but not 10 of them!
Any notes about your characters:

When did Apollo give him his bow? Did he give it to him in person?

How would a boy his age travel around the country by himself? Elaborate more on his life before CHB/

Elaborate more on his personality, please.

Does his bow do anything special or no?

And you still need to add more stuff to personality and life before CHB.

... Was the man in the leather jacket some sort of god? If he is, I'm going to have to ask you to change that. Where did Jax live with his mother?

It was not a god, it was an old demigod who had strayed away from camp half blood, and tries to help kids. He is the son of Hecate, and he had heard of Jax as the "boy who did not know of the gods". And I edited in the thing about the mom

6 feet seems a bit unusual for a 13 year old.
Since you've put nothing under powers, can we assume he doesn't have any? In which case, say "none".
Your Ro example needs to be atleast 5 sentences long.

Okay, fixed it.

Please add in the fact that the man who found him was a demigod.

Ahhh okay I forgot to but just did

Its hard to imagine a 13 year old with no powers and no prior training defeating a gorgon. I'd change that.

Oh I can see how that would be weird so I gave him a power and said thar he was facing more than one gorgon. Is it approved now?

That power wouldn't be allowed. And it's still doubtful that he could defeat a Gorgon, power or no power.

Oh okay yeah with the gorgon Aurora said it was hard to imagine him NOT having training for a gorgon. But ill change the power and I don't know what to do with the gorgon cuz u told me one thing and aurora told me something else. Who do I listen to?

Maybe change the monster... to, like, small hellhounds or something.

Ohhhhhhh good idea I fixed it

That's kind of a given for most Apollo kids, so I wouldn't really consider that a power. Maybe make it something else instead, or elaborate upon it? The powers here are things with limits too, so thats another thing.

Maggie Chase wrote:Oh okay yeah with the gorgon Aurora said it was hard to imagine him NOT having training for a gorgon.

Not exactly my place or anything but I must say this.

I believe you misunderstood Asi. She said that it was hard to imagine your character beating a gorgon on their own without prior training. Not that it was hard to imagine the character not having training for a fight with a gorgon.

Oh well I think I eill keep the hellhounds and I have NO IDEA what the power should be.

... You don't have to have a power, but if you really want to Apollo kids normally have healing powers.

Great idea I just changed it thx so much 4 the idea

How many times a day can Jax use his healing power, and what is the worst wound he can heal? How long does he have to wait in between using his power?

Edited it

Define how large the cut would be -- length, width, depth, and yeah.

Well, define how I would do the depth, please.  Oh and I did long and wide

Same way you did length and width -- ie: a quarter of an inch deep.