Ardelis's characters

Demigod Form:

Name: Ardelis Youngson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Short andDark Brown
Height: five foot eight inches
Body Type: skinny
Skin Color: a walnut brown
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Unknown
Country of Origin: U.S.A
Pets: A pug named Tubby who I've had for about a year now
Talents: I am very creative and strong willed, and I love all of the arts! I play Guitar and keyboard. and I am a novice at archery.
Weapon**: An elm wood bow with silver inlay that was given to me by my adopted father Harold.
Flaws: Lack of patience and and a short temper. At night I tend to get tired and cranky. at night or on a cloudy day I lose about 15% of my energy. I get annoyed very easy and I tend to be annoying myself somtimes
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Heat gives me energy and gives my skin a slight glimmer when I am in the sun
Life Before CHB*: Like any other mortal child my life was normal, full of going to school and doing chores. I found out that I was adopted at the age of twelve and that's when I started seeing things like serpents that no one else saw. On that same day I began To notice that my skin was glowing when I was in the sun. I when Into depression because I knew that something was different about me. That's when I met Theseus he told me that he knew where I belonged and He told me to come here. After trying to run at night for several days I found that I only travled about 20 miles. thats when I noticed that During the day I could run For several hours straight. Then I arrived here.
RP Example*:"Well this is different," I say to no one in particular. "Now how do I find Theseus?" I begin looking around and all I see are cabins that are designed to depict a different god." Where is the Hermes cabin," I say to myself as I wander aimlessly around the camp.
Any notes about your characters:

So.
RP example needs to be five sentences.
You're powers are not powers.

How much energy does Ardelis gain from the sun?

The amount of energy that Ardelis gains increases his stamina from being able to run for an hour straight to a little over two hours running nonstop.

That's too much.

What about a 50% stamina increase instead of 100%?

Still too much.

Yeah that would be okay. Is that okay with you, Kendall?

Awesome so now I wait not my strong suit :|

Demigod Form:

Name: Aeolus Blitz
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: Five Foot Eight Inches
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: Light Tan
God Parent: Triton
Mortal Parent: Unknown
Country of Origin: United State Of America
Pets: None
Talents: I can surf, and am a novice swordsman.
Weapon**: A celestial bronze sword that was disguised as a dolphin keychain I found when digging through my adopted parents attic.
Flaws: My flaws are a short attention span (when I don’t take my medication), being very nosy, and of course beautiful girls. well and to be honest I can be annoying sometimes. and often a little too curious.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): I can talk to dolphins and that’s it.
Life before CHB*: Going from foster home to foster home, all while keeping an eye on my little sister (who I don’t know if she is demigod or not). To finally be adopted when I was eight, and that’s when I found my sword( I didn’t know it was one until I was about sixteen, when I enjoyed breaking things and when I tried to pull the chain from the dolphin keychain it turned into a sword). Then my adopted family and I went on vacation to the West Coast and learned that I could see the pictures in my mind that the dolphins we saw at the aquarium that we went to. I freaked out and ran and ran until I ran into a man who tried to talk me into coming with him somewhere. Of course I ran away from him and then after finding my parents, asked to call my friend Theseus and I told him everything that’s when he told me to go to CHB with him.
RP Example*: “So, when do we get there? Ohhh… we are there. This is so awesome!!!” then I faint due to the excitement. I wake up “where am I… oh yeah camp half blood. How long was I out?” "So Theseus how do I get claimed by my god parent? because waiting is definitly not my strong suit."
Any notes about your characters:

Ummm, wow, how i'm going to fit meeting charries on my travels in my book I have no clue. :scratch:

Oh thanx for bringing me here

Change the parent Poseidon is not allowed

so what about Proteus?

caN'T find the gods list who's Proteus

Check out this site http://www.theoi.com/Pontios/Proteus.html

Theseus No more comenting on forms. Its not your job.

And Who is that the good off? I would suggest using triton who is close to poseidon.

He's an old sea-god who most often tended the herds of poseidon.

hmm, and sorry, just trying to help a friend of mine.

Yeah I did ask for his help and now I know better so it wasn't just his fault.

Approved.

It's 3 flaws, Theseus. Leave this to the admins.

And 25% is better, yes.