break994's characters

Name: gregor deakin
Age:11
Gender:male
Eyes:bluey black
Hair: blond brown
Height:1.56m
Body Type:weak
Skin Colour: pale white
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent:unknown
Country of Origin:England
Pets:1 dog,3 Guinea pigs,1 cat
Talents:computer genius
weapon:Celestial bronze knife,shield called gregorius/Γρηγόρης, celestial bronze sword
Flaws:no friends , shy, weak power,risk saving 1 person instead of the world
Powers:magic fire(25 times a day) ,people do what i say/ control animals(can resist and can use ten times a day and lasts for five minutes) , magic black blasts(10 times a day), magic travel(twice a day),
Life Before CHB*:few friends most left.caring for pets while monsters attacked.followed round by Ben a boy who loved tin cans. turned out he was a saytar.top grades in school but monsters kept attacking so my grades went down when they thought they saw me kill Mrs.Durkam
RP Example*: I spun around my Liberian lurched at mrs durkam then she grabbed me!
Ben came running in "woah woah" he shouted.
he tossed my sword to me and I stabbed Mrs.Durkan a bitter scream of despair came from her.
"The fates were just attacking me Ben what do I do?" I asked.
Before ben could answer bang
Any notes about your characters:
has difraxia(spinal problem) bad temper when moody loves dogs the bigger the better and the blacker the better

You dont have to make a whole new topic when you edit your charactor form, theres a nifty little edit button on the top right hand side of your post.
For your powers: What type of magic can he do? He cannot MAKE people or animals do what he says. You can attempt to be able to control them, but they have to be able to resist.

When you say "Magic fire" Do you mean he can start a fire 50 times a day? If so how large is it?
Did you mean to include the "Can resist and can use once an hour" for the people do what I say also? If so how can they resist and how long can he control them at MOST?
What is a "magic black blast"?
And how far can he magically travel at MOST?

magic fire is like throwing fireballs at monsters and it fits in the palm of your hand , does not kill)
people and animals can resist ,he can do it once an hour , for 5 muites and they resist a bit like how you resist with the river styx.
magical black blast is a darkness blast witch sends monsters essneces back to tartatus.
400 miles at max but can pass out if that far.



kendall i can controll animals and people but can they resist by remembering their memorys.
fire is 50.C
makes them lose their short term memory (yes it will come back)

How hot is the magic fire?

And what do you mean by resist with the River Styx....?

So with his magical black blast, what happens if he does it to a human?

Can people resist losing their memory? Will the memories come back?

How many times a day can he use each of his powers?

Add another flaw into your form.

Approved.

Name: angela dainkins
Age:17
Gender:female
Eyes:grey
Hair:long blonde
Height:2m
Body Type:fit
Skin Color: light tan
God Parent:athena
Mortal Parent:samuel will dainkins
Country of Origin:America
Pets:owl
Talents:gymnast ,stratedgy , logic, popular
Weapon: bronze knife and bow and arrow
Flaws:pride,heats desire,family
Powers: ,control owels
Life Before CHB*:all she can remember at the age of 5 weeks she was brought to a place nearby camp half blood.it is believed a saytar named Roberto brought her and then fled.after 1 day a owl saw her and picked her carrier up and carried her to camp halfblood hill.the owl found food but at the age of six weeks she was then dying.Roberto appeared and decided to finally bring her through the boundrys of camp half blood
RP Example*: angela gazed through her window she was ashamed. by accident she had sent a virus to a chat room . she had covered her tracks so the reciving end could not track her.but Annabeth had taken it seriously she was nagging at angela.one of her moans was "what if they tracked us"
Any notes about your characters:smart,hacker,virus maker,powerful,helpful,calm

for flaws, what do you mean when you say "Heats desire"?
Good fighter and smart is not a power, its a talent.
How can she control owls?

.... where's her name?

angela

I meant you need the form section Character Name on it.

I edited

athenas patron animal = owl so she can contrl
hear desire is shell do anythig to save her love

I know that Athena is connected to owls. Im asking you what YOUR character can make the owls do, how often, how she does it.

well she can commiunacate with 1 as many times as u like
buta grup once an hour

...So by commiunacate do you mean she can simply talk to them? If so does she actually speak outloud or is it through their minds?
and Buta grup once an hour????

In her mind
and a big group once an hour

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So when she has the owls around... she just talks to them? Nothing else?