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    Post by VanessaRoyal 2/10/2013, 2:54 pm

    Name: Vanessa Royal

    Age:218

    Gender: Female

    Eyes: Light grey

    Hair: Straight Light Blond. Her hair was originally black but it changed when she was sick as a child. She keeps her hair medium length

    Height:5'2. She shorter than most of her friends.

    Body Type:Skinny. She has a lot of cleavage. She has very alluring sent so people like her. She spends most her time in the forest. She also has a metal tail with a end that can cut through a lot and she has wings. She prefers not to show them because she doesn't know why she has them.

    Skin Color:Tan but it is somewhat pale.

    God Parent: Persephone
    Mortal Parent: Micheal Royal. He is from Hollywood. He is also a demigod. He is the son of Hades. He works as a retailer. He caught Persephone's eye when he made a mansion in the forest for his family in. He also helps demigods is they pass his way.

    Country of Origin: From Mystic Falls, VA. She lives at Camp Half Blood.

    Pets: A hell-hound named Joshua, but lives with her dad. She also has a Venus-fly trap names Mrs. Cake, who was a experiment but went wrong and grew eyes and can talk normally like a human, she also grew thousands of teeth .

    Talents: She is very flexible. She is also a good dancer and singer. She is also a expert fighter so she also wins in a fight. She is great with any weapon. She can also disappear, from a necklace on her neck that she got from her father, so she can sneak up on people. She can also run fast and she can memorize and figure out any answer and trick.

    Weapon**: A Stygian iron sword. She doesn't use it on demigods or people she knows. So she uses a celestial bronze sword. She also uses knifes.

    Flaws: She cares too much for her family and friends. So she would through herself into fire to protect her friends.
    She also has evil side problem so Hephaestus made her a necklace that keeps her evil self contained, she can have the necklace appear when it is most needed or when she is angry.
    She is also very stubborn, so she sticks up for what she believes in and no is not an answer.

    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She has the powers of all elements. She can also control darkness. She can also change peoples moods from angry to calm. She can also shadow travel so she can go to a place far away in a matter of seconds. She can also talk and summon the dead.

    Life Before CHB*: Vanessa has always known she was a demigod. She grew up in the underworld and Camp with her twin brother Nick Royal. She was always built for war, so she trained most of her life. Then she lived with her dad and she met a guy names Derek Conner, son of Athena, but in a war he died by her blade. She was guilty and she was brought back to camp by Apollo. She trained harder to cover up the pain but she soon felt happy again and she met three demigods that became her best friends.

    RP Example*: " Mother where are we going" Vanessa asked as her mother grabbed Vanessa's bag. Persephone looks at her and says " Vanessa you have showed that you area ready and do you remember what I said when you we 5". " Yes mother but what about brother and father". Before she answered Nick grabbed her hand and said "We will see camp again remember." Vanessa looks up and she see camp and she knows things will be different for ever.

    Any notes about your characters: Vanessa was given a flower necklace from her brother to protect no matter what. It always kept her close to her family, but it powerless. She also was given her the necklace that kept her evil power under control.[url][/url]
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    Post by Jordan 2/10/2013, 3:36 pm

    Change her age. She can't be 200 years old.

    Her dad cannot be a demigod, especially a child of Hades.

    How big is the hell hound? Can it shadow travel?
    No to the Venus flytrap. She could have a normal one, but not a mutated one.

    I'm sensing a Mary-Sue. A overly perfect character. It appears she's good at everything. Maybe take away a few of her talents. And no to the necklace that lets her disappear.

    She can have an evil side, but not a necklace from Hephaestus, she can't have any gifts from any god.

    Persephone is the goddess of Spring and flowers. NONE of the powers you included relate to her. They must relate to the god parent. Remove those and add one based on spring/flowers.

    No. She could not have grown up in the Underworld, remove that. She could not have met Apollo, or any god for that matter, remove that.

    Change your RP example, she can't have contact with any god or goddess before camp, or even during.

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