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    Post by Nathan2903 9/27/2013, 11:06 pm

    Name: Griffin Young
    Age: 10
    Gender: Male
    Eyes: Green
    Hair: Sandy Blond
    Height: 4,5
    Body Type: Thin, Muscular
    Skin Color: pale
    Roman God Parent: Vulcan (Is Unclaimed right now.)
    Mortal Parent: Julie Young
    Country of Origin: USA
    Talents: Can build Rapidly fast and is sort of fast
    Weapon**: two elven daggers that has green liquid poison able to give someone a feaver that makes you feel awful(Takes 3 minutes to start up.) You wanna throw up and roll over the ground sobbing. (Takes 5 hours to kill.) How much poison does he have? He has 2 ounces of poison.(keeps nine bottles 2 ounces in each, in his bunker. When he was in a chariot with the two demigods they told him to takes these and gave him two poison daggers named Zilius. The poison goes into the tip of the blade to eject it . And a crossbow (both imperial gold)
    Flaws: has Dyslexia and ADHD is afraid of heights. Also has a hard time hearing and is scared of hell hounds also doesn't have a good memory and gets lost in conversations about metal and bronze.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can make fire when ever angered. It goes up to 402 Fahrenheit. goes on for about 6 minutes. and he is able to make duel fire balls in his hands but that will drain his power and the next 2 hours he will have to charge it up. he can do it 5 times a day the normal size is 8 inches and if he doesn't throw the fire balls they get bigger to the size of a vase that's about 1,11 and it will explode in his hand.
    Personality: Shy, Kind, Creative and Funny. Also he loves making things and likes getting dirty, plenty dirty.
    Life Before CJ*: Griffin wasn't a so called... "Popular" with no friends at a military camp. Griffin Got in plenty of fights but one night the math teacher locked Griffin in his bunker room. With a Crazy lizard thing as his math teacher suddenly became a gorgon. Griffin tried with all of it's might to defeat it but it wouldn't work. Griffin was so close to perishing when all of sudden the door burst open with two demigods holding Imperial Gold  swords they killed the gorgon and they looked at Griffin and him to come with them. Now. But as they left Griffin noticed the two Demigods had a tattoo on their arm.
    RP Example*: Griffin had lost his shoes and running fast through the woods ignoring the prickles of the trees. He could hear the howl of the Hell hounds getting closer. the crashed chariot with the two dead demigods in it. Griffin was losing balance with the wooden stake in his ribs. But he kept running eventually he saw a tunnel. Griffin had no choice but to run through it the lights became torches and a blinding light knocked him out.
    Any notes about your characters: He is very shy but bold and brave.


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    Post by Jules 9/28/2013, 12:49 am

    A gorgon wouldnt be killed be a peice of glass. Monsters only disintegreate due to metals such as celestial bronze, inperial gold and stygian iron. Sincw your demigod is roman, his weapons need to be imperial gold.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 7:09 am

    Add two more flaws, since dyslexia and ADHD are standard demigod flaws.

    How many times a day can your character control fire, and for how long each time? What's the most powerful thing he can do with it, and in degrees Fahrenheit/Celsius how hot is his fire?
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 10:52 am

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 12:52 pm

    You need a set limit per day, and 15 minutes per time is probably going to be too much. You also still need to tell me the most powerful thing he can do with fire.

    ... Why does he have "elven" weapons?

    Is your character 4 feet and 5 inches tall?
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 5:21 pm

    Yes he is 4 feet and 5 inches tall. And I edited it
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 5:26 pm

    ... Burning people's clothes can happen with any type of fire, so you should choose something else for his most powerful fire attack. What can he do with the fire? Are you saying your character can only use his fire power once every three days?

    May I ask why his weapons are of an elven design? What do they look like?

    I think you forgot a personality section, too; we recently added it to the forms but might have accidentally forgotten to put it on the roman one.
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 6:00 pm

    Oh, Ok and I will try my best to edit it and I'll add in the personality traits. Their elven design because it's one of the best light weapons. they are golden and like a saw on the top and has a pointy top and the handle is wrapped in leather. It is about 6 inches tall and has a green glow on it. The glow is poison.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 6:09 pm

    How bad is the poison? Is it liquid or what? Are these elven weapons from Skyrim, Lord of the Rings, or etc?
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 6:20 pm

    I don't know the Idea kind of came to me from skyrim. and it is a liquid carved into the daggers and able to give someone something worse then cancer.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 6:23 pm

    ... I don't think that's possible? And that strong of a poison would never be allowed.

    How large are the fireballs and how long do they last if he doesn't throw them -- just 6 minutes? You need to edit in how many times a day he can use his power.
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 6:26 pm

    Ok, And I'll change the poison to something like a feaver.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 6:27 pm

    How long would it take to start to affect the person? I suppose it's liquid now and that there is an antidote?
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 6:31 pm

    It will take 3 minutes and the only antidote is a dragon's heart.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 6:35 pm

    ... That's an odd antidote. You'll need to make it much easier to get an antidote. Are you going to stick with the fever effect?

    You still need to define the fireball size.
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 6:38 pm

    Ok I was trying to think of something tricky but guess not.... How about hell hound blood?
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 7:27 pm

    Define how big the vase would be for the fireball.

    Also, how much blood would be required?
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 7:34 pm

    a potion sized amount. And edited the fire ball.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 7:35 pm

    ... Potions vary in size, my friend.

    You should also edit in stuff about the poison to his weapons, just saying.

    That vase is too big, you'll need to tone it down by a lot.
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 7:42 pm

    Sorry about that,
    First Question: Medium sized potion
    Second Question: Right away
    Third Question: Got it
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 7:42 pm

    Define "medium-sized" (ie: 10 ounces). You really need to specify when I ask you for sizes.
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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 7:44 pm

    Ok, about 7 ounces of blood.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 7:53 pm

    How bad is the fever and where does your character get the poison from? How long would it take the poison to kill? Edit in the antidote. Are there any other antidotes?

    What's the normal size for a fireball?

    Elaborate more on his personality.

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    Post by Nathan2903 9/28/2013, 8:01 pm

    The poison will take 10 minutes to kill through the minutes it gets worse like your slowly getting eaten alive from the inside. The poison came with the daggers that he got. No, There are not any other antidotes.
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    Post by Kendall 9/28/2013, 8:04 pm

    So how much poison does he have and how did the nymph get it? We don't allow poisons that kill in under 4 hours. Again, how bad is the fever?

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