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The new half-blood at Camp jupiter
Nathan2903
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- Post n°26
Re: The new half-blood at Camp jupiter
Ok change it to 5 hours to kill them. The feaver feels like you wanna throw up and you get a headache like crazy combined together getting even more worse every minute. And the nymph got it from a serpent stone that a satyr gave her from the laybrynth.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°27
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I was asking for the temperature of the fever... and I don't think I'd allow that serpent stone.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°28
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Ok, Sorry
It starts out as 90% then gets up to 100% then 105% and finally 115% but that's only at the last 5 minutes.
It starts out as 90% then gets up to 100% then 105% and finally 115% but that's only at the last 5 minutes.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°29
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... What do you mean? 90% of what, the original body temperature of the victim?
Nathan2903
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- Post n°30
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I know you start out normal, But then you feel sicker by the minute. It's not an dead on poison thing.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°31
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Not a dead on what?
Nathan2903
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- Post n°32
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I meant if someone gets sliced by the
daggers they don't get it straight away. It takes 3 minutes to start up.
daggers they don't get it straight away. It takes 3 minutes to start up.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°33
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Edit that into the form. I don't think you answered my question about how the nymph got the poison in the first place or how much he has total.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°34
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Ok. Am I finally done? :D
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°35
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Unfortunately not. "Enough to last 43 weeks" isn't very specific.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°36
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Ok I'll edit it.
Edited. Now am I done? :D
Edited. Now am I done? :D
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°37
Re: The new half-blood at Camp jupiter
Battalions range in size; I would prefer you give us an amount in, say, ounces or quarts. Does he just thinly coat the poison onto the weapons?
(You're almost done unless somebody else hops in, I promise.)
(You're almost done unless somebody else hops in, I promise.)
Nathan2903
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- Post n°38
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Ok. Thanks.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°39
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Edited it.
What's next?
What's next?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°40
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Please don't double-post.
Since this is a Roman demigod, Hecate would be Trivia.... did Trivia bless the weapons or something?
Since this is a Roman demigod, Hecate would be Trivia.... did Trivia bless the weapons or something?
Nathan2903
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- Post n°41
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Sorry so used to Greek gods. I'll change it to Trivia. And yes, you have to touch the top of the boarder that blocks the poison from falling out then it will dissolve. put the poison in and touch the sides of the dagger the boarder comes back on.
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Yes I'm done! :D ( I think.) Am I done?
Please Respond >.<
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°42
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So... can you explain how Trivia got to the weapons? Can anybody take the poison in or out of the weapons? Did the nymph just randomly give him a bunch of jugs full of poison, then?
Nathan2903
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- Post n°43
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No, He gets the poison jugs from around the camp and outside the camp. It's Rare for him to run out sense he already has 9 in his back pack. I'll edit it.
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- Post n°44
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(a nymph gave them to him because he stole a dragon tooth from a fury. The nymph got it from a tribe of Cyclops she took it from the pouch of one that had a poison tooth in it before it turned to dust. < This doesnt make any sense. How exactly would an untrained ten year old demigod steal something from a fury? And more importanly, why? Why would a fury even have a dragon tooth and why would a nymph reward him because of that..It just doesnt make any sense. Come up with a more convincing back story for his weapon.
Also, I wont allow Trivia to have helped him as demigods are not supposed to have had any contact with gods prior to camp.
Dyslexia and ADHD are standard demigod flaws, being scared of hellhounds is also a fairly..normal thing, I wouldnt consider it to be a specific flaw. Add two more flaws.
Also, I wont allow Trivia to have helped him as demigods are not supposed to have had any contact with gods prior to camp.
Dyslexia and ADHD are standard demigod flaws, being scared of hellhounds is also a fairly..normal thing, I wouldnt consider it to be a specific flaw. Add two more flaws.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°45
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Changed it....
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°46
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... So, where specifically does he get the poison and what is it made of? And 9 jugs full of liquid is going to end up being pretty heavy.
Nathan2903
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- Post n°47
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Ok, he specifically gets the poison from Trivia kids. He keeps the poison jugs in his bunker.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°48
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Last questions, I hope: How much poison does your character's weapons hold at once? How much poison would it take in order to feel the full effects?
Nathan2903
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- Post n°49
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It holds 15 courts at a time. To feel the full effects you have to have the dagger thrust in your gut.
I'm done now right? :D
I'm done now right? :D
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°50
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... 15 quarts? That's quite a lot, I don't think it would be able to hold that much.
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