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    Kendall
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    Post by Kendall 10/9/2013, 2:54 pm

    I sort of doubt your character is 3'10"....

    Also, I wouldn't allow your character to be related to Olivia Benson.

    Add more to her personality.

    If she has bad aim, why is she good at archery?
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    Post by Kendall 10/10/2013, 12:17 pm

    Why is your character's last name still Benson if her mother's is Simpson?

    Invisibility isn't allowed.

    How did she find camp, exactly, besides wandering around a lot?

    For her notes, do you mean she WANTS to be an SVU detective like her mom?
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    Post by Kendall 10/10/2013, 12:26 pm

    That power also wouldn't be allowed, and the mother's name is too close to Olivia Benson the detective -- try changing it more.
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